Aeon Kensho™
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Oct 5, 2008 21:49:40 GMT -5
{OOC-In the future when you use a Force power without training for the first time you might want to write a bit of trial and error. Or perhaps state that you had read about it and attempted it first. In the future perhaps you should write a bit of error or at least it being a little rough around the edges. Do not change what you wrote, Just keep this in mind for the future. It is a bad habit to get into. Powers must be RPed out. So if you were to wing it, It is more believable that you might fail and have to improvise or continue to try it until you get it.}
(Walking to the edge of the balcony my robes touch the ground gracefully as I come to a stop looking to the senate district. looking further past the senate district the smog the works district fills the Coruscant sky. Creating an eerie ambiance the glow of the night sky refracts back of the smog.)
(Turning my robes furl out tot he side. Walking back in to my private chambers I take my usual spot on my meditation seat. Leaning over I rub my chin with my left hand, Extending my right arm out my sleeve hangs touching the floor. My blue index and middle fingers reach out of the large brown sleeve.)
(Hitting the signal for Vax to make contact I sit waiting for his report on his mission. Having already attained information from the guard Vax's location could be vital in case he run into trouble.
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Vax Kote™
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Post by Vax Kote™ on Oct 5, 2008 23:14:11 GMT -5
ooc- i'll be sure to add a little more of a trial and error next time I post with the force powers. thanks for telling me Aeon.
-The sun began to set; darkness was falling, it could be seen in the clear window of the taxi cab. It was not hard to notice. The sunset on the horizon was beautiful. Streams of clouds filled through the sky with a hint of orange, blue, and purple colors making it a good sunset. However, with darkness falling onto the city-planet Vax knew that more trouble was brewing. City thugs, criminals, assassins, smugglers, bounty hunters....you name it and they where out. Watching ones back was the name of the game.-
-From a still position in the cab Vax sat meditating ina cross-legged station. Both hands where on his knees; his eyes remained closed shut. His black hood was lowered down revealing a clone face. Silent sounds of breathing where heard along with the sounds of the taxi cab driving through the city buildings. Vax felt calm and focused; he was trying to break a connection through to where this bounty hunter took Senator Aeton until the buzzing sound of his communicator broke the silence.-
-Vax opened his eyes and looked down bringing out a holo communicator. He held up the communicator in the palm of his hand and pressed the activation button. A blue figure flickered to life....it was Master Aeon in a sitting down position. Vax opened his mouth then closed taking a small breath of air then exhaling; calming himself.-
"He must of found out about the senator."
-Finally from the moments of silence Vax broke through speaking in a calm voice to his master. He had a little nervousness in his voice but remained focused.-
[glow=purple,4,000]"Master Aeon......I....uhhhh.....for what reason do you call me Master?[/glow]
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Aeon Kensho™
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Oct 6, 2008 22:37:46 GMT -5
(As the Holograms flickers to life the worry on Vax's face is apparent. Listening to the lack of report I hear Vax's words fall to silence. Raising my hand my sleeve hangs as I point to Vax.)
[glow=orange,2,300]"Do not waste time Vax. Time is of the essence. I can see right through you. This is a matter of importance, Treat it accordingly. You better hold yourself with more reserve when you make a report to me. Don't make me regret my decision to assign you to this mission my apprentice."[/glow]
[glow=orange,2,300]"Remember that more is at stake then you realize. Not only does the senator's life weigh on your shoulders, So too does the fate of Corellia. Now do not waste any more of my precious time and give me your report."[/glow]
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Vax Kote™
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Post by Vax Kote™ on Oct 6, 2008 23:54:43 GMT -5
-Vax gave a small be modest nod to Master Aeon.-
[glow=purple,4,000]"Yes master my apologies."[/glow] -He took a small breath of air before he spoke to his master. Because of what happened with the senator Vax knew well that master Aeon had found out and there was no regret in lieing about the senator. It could be seen as bright as day of what happened to the senator within the senate appartment. Smoke billowed from the building which could be seen from the jedi temple. However, there was also the guards that kept the senate appartments safe which could result in one of them telling Master Aeon of the situation. But regardless Aeon stood before him in a hologram and now it was the time to report.-
[glow=purple,4,000]"Master the senator was attacked by a mandalorian bounty hunter and took him to the out skirts of Coruscant just beyond the works where Master Uriel had traveled to. I have found information that the bounty hunter goes by the name of Net'ra Starkiller and he has taken the senator to a crime lord named Corran Darus."[/glow] [glow=purple,4,000]"The senator is indeed my responsibility Master; I am obligated to save the senator and return to a safer place until Jedi Uriel returns."[/glow]
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Oct 7, 2008 0:51:10 GMT -5
[glow=orange,2,300]"That is for me to determine. Uriel has not made a report in quite some time. He may have followed a lead, Perhaps even off planet. Keep your mind clear, Stop trying to think your way out of this. Let go, and trust your feelings. Remain centered and balanced. Feel don't think. Be mindful of the living Force young one."[/glow]
[glow=orange,2,300]"Follow the lead to the works district you have uncovered. But do it differently. Let the Force guide you. Once you let go of thought, and your mind is clear and focused you will begin to hear the will of the Force. Remember your training and may the Force be with you Vax."[/glow]
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Post by Vax Kote™ on Oct 12, 2008 16:02:10 GMT -5
ooc- sorry it took me a while to make a response I cam down with a bug and could not get online for the entire week because I had a serious head ache, a bad stomach ache, and I was throwing up on the last day of sickness so it gave me less of a chance to actually come on. I am feeling a little better now but still have some side effects to the sickness like a stuffy nose and flem in my throat. But I am back and ready to continue.
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-Vax gave a nod to Master Aeon after hearing him speak. The lead to the works district was where Jedi Uriel was at and seeing that a report had not been made in a while by him Vax felt that his jedi brother could be in serious trouble. But that mission was left aside for now unless Master Aeon spoke otherwise of going to find Uriel. His mission objective was to find Senator Aeton and return to the jedi temple until Uriel had gotten some info for Corellia.-
[glow=purple,4,000]"Yes master; I shall send report when I get more information. And may the force be with you as well master."[/glow] -Vax gave a small head bow before he turned off the holopad and hide it in his jedi turnic that was covered up by his robes. He then would return to his normal meditative stance. His eyes closed and his hands on his knees. His breathing remained calm and his mind clear of all past experiences and missions. He was only focused on his mission which kept him focused and centered. He could feel the taxi driver and many other people around him; hearing their heart-beats and the small breaths of air they where taking. Some where heavy and some where light. The travel to the works district was long but well worth the fact that Vax was resting and allowing the force to flow around him and through him with no distractions at all.-
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