Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Apr 16, 2008 14:32:21 GMT -5
Peluge this chapter falls after the resurrection story and Shivilow will go after a traitor in her eyes and this will be a great read.
Shivilow has been on Korriban for three months after the fight she had with a bounty hunter by the name of Cesar Fett.This bounty hunter came to find her to collect the huge bounty on her head. The current bounty is as follows. Three hundred republic credits for her many counts on her they are 45 counts of slavery, 185 counts of murder, 2 counts of impersonating a jedi, and 2 counts of high treason. Of all of these crimes that she has committed she has no remorse or second thought on all of them to her she believes they had what was coming to them. Just as she was walking towards her ship she then began to notice another ship touching down right besides hers. Once the hatchet bay doors open a woman walked out of it she had pure white robes on, so shivilow knew at once that she was a Jedi knight. She finally got a glimpse of her face this Jedi had blue eyes, blond hair, and a fair complection.
This Jedi knew Shivilow for they used to be best friends back when they where training in the ways of the sith.Her name at the last time they where siths together was Darth Rayvitous a name that was supposed to be feared by all who stood in their way. The last time they saw one another was the night before shivilow was to join the Phoenix order of the sith.Word got to shivilow that two years after the night that they had a huge fight that she joined the Jedi order. She in fact joined the order the same exact order that, not only killed her mother, but her only true love Jacen Skywalker. Rayvitous betrayed the blood oath that she made with shivilow to never turn their backs on the sith.Raven is the name to which she goes by now just seeing her made Shivilow’s blood boil with hatred.
“What are you doing here Jedi!”Shivilow screamed these words as her face had turn into a demonic look.
”My old friend Shivilow where’s you love and compassion?” Revan replied
“You killed it the day you became a Jedi and betrayed the oath we made.”Shivilow said while a light saber fell into her hands.
“Shivilow we were just kids I’m no longer a sith and came here in hopes to redeem you from the evil ways of the sith order. Turn now away from you hatred let go of your anger it is not away to live!!”,Revan replied.
Shivilows eyes had turn to a bright red as she made this last statement before she would kill her only friend she knew years ago.
“Just kids you say, no we made a pact to never betray the sith code and you broke that code of honor you scum bag!!I will not falter on false beliefs that the Jedi order tells its foolish padawans no I’m stronger than that. You had power, yet now you decide to fall into the chains of the force rather than to have the force bend to your every whim.Jadeth will be sadden if he was still alive to know that you have become a slave to the force and by that in statement you will die by my hands.”
Raven looked at her with a sariful look towards her, for she knew she knew that Shivilow was lost forever in her hatred to the dark side. Just at the moment she wanted to say something to shivilow she turned around and saw that Shivilow had vanished from view.Shivilow had indeed while using the dark side power of force concealment hiding from raven view so she could sneak attack her. She waited until raven wasn't looking and just then she reappeared in revans view. As shivilow came towards her she did a jump side kick into revan's chest. Shivilow enraged by her just being here made it possible to knock her down to the ground.
Raven was lying on her back on the ground with the wind knocked out of her and Shivilow saw this as an opportunity. She with her quick wit decided to stomp on her chest as she lied unconscious. After Shivilow had made several blows to her chest Revan shock herself out of unconscious and grabbed Shivilows foot. Just as Shivilow was coming in for a tenth stomp into her chest to which she flipped Shivilow onto her back. As Shivilow landed on her back Revan popped up and ran to her ship trying to get away from her. Mean while as Shivilow lay on the ground she noticed that Revan was running away. She looked around and saw that when she was knocked to the ground herself she hit her hand on a rock knocking the saber out of her hand.
Shivilow called her saber back into her right hand she popped herself back onto her feet. She then bent her knees and pushed off performing a force jump right into Revan's path. She landed right in front of her and made a diagonal slash towards revan's head. Just before the blade would have looped off her head she had ignited her saber to block shivilows attempt to kill her. They then fell into a saber lock with each one looking into one another’s eyes.Shivilow couldn't bare the look in revan's eyes much locker so with her left hand she gouged both revan's eyes out. Revan in a new state of pain broke the saber lock and stumbled backward in step holding the places where her eyes once where.
Revan was in excruciating pain for she just lost a pair of eyes due to Shivilow's temper. She was just about to perform a fore heal to stop the bleeding when out of no wear Shivilow threw her using the force. As she was being lifted in the air she was trying to distract her, but it was no use. She hoisted her more and then threw her hard into the pillars that are in the Valley of the Kings on Korriban. Once Revan landed on the ground next to the pillars her right shoulder snapped in half which you could see a bone pocking out. It was in her shoulder to that the bone pocked for Shivilow had done her most damage. Revan could no long move for not only was she blind, but now her right shoulder was broken. She was bleeding heavily now with her new injures cause all by shivilows anger and resentment. Shivilow saw what was going on so she force jumped to Revan's current position and she landed on revan's right side staring down upon her. Revan rolled on her back and looked up at Shivilow as she tried in one last attempt to gain mercy.
"Please Shivilow have pity on me Spare my life for the sake of my..Chil...d"
Revan's last request was ignored by shivilow for she had so much hate towards Revan that she showed no mercy. Shivilow raised her saber up and jabbed her in the heart. She then moved her saber down ward to see if Revan was telling the truth. As she cut open the womb there was no baby Revan lied to Shivilow in her last moments of life. Shivilow then open her pet’s cages which contained banthas. As they ran out she pointed them to Revan's body and she watched as they devour her up. Shivilow had done it killed her only friend who betrayed her in the end and this didn't satisfied her at all. Shivilow fell to her knees in aguish and anger and shouted not knowing she was using force scream.
"No.......................................................................................................................! I could have stopped you from being a jedi but I was too foolish towards my own anger. I loved you like a sister Raven and now I've killed you.Why did you not listen to me when I told you that being a jedi would cause you death?!
((ooc. Join me next time on the next installment when Shivilow will go after her twin sister Shivila to kill her. Oh and this story is based on a real event where my own best friend Renee did betray my trust and back stabbed me.))
Shivilow has been on Korriban for three months after the fight she had with a bounty hunter by the name of Cesar Fett.This bounty hunter came to find her to collect the huge bounty on her head. The current bounty is as follows. Three hundred republic credits for her many counts on her they are 45 counts of slavery, 185 counts of murder, 2 counts of impersonating a jedi, and 2 counts of high treason. Of all of these crimes that she has committed she has no remorse or second thought on all of them to her she believes they had what was coming to them. Just as she was walking towards her ship she then began to notice another ship touching down right besides hers. Once the hatchet bay doors open a woman walked out of it she had pure white robes on, so shivilow knew at once that she was a Jedi knight. She finally got a glimpse of her face this Jedi had blue eyes, blond hair, and a fair complection.
This Jedi knew Shivilow for they used to be best friends back when they where training in the ways of the sith.Her name at the last time they where siths together was Darth Rayvitous a name that was supposed to be feared by all who stood in their way. The last time they saw one another was the night before shivilow was to join the Phoenix order of the sith.Word got to shivilow that two years after the night that they had a huge fight that she joined the Jedi order. She in fact joined the order the same exact order that, not only killed her mother, but her only true love Jacen Skywalker. Rayvitous betrayed the blood oath that she made with shivilow to never turn their backs on the sith.Raven is the name to which she goes by now just seeing her made Shivilow’s blood boil with hatred.
“What are you doing here Jedi!”Shivilow screamed these words as her face had turn into a demonic look.
”My old friend Shivilow where’s you love and compassion?” Revan replied
“You killed it the day you became a Jedi and betrayed the oath we made.”Shivilow said while a light saber fell into her hands.
“Shivilow we were just kids I’m no longer a sith and came here in hopes to redeem you from the evil ways of the sith order. Turn now away from you hatred let go of your anger it is not away to live!!”,Revan replied.
Shivilows eyes had turn to a bright red as she made this last statement before she would kill her only friend she knew years ago.
“Just kids you say, no we made a pact to never betray the sith code and you broke that code of honor you scum bag!!I will not falter on false beliefs that the Jedi order tells its foolish padawans no I’m stronger than that. You had power, yet now you decide to fall into the chains of the force rather than to have the force bend to your every whim.Jadeth will be sadden if he was still alive to know that you have become a slave to the force and by that in statement you will die by my hands.”
Raven looked at her with a sariful look towards her, for she knew she knew that Shivilow was lost forever in her hatred to the dark side. Just at the moment she wanted to say something to shivilow she turned around and saw that Shivilow had vanished from view.Shivilow had indeed while using the dark side power of force concealment hiding from raven view so she could sneak attack her. She waited until raven wasn't looking and just then she reappeared in revans view. As shivilow came towards her she did a jump side kick into revan's chest. Shivilow enraged by her just being here made it possible to knock her down to the ground.
Raven was lying on her back on the ground with the wind knocked out of her and Shivilow saw this as an opportunity. She with her quick wit decided to stomp on her chest as she lied unconscious. After Shivilow had made several blows to her chest Revan shock herself out of unconscious and grabbed Shivilows foot. Just as Shivilow was coming in for a tenth stomp into her chest to which she flipped Shivilow onto her back. As Shivilow landed on her back Revan popped up and ran to her ship trying to get away from her. Mean while as Shivilow lay on the ground she noticed that Revan was running away. She looked around and saw that when she was knocked to the ground herself she hit her hand on a rock knocking the saber out of her hand.
Shivilow called her saber back into her right hand she popped herself back onto her feet. She then bent her knees and pushed off performing a force jump right into Revan's path. She landed right in front of her and made a diagonal slash towards revan's head. Just before the blade would have looped off her head she had ignited her saber to block shivilows attempt to kill her. They then fell into a saber lock with each one looking into one another’s eyes.Shivilow couldn't bare the look in revan's eyes much locker so with her left hand she gouged both revan's eyes out. Revan in a new state of pain broke the saber lock and stumbled backward in step holding the places where her eyes once where.
Revan was in excruciating pain for she just lost a pair of eyes due to Shivilow's temper. She was just about to perform a fore heal to stop the bleeding when out of no wear Shivilow threw her using the force. As she was being lifted in the air she was trying to distract her, but it was no use. She hoisted her more and then threw her hard into the pillars that are in the Valley of the Kings on Korriban. Once Revan landed on the ground next to the pillars her right shoulder snapped in half which you could see a bone pocking out. It was in her shoulder to that the bone pocked for Shivilow had done her most damage. Revan could no long move for not only was she blind, but now her right shoulder was broken. She was bleeding heavily now with her new injures cause all by shivilows anger and resentment. Shivilow saw what was going on so she force jumped to Revan's current position and she landed on revan's right side staring down upon her. Revan rolled on her back and looked up at Shivilow as she tried in one last attempt to gain mercy.
"Please Shivilow have pity on me Spare my life for the sake of my..Chil...d"
Revan's last request was ignored by shivilow for she had so much hate towards Revan that she showed no mercy. Shivilow raised her saber up and jabbed her in the heart. She then moved her saber down ward to see if Revan was telling the truth. As she cut open the womb there was no baby Revan lied to Shivilow in her last moments of life. Shivilow then open her pet’s cages which contained banthas. As they ran out she pointed them to Revan's body and she watched as they devour her up. Shivilow had done it killed her only friend who betrayed her in the end and this didn't satisfied her at all. Shivilow fell to her knees in aguish and anger and shouted not knowing she was using force scream.
"No.......................................................................................................................! I could have stopped you from being a jedi but I was too foolish towards my own anger. I loved you like a sister Raven and now I've killed you.Why did you not listen to me when I told you that being a jedi would cause you death?!
((ooc. Join me next time on the next installment when Shivilow will go after her twin sister Shivila to kill her. Oh and this story is based on a real event where my own best friend Renee did betray my trust and back stabbed me.))
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