Where it began~Searching for the Slicer~

[Darth Angelus™]

(My swoop darted downward to the Undercity, I weaved past many people and shuttles. I darted left following my GPS scanner, I had a feeling that this was not going to be a walk in the park).

"Master I have arrived in the Undercity and I'll take the rest of the way by foot. Ronok out"

(I hopped off my swoop and walked down the deserted road. I could sense gang members and bounty hunters down here, close by. I was correct, a thug came from behond me and attempted to steal my lightsaber without me noticing).

"Touch it, and you lose your arms. Steal it, and I'll rip you apart"

(The thug backed off as did the others that crowded me. They made a path letting me pass by. I kept my head up and walked by them, I looked back as they were looking at my swoop).

"Same goes for that swoop. But this time you touch it you die, get on it you die slowly"

(I half smiled showing a more evil and sinister look upon my face. I continued down the path, looking in gap sensing thugs, and bounty hunters. I reached the large door, I was stopped by a guard).

"Halt! What is you buisness here civilian?"

"I am Jedi Master Ronok Vang, I am here to get beyond that door"

"Forgive my rudeness sir! I didn't mean anything by it"

(I nodded at him accepting his apology, he opened the door and I walked on alone into the depths of the Undercity).

[Cadeus]

:My tartan cruiser landed on a dock a short distance away from the gates to the under city. I placed my hood over my head and activated the catwalk and slowly walked down. Once I had left, it had retracted.:


:As I walked through the large crowd, people kept asking me for credits and other things. I brushed their existence aside, continuing to the door. A pair of armed guards stopped me. They pointed their blasters.:

Don't move!

:I used the force to crush their guns in their hands as I walked right past them, leaving them dumbfounded behind me. I pressed a button that activated the elevator to the under city. I removed a few books on Djem So and began studying.:


Form five, way of the Krayt Dragon, perseverance form.


:I continued studying until the elevator would come to the bottom of the under city.:

[Darth Angelus™]

(I reached a couple of gaurds who saw froze and didn't move. They had obviously just encountered a force user. I removed my hood and placed my hand on their shoulders).

"I will not hurt you my friends"

(I noticed the destoyed blasters, using the force I lifted then into the air. I examined the pieces, I looked back at the gaurds and frowned).

"Who did this to your weapons?"

"A young man sir. He had red hair, and orange eyes"

(I smiled, the Sith from Mustafar was here. I shook my head and looked back at them).

"Have no fear, he won't hurt you"

(I let the blaster go, watching as it smashed onto the ground. It was weird that he was here now. I woner why).

(I entered the left and went down into the abyss that continued. After it stopped I exited and made my way to the slicers location. I felt a strong darkside presense nearby. I wonder if he joined the darkside fully. If so then I will have to kill him. But I will mourn his death).

[Cadeus]

:I stood in the middle of the street the Jedi was on. I trembled with fury at what allowing him to have the information on Juyo caused me. He would pay like everyone else who caused him pain. I pointed at him.:

Do you have any idea how much I suffered because I let you have that holocron!?


:He might be a jedi master but the dark side was my ally in this fight. I already could feel it strengthening my muscles and being prepared to battle.:

I suffered more than you can possibly imagine because I helped you. Give me the holocron.

[Darth Angelus™]

(I took a step forward, I was not afraid of him. Using the force I brought my lightsaber hilt to my hand).

"I cannot give you the holocron"

(I acivated a blue blade, I span the lightsaber around me, and stopped in a Ataru stance. My eyes were focused on him, and only him).

"I take no pleasure in doing this!"

(I ran at him using the force charging at great speed. I slashed horizontally at him stomach, After that I double backed and attempted to slice him in two vertically. Two strong and deadly quick attacks, each with great strength and accuracy).

[Cadeus]

:I activated my saber and gracefully parried the strike by hitting it from the side it was swinging from. I then sidestepped away from his second strike. I removed my robe and the horrible cuts and burns from the Sith's lightsaber were visible through my inner tunic.:

So what? Your going to kill me? You would be doing me a favor most likely.

:I then flourished my light saber, sending two lightning fast cuts that are twice as fast as they were on mustafar at least. I then thrust my saber towards the center of his chest.:

You will not take pleasure in this? I have not heard a more obvious lie. You liar! You said no harm would come, and you know what happened? I nearly lost my arms!

:I screamed as I stepped backwards, twirling my saber rapidly around me.:

[Darth Angelus™]

(I fipped over his head narrowly missing his blade. If I had not jumped I would've been killed. But not today, Not now, not for a while).

"I am sorry I failed you. I truly am. But I must correct my mistake"

(I sent out a powerful Force Repulse, and immediately dashed to him and thrusted my saber at his chest, quicker than his attacks. I then brought my saber up hoping to collect his jaw with my blade).

[Cadeus]

:Instead of fighting against the Force Repulse I allowed his attack to start my flight before using the force to go farther, thus avoiding his light saber attacks. I landed gracefully before turning back to face him.:

I don't want to kill you! All I want is the holocron, I learned that a Sith on Korriban was the one who ordered my family's death.

Then again, you don't care.

Nobody does!!

:With the last two words I said I released all my anger, rage and pain into a powerful Force Scream that sent the people around us in the under city flying, glass was broken and scattered around us.:

[Darth Angelus™]

(I was sent flying for only a minute. I flipped and walked back to the boy. I could sense his pain, and lust for revenge. It hurt me to see one like him).

"Don't let the darkside control you!"

(I deactivated my lightsaber, and clipped it to my belt. I have other tricks up my sleeve. I waited for him, he would make his move, and move would decide the outcome of this fight).

[Aeon Kensho™]

{{Aeon Kensho}}
(Sitting in my chambers still yet working on discovering the knowledge that would help us decode Juyo. A flash of a button, i use the Force to open the channel.)

"Master I have arrived in the Undercity and I'll take the rest of the way by foot. Ronok out"

(Listening I hear the report. Sensing a disturbance in the Force I rub my chin. Confident that Master Vang would make contact if he needed anything. He was very capable on handling himself.)

{OOC-Ok right off the bat I am not too happy with the beginning of the thread. Both of you are being to vague and rushing into it. You need to learn to have a little more fun with it. Short posts in fine when in combat with another. Both of you are better than this and I know it. Truly work to make it more cannon. You locate the Jedi immediately?

Ronok's original post is just very lack luster. Get a photo to help with visualizations for starters. Especially when the writing in vague as some of this. Cadeus I realize you might be rusty but write your attacks with more detail. Ronok I expect you to lead by example, So when you start with a lacking post you set the bar too low. Realized Ronok as a Master I expect you to lead by example and teach others. Not trying to be rude, Just doing my job! You are both better than you are letting off. Give us a great story and duel! ;D )

[Cadeus]

OOC: I am inspired at the moment.



:I walk forwards, in a Makashi stance, slowly, gracefully, every step as perfect as a dance. In the very back of my mind I did not want to kill him, but for the most part I was determined to take the holocron, no matter the cost. He would cut me apart if I dropped my guard for even a second.:

Don't play mind games with me Jedi. You want me dead like everyone else.

:I settled down into a defensive Makashi stance, my orange eyes glared into his. The people around us were either running away or watching with looks of terror upon their faces. I thought for a few moments, the Jedi Master Qui Gon Jinn was defeated by Darth Maul because of the lack of room to preform the techniques of his preferred style and because how tired he was from performing Ataru. A plan began to appear in my brain.:

:I sent a quick blast for Force Chain Lightning towards the crowd, striking three people for a second. I allowed them to run away, hoping that the sight of their momentary pain would drive the jedi to attack me.:

[Darth Angelus™]

(Sensing force quickly moving in him, I rapidly bast past him and stand between the Sith and the crowd. Lightning erupted from his hands, placingh my lightsaber at the right angle I was able to let the blade do the work for me and deflect it back).

"I don't wish you dead! I am here to preserve life in everyway. You destroy life and sap the pain and suffering to increase your power to do what? Kill more innocent people!"

(I unleashed the lightning and sent it toward him in a light blue wave that spread across, and only got bigger by the second).

[Cadeus]

:My orange eyes burned with fury at his statement, but I never once left my stance as I deflected the lightning with my light saber, I used the force to draw the lightning into the blade and die off. I shifted my stance so that my guard was facing towards him, my plan was working, he was going to tire soon.:

Know this Jedi. I have not yet killed once. Hurt maybe, but I do not kill if I can help it.

[Darth Angelus™]

(With my blade still deactivated, I still stood firm, I was using a trick that I had up my sleeve. I mixed Ataru and Soresu together, this is a lethal combination of forms, I picked these from the archives before I left. Obi wan Kenobi used them both together).

"Then join the Jedi! Don't remain loyal to something you can't do! The Jedi don't kill unless they absolutely have to!"

(In an instant, I force dashed to him and activated my lightsaber, and slashed at his gut then flipped over him and thrusted at his chest).

[Cadeus]

:As he swung his lightsaber, at my stomach, a sai tok? So uncivilized. I parried the strike with a flick of my wrist, I struck his light in the saber direction it was swinging as I stepped just slightly backwards. He was jumping over me less than a second later. I spun my body and I ended up behind him as he thrust his saber where my chest once was, as his movement ended I sent a quick cut to the back of his shin before stepping backwards.:


If it is obvious I am not going to kill anyone here then why use a Sai Tok? Isn't that frowned upon by the Jedi?