Derek Skirata
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Post by Derek Skirata on Jan 14, 2008 11:15:48 GMT -5
Chapter 7 will be done soon. After that, there will be a special preview to Chapter 8. ;D
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Darth Valrum
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Post by Darth Valrum on Jan 15, 2008 2:22:26 GMT -5
Most excellent! ;D
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Post by Derek Skirata on Jan 17, 2008 16:31:34 GMT -5
*SPECIAL PREVIEW!!!*
In the next chapter, Darth Venomous returns & this time she has backup from a Dark Jedi lover that she met between the events of Chapter 6 & Chapter 8. A new guest star will show up to help out Derek & later between Revenge of the Sith & A New Hope will fight Derek. You will never expect what happens in the ending!
Chapter 8: Venomous Returns coming soon!
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Post by Darth Valrum on Jan 18, 2008 0:05:28 GMT -5
i want to read it asap.
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Post by Cadeus on Jan 26, 2008 17:03:10 GMT -5
disish soundin shweet!
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Post by Derek Skirata on Feb 5, 2008 9:15:56 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Venomous ReturnsAs the war dragged on, the reputation Derek Skirata was gaining was also being widely known across the galaxy. But he knew that Darth Venomous was still alive & is out there somewhere. As the Dark Jedi numbers began to dwindle thanks to Derek & the rest of the Jedi, so did the Jedi numbers. Derek had to find where she was or else she will end up completing her goal. But to foil her plans, Derek had to find the datasphere she stole from the Jedi Oni Cay-Qel & destroy her. This time Derek wasn't gonna go alone. He decided to find some help but who was gonna be easier said than done. Meanwhile Darth Venomous was just walking out from a meeting with Count Dooku with a Dark Jedi she fell in love with named Valrum. She was explaining her story as to how she became Darth Venomous. She explained that she was a Jedi Master who basically had some Padawans do some work while she took the credit & was was promoted to Jedi Master & was to be on the Council, hopefully the youngest ever to be promoted to the Council. But she told a different story to have it sound like she was betrayed. She then said that she was betrayed by Derek Skirata & he humiliated her & got her demoted to the lowest rank on the Council & almost got her expelled. Also she felt that Derek took everything from her. "I hate that slimy stuipd little--." Venomous growled. "Hate will grant you power, my love." Valrum smiled. "But remember being obsessed with revenge far too much will cost you everything. That was Darth Maul's mistake; he basked in the thought of revenge too much & it made him think he was invincible & he paid the price." "I WAS HUMILIATED, VALRUM!!" Vennomous roared, her dark rage increasing again & her appearance started to change a little. "He took everything from me & now he will pay." "Then we have no time to waste." Valrum smiled evilly. Venomous started to flirtatiously move her arms around Valrum's neck. "Don't you remember that special night we had?" "That night was your idea." Valrum chuckled. "It doesn't matter now. What does matter is that we destroy that Mandalorian. I made the mistake of fighting him alone; he had numbers on his side. But now we can get him to fight me alone & I can now have numbers on MY side. Once we finally corner him, I can finally slay him!! I can taste his blood already." Venomous grinned evilly as she transformed into the hideous creature again. Meanwhile the Bounty Hunter that accompanied Connor & Jasmine earlier was piloting his Sith Infiltrator somewhere in the galaxy to find work for the CIS. He was just about to go into hyperspace when Darth Venomous appeared via hologram. Ah, Lady Venomous! the Bounty Hunter greeted. What brings you here? "I have a job for you." Venomous explained. "I need you to lure the Mandalorian Derek Skirata to the northeastern-most construction sites of the planet of Taris. If you do, I will personally triple the original payment that I gave you." It will be done, my Lady. the Bounty Hunter accepted. He then piloted his ship to the last known location of the Infiltrator. Meanwhile Derek was just getting back from a battle with Master Mace Windu when he noticed a small ship approaching. "I know that ship." Derek spoke. "That's the same ship that I saw in the hanger the last time the Bounty Hunter tried to kill me." "Wait, I've also seen that ship before." Ro Sajec protested. "This may be a trap." "It may be a trap, but what if we can turn the trap against whoever is setting the trap?" Derek smirked underneath his helmet. "I dunno but I have no doubt that Venomous is behind this. This time I know she will have backup. I'm calling for--." "Most likely but it's me she's after. What if she doesn't have backup? Remember she almost killed me numerous times & was very close to killing me all by herself." Derek explained. "But your life was saved by help that distracted her." Ro explained. "I'm gonna try to find anyone available that could help you." Derek shook his head & got the coordinates. "He's heading for the planet of Taris. Wonder what is it the Separatists want there?" Derek wondered. "That place is still being rebuilt after the bombardment by Darth Malak a few millenia ago." Nevertheless, the Infiltrator jumped into hyperspace heading straight for the planet of Taris. After jumping out, Derek flew his starfighter out of the hanger & followed the Bounty Hunter's ship to the Tarisian surface. "Can't believe I've never been here before." Derek muttered to himself. He flew the ship until he saw the Bounty Hunter land & jump out. When Derek landed, the Bounty Hunter was nowhere in sight. Derek then saw something at one construction site at a nearby skyscraper. Derek used his jet pack to fly to it & used his whip chord to climb the rest. When he got there, he saw that the place was abandoned, or so he thought. He heard growling sounds that were too familiar to him. He turned around & saw the female dressed in a black suit: Darth Venomous. "Venomous." Derek glared. "I defeated you before & so help me I will do it again." "I remember our last encounter, Mandalorian." Venomous growled. "That's ALL I can think about as I traveled the empty spaces of this galaxy!!" When she finished, she hurled Force Lightning at Derek but he jumped out of the way. He drew his blaster & shot numerous shots at her but with her lightsaber ignited, she blocked the shots. He flew towards her, lightsaber in hand & ignited but she anticipated it. Before Derek could swing to either decapitate her or slice her in half, she punched Derek hard in his stomach, sending him to the other side of the building & having him crash into a pole hard. "She's....gotten even....stronger....since....last time!" Derek groaned in pain. "If that is possible!" "That's right!" She smiled. "No more surprises to help you! This time will be different from last time!" "Keep dreaming, Bantha herder." Derek shot back. "You're always such a sore loser--." Before Derek could ever finish, Derek was kicked from behind by another person. It was Venomous' lover, Valrum. "What the??" "You were foolish to come here, even more when you fell into our trap!" Valrum bombarded Derek with Force Lightning, causing Derek to scream in pain. "No. Derek is mine & mine alone!" Venomous growled at Valrum. "He's all yours, my love." Valrum chuckled. Venomous continued bombarding Derek with Force Lightning at maximum. "AAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" Derek screamed in pain. Venomous just laughed at Derek while he was in pain. "I'm not gonna lose this time, Mandalorian. I got you right where I want you. You will suffer all the nightmares I suffered. This time I WILL WIN!!!!" (To be continued in Chapter 9) (More coming soon!
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Post by Darth Valrum on Feb 8, 2008 0:54:51 GMT -5
i fall in love with venom?!? haha, cool!
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Post by Derek Skirata on Feb 8, 2008 9:58:56 GMT -5
i fall in love with venom?!? haha, cool! No no no. This is a different person. Valrum is his first name (I chose it because I couldn't think of anything else).
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Post by Darth Valrum on Feb 8, 2008 19:53:30 GMT -5
ahhhhh ok i see. dont i fall in love with the other dark jedi twi'lck girl?
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Post by Derek Skirata on Feb 9, 2008 12:23:51 GMT -5
ahhhhh ok i see. dont i fall in love with the other dark jedi twi'lck girl? Yes you did in the previous chapter. lol
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Post by Cadeus on Feb 9, 2008 12:55:30 GMT -5
twi'lek heh. nice work so far derek. im so in the next ch. lol jk revan got a truck load of cameos lol. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Derek Skirata on Feb 10, 2008 11:07:10 GMT -5
twi'lek heh. nice work so far derek. im so in the next ch. lol jk revan got a truck load of cameos lol. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D No this isn't Revan Valrum. This is a different guy. Plus he looks more like those Dark Jedi from KOTOR.
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Post by Cadeus on Feb 10, 2008 11:45:55 GMT -5
lol i know i was just playing
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Post by Derek Skirata on Feb 11, 2008 15:31:28 GMT -5
Haha.
Anyway, the main Dark Jedi from "Episode 3.5 - The Lost Jedi" will most likely have a cameo but what is his name I dunno. He will be a Padawan during this time & will help out Derek. lol What is his character name (both Jedi & Sith name) I dunno yet. If someone can help me out, please do with a PM.
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Feb 11, 2008 15:43:47 GMT -5
My lord that was alot of reading but I can say that I give it five thumbs up ,and when chapter 8 is done I can't wait to see what will be in stored. I have to say one thing though you sure you don't wanna turn this into a fan based book I would!!! ;D
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