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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 26, 2007 16:14:15 GMT -5
~This Is A Fan Fiction about The Dark Jedi Order that i created~
Chapter One Gone From The Jedi Forever,Creation Of The Dark Jedi Order
Sora Skywalker left the ranks of the Jedi for the last time.
Sora was on alaris prime training in the old Jedi arts force powers and light saber styles. a couple days later sora decided to turn to the dark side. The Jedi where no longer interesting to him he flew back o the Jedi temple and announced the news. Leaving the Jedi temple with just his ETA-2 and his light saber.
for several months he flew around from planet to planet Finlay going to lord sidious and not being accepted by the sith. Sora flew around for a longer time going to his home planet for awhile he got to thinking he could create the dark Jedi order. Several months of doing nothing but building a temple of the dark Jedi order.
Sora started getting students rapidly starting there training the dark jedi order was going up and where ready to help the sith destroy the jedi order. Sora was ready to get revenge on all the jedi that treated him wrong and thought they where all power full he was ready.
chapter end
(if it seems bad i couldn't think of much XD)
(and for it being small the next chap will be longer if i can think of more to it)
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Post by Darth Valrum on Mar 26, 2007 16:26:33 GMT -5
Hmmm i like it. But it seemed kinda thin.
Is that just your ideas? or is that the first chapter?
But i like it, a Dark Jedi Order. perhaps mention why he wanted to be a sith, ok the jedi were boring but why not quit it all together? why sith? And why would he tell the jedi? i think it would be cooler if the jedi found out for themselves when he marches his army agenst the jedi temple... proving sidious wrong, sidious offers him to be a sith apprentice for him, he rejects, and kills sidious to rule the empire, changeing it as he sees fit.
i dono... just some ideas.
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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 26, 2007 16:30:41 GMT -5
thats was the first chapter couldn't think of much but the next chaper will be hopefully longer and better and i will think of some better idea's
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Post by Darth Valrum on Mar 26, 2007 20:47:27 GMT -5
Well again, i do look forward to reading it.
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Post by Shadowlynx on Mar 26, 2007 22:20:28 GMT -5
I look foward to reading and becoming apart of The Dark Jedi Order.
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Post by Darth Valrum on Mar 27, 2007 14:51:02 GMT -5
I look foward to reading and becoming apart of The Dark Jedi Order. Is there a Dark Jedi Order?
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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 27, 2007 15:57:13 GMT -5
yes i created it recently
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Post by Darth Valrum on Mar 28, 2007 12:50:09 GMT -5
Ahh, sounds like a good one. Id like to be in it, but Revan isnt really a dark jedi, more of a Sith Lord.
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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 28, 2007 21:58:17 GMT -5
the dark jedi are allies to the sith and the dark jedi masters are sorta like sithlords lol
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Post by Darth Valrum on Mar 28, 2007 22:21:02 GMT -5
the dark jedi are allies to the sith and the dark jedi masters are sorta like sithlords lol So why dont they just become SITH?
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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 28, 2007 22:44:44 GMT -5
cause im not accepted into the sith by lord sidious
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Post by Darth Valrum on Mar 29, 2007 0:09:33 GMT -5
Well then why would they be allies?
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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 29, 2007 0:17:40 GMT -5
well cause i wanna help the sith lord sidious is one person not the whole sith order.
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Post by Shadowlynx on Mar 29, 2007 0:40:05 GMT -5
Wow, it sounds good Master Sora. One thing should of added your students names to your story, it would make it more interesting. Just a thought
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Post by Sora Skywalker on Mar 29, 2007 0:42:57 GMT -5
In the next chapter my Apprentice
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