Post by Darth Mistress™ on Nov 30, 2006 5:49:44 GMT -5
~:{Darth Mistress' story}:~ Chapter .01:"Before Darth Mistress, there was the rogue"
On the tiny fiery planet Mustafar located in the Outer Rim, on one of the platforms that was on top of one of the mountains. A few kids surrounded a small little girl in a crowd as they watched this girl on her hands and knees in pain.
On the ruff and dirty floor, a small blood puddle lays there as a couple of blood drops fall into it to make the puddle grow. The blood puddle falls into the cracks in the floor while a small girl’s hands are press down on the floor on both sides of her puddle of blood. The girl named Adriana was in painful bruises and cuts as blood just drips from off her bottom lip. Her body was shaking like hell as she was scared and hurt from the punches and kicks that other kids her age had just done to her. Those kids still stood around her and she was on her hands and knees with tears running down her cheeks. One of the kids which was a taller kid from the rest of the crowd and seemed to be their leader, had the biggest evil cocky grin ever as he stared down at Adriana. The leader spoke in a voice of thinking he was all big and bad saying, “Look guys, look at this pathetic girl. She can’t even stand up to defend herself. She’s a pathetic weakly.” Adriana quickly took the rude and painful comments in as she bottled up her bottom under her top lip and bit down. Her eyes were starting to blind her sight as her crying was getting worse. She shut her eyes tightly and then slowly reopen them to see if she could be able to see a little bit better now. The leader then spoke again but in a more of a curious voice than before asking Adriana, “Why do you even exist? You shouldn’t even be alive. You’re useless and weak. What good are you? All you do is sit there in your little dark corner and make the rest of us look like bad people. You act like this rogue to the world. So why should you had been born into this world if all you’re going to do is hide from the world?” Adriana then took the comments almost like “so they actually do see me.” she thought before she was just a ghost to everyone because everyone didn’t seem like they even saw her. She then sat up from off her hands and sat down on her legs looking up at the leader. With a ruff and torn up voice Adriana spoken, “If you feel that way then why do you all take it into yourselves to beat me down almost to the breaking point of death and then walk off not finishing the job? If I shouldn’t even be alive, then why don’t you prove yourselves and kill me now? *starts to get a little frustrated of their excuses* What?!….are you scared to take a life in your own hands? Are you afraid that everyone will see you all as killers? What is it? I want to know why? Why put me down with your hurtful comments and expect me to understand that you’re for real when you can’t even be brave enough to back up what you say?”. Adriana’s reply made the leader that much more mad and hatred towards her. He got the defenses and replied back yelling in anger, “I’m not afraid of you. I’m not afraid of anything! You think I can’t back up what I say?! I will prove myself by killing you now.” The leader quickly in so much anger attacks Adriana by grabbing her around the throat with both of his hands. His grip was so tight and strong around Adriana’s small shinny neck. And with full force he puts Adriana back and down to the floor. Adriana lands on her back hard to the floor with him on top of her still choking her with his bare hands. She grabs his wrists as a reaction that his choking was really hurting her. Crushing down on her teeth Adriana tightly shuts her eyes and feels the strength behind his grip as it gets tighter around her throat. She could barely breathe and could also feel that his fingertips were stabbing her in the back of her neck for he couldn’t reach his fingers out around her entire neck. She slowly reopens her eyes and looks up as everything was slowly starting to get dark and her eyes weren’t feeling like they were going close. She then notice that a man was walking towards her but in her sight he seemed upside down because her head was bent back as the kid was still on top of her choking her too death. It was a Jedi knight and he didn’t have no expression of anger nor happiness on his face. But she still could see well enough to see that as his face was half way covered under his hood that was connected to his long cape.
The kid still didn’t let go of Adriana’s throat as he only squeezed that much harder, he didn’t even see the Jedi walking towards them. Not even the other kids notice the Jedi walking towards them as they only cheered the leader on while he was killing Adriana. And then right when Adriana was so very close to actual death, she could feel everything getting weaker in her body and her eye sight was close to pitch black, the Jedi steps up and with the force he pushes the leader off her. Flying in the air and hitting a wall the leader kid drops to his butt onto the floor away from Adriana. Adriana then quickly coughing as she could feel air going back into her lungs. She reaches her hand up to her throat as she notices that the kid’s grip was no longer there. The other kids looked scared because they finally noticed the Jedi and felt like they were in big trouble now. With wide eyes the leader looked at the Jedi and then at Adriana as he saw that he didn’t kill her. He could feel that she was almost dead when he was choking her but the Jedi stopped him. He felt so disappointed with himself that he quickly tighten his eyes to an expression of anger. Adriana rolled over to her stomach and was still coughing. She glares up at the Jedi knight and wonders why did he save her. Adriana believed that no one cared for her and thought the same way as the other kids did, but what is it about this Jedi knight that he felt different about the situation? The leader was so angry that he failed to kill Adriana that he quickly found a stone and threw it at her head in hopes he could at least bust her head open. The stone hits Adriana right on the side of her head and it did bust her head open but not quite enough to kill her. Blood slowly dripped down her head from underneath her hair. And quickly the other kids grabbed rocks to throw at Adriana because they were following their leader no matter if a Jedi knight was standing right there. Adriana’s head started to hurt like a big bad headache and then with that pain she started to feel her strength coming back but more in way as a power within. The other kids then threw a rock at Adriana in admits to kill her but the rocks then suddenly looked as through they hit an invisible wall. A force shield protected Adriana from getting hit by their rocks. You would believe that the Jedi actually made a force shield around Adriana but it wasn’t him who made the shield, it was her. With her own power she created a force shield and protected herself from harm. The Jedi knight stood there glaring at Adriana as in almost amazement that this small little girl had that kind of power to create a such a force shield. The leader quickly looked at the other kids and yelled out, “Rocks are not going to kill her. You need to kill her with your bare hands!” He felt as he wasn’t going to leave Adriana alone until he finish the job he started, he wanted to see her actually dead.
In full anger the kids started running towards Adriana and was going to attack her. Adriana still laying there on the floor thought to herself for the longest second in her life about how much she is tired of being beaten down. She wanted to stop it, she wanted the pain to stop. She wanted the power to defend herself from getting hurt anymore. She graved it and then within she felt this strange unknown power grow up and with it she turns over and blasts it at the kids. Flying back like the force pushed them away from reaching Adriana, the kids land on the ground and quickly were scared too death to get near her for a second attempt to kill her. Running off like dogs running away with their tail in between their legs, Adriana only heard them screaming like they just say a scary monster. Adriana felt her power retract back within herself and she sat there looking a bit confused. Her eyes were wide open as she wondered what just happened. She asked herself, “What was that power I had just felt?…What just happened? What did I do?”. The Jedi knight knew from that very moment that this small little girl wasn’t just a normal human being, she was something more, she was a Jedi just like him. Only thing is he knew that she couldn’t control this power without some kind of guidance to help her embrace this power she had. The Jedi knight replied to Adriana’s question with, “That power is called the force, little one. You had used the force to protect yourself from getting hurt.” Adriana heard the Jedi knight but still she didn’t understand what he meant, she was still confused. He realized she was confused and knew she needed help really bad, she needed guidance to survive as a Jedi. If he wouldn’t take it into himself to help her she would someday kill herself with her own power. The Jedi knight bend down to look at Adriana in her eyes. He saw in her beautiful lime green eyes that she still had tears running down from them. Adriana looked at the Jedi knight as she was still confused about what happened and what she was. She didn’t know what she was and she asked the Jedi, “What I’m I? I’m I a monster? Please…please tell me?…I’m so confused..”. She glared at the Jedi knight and in hopes he would tell her. The Jedi Knight then reach a hand up to Adriana’s face and wiped the tears from under her eyes with his thumb that was covered over by his black glove. He replied to Adriana’s question, “You are not a monster, little one. You are a Jedi, just like me.” Adriana then replied, “but you’re powerful….*looks down to the floor* I’m just a pathetic weakly. *looks back up at the Jedi knight* The two don’t match.”. The Jedi then knew it had to be done, he had to teach this girl the true nature of a Jedi and help her control her power. He knew that if he could make Adriana into a Jedi that she could be of good use and a good alley to other Jedi knights in the wars they face. Then the Jedi knight said, “You’re not a pathetic weakly. You just need guidance and you to can be powerful. And I’m going to help you. I am going to teach you the ways of force and you will become a Jedi knight, I promise you.”. Adriana then swallowed her pain as it disappeared for she believed in the Jedi in what he was saying. He then stood up straight and then reached his out for Adriana to make the final decision to accept his offer or not. Adriana looked around and thought quickly about her life and how she was always alone. But here someone actually came to her aid and is offering to help her. And then Adriana accepted the Jedi’s offer as she reaches up and grabs his hand. The Jedi helped Adriana to her feet and then he stared her into her eyes to let her know that this is where it begins. This is the beginning of her new life, this is where her quest will start for her become a Jedi knight.
On the tiny fiery planet Mustafar located in the Outer Rim, on one of the platforms that was on top of one of the mountains. A few kids surrounded a small little girl in a crowd as they watched this girl on her hands and knees in pain.
On the ruff and dirty floor, a small blood puddle lays there as a couple of blood drops fall into it to make the puddle grow. The blood puddle falls into the cracks in the floor while a small girl’s hands are press down on the floor on both sides of her puddle of blood. The girl named Adriana was in painful bruises and cuts as blood just drips from off her bottom lip. Her body was shaking like hell as she was scared and hurt from the punches and kicks that other kids her age had just done to her. Those kids still stood around her and she was on her hands and knees with tears running down her cheeks. One of the kids which was a taller kid from the rest of the crowd and seemed to be their leader, had the biggest evil cocky grin ever as he stared down at Adriana. The leader spoke in a voice of thinking he was all big and bad saying, “Look guys, look at this pathetic girl. She can’t even stand up to defend herself. She’s a pathetic weakly.” Adriana quickly took the rude and painful comments in as she bottled up her bottom under her top lip and bit down. Her eyes were starting to blind her sight as her crying was getting worse. She shut her eyes tightly and then slowly reopen them to see if she could be able to see a little bit better now. The leader then spoke again but in a more of a curious voice than before asking Adriana, “Why do you even exist? You shouldn’t even be alive. You’re useless and weak. What good are you? All you do is sit there in your little dark corner and make the rest of us look like bad people. You act like this rogue to the world. So why should you had been born into this world if all you’re going to do is hide from the world?” Adriana then took the comments almost like “so they actually do see me.” she thought before she was just a ghost to everyone because everyone didn’t seem like they even saw her. She then sat up from off her hands and sat down on her legs looking up at the leader. With a ruff and torn up voice Adriana spoken, “If you feel that way then why do you all take it into yourselves to beat me down almost to the breaking point of death and then walk off not finishing the job? If I shouldn’t even be alive, then why don’t you prove yourselves and kill me now? *starts to get a little frustrated of their excuses* What?!….are you scared to take a life in your own hands? Are you afraid that everyone will see you all as killers? What is it? I want to know why? Why put me down with your hurtful comments and expect me to understand that you’re for real when you can’t even be brave enough to back up what you say?”. Adriana’s reply made the leader that much more mad and hatred towards her. He got the defenses and replied back yelling in anger, “I’m not afraid of you. I’m not afraid of anything! You think I can’t back up what I say?! I will prove myself by killing you now.” The leader quickly in so much anger attacks Adriana by grabbing her around the throat with both of his hands. His grip was so tight and strong around Adriana’s small shinny neck. And with full force he puts Adriana back and down to the floor. Adriana lands on her back hard to the floor with him on top of her still choking her with his bare hands. She grabs his wrists as a reaction that his choking was really hurting her. Crushing down on her teeth Adriana tightly shuts her eyes and feels the strength behind his grip as it gets tighter around her throat. She could barely breathe and could also feel that his fingertips were stabbing her in the back of her neck for he couldn’t reach his fingers out around her entire neck. She slowly reopens her eyes and looks up as everything was slowly starting to get dark and her eyes weren’t feeling like they were going close. She then notice that a man was walking towards her but in her sight he seemed upside down because her head was bent back as the kid was still on top of her choking her too death. It was a Jedi knight and he didn’t have no expression of anger nor happiness on his face. But she still could see well enough to see that as his face was half way covered under his hood that was connected to his long cape.
The kid still didn’t let go of Adriana’s throat as he only squeezed that much harder, he didn’t even see the Jedi walking towards them. Not even the other kids notice the Jedi walking towards them as they only cheered the leader on while he was killing Adriana. And then right when Adriana was so very close to actual death, she could feel everything getting weaker in her body and her eye sight was close to pitch black, the Jedi steps up and with the force he pushes the leader off her. Flying in the air and hitting a wall the leader kid drops to his butt onto the floor away from Adriana. Adriana then quickly coughing as she could feel air going back into her lungs. She reaches her hand up to her throat as she notices that the kid’s grip was no longer there. The other kids looked scared because they finally noticed the Jedi and felt like they were in big trouble now. With wide eyes the leader looked at the Jedi and then at Adriana as he saw that he didn’t kill her. He could feel that she was almost dead when he was choking her but the Jedi stopped him. He felt so disappointed with himself that he quickly tighten his eyes to an expression of anger. Adriana rolled over to her stomach and was still coughing. She glares up at the Jedi knight and wonders why did he save her. Adriana believed that no one cared for her and thought the same way as the other kids did, but what is it about this Jedi knight that he felt different about the situation? The leader was so angry that he failed to kill Adriana that he quickly found a stone and threw it at her head in hopes he could at least bust her head open. The stone hits Adriana right on the side of her head and it did bust her head open but not quite enough to kill her. Blood slowly dripped down her head from underneath her hair. And quickly the other kids grabbed rocks to throw at Adriana because they were following their leader no matter if a Jedi knight was standing right there. Adriana’s head started to hurt like a big bad headache and then with that pain she started to feel her strength coming back but more in way as a power within. The other kids then threw a rock at Adriana in admits to kill her but the rocks then suddenly looked as through they hit an invisible wall. A force shield protected Adriana from getting hit by their rocks. You would believe that the Jedi actually made a force shield around Adriana but it wasn’t him who made the shield, it was her. With her own power she created a force shield and protected herself from harm. The Jedi knight stood there glaring at Adriana as in almost amazement that this small little girl had that kind of power to create a such a force shield. The leader quickly looked at the other kids and yelled out, “Rocks are not going to kill her. You need to kill her with your bare hands!” He felt as he wasn’t going to leave Adriana alone until he finish the job he started, he wanted to see her actually dead.
In full anger the kids started running towards Adriana and was going to attack her. Adriana still laying there on the floor thought to herself for the longest second in her life about how much she is tired of being beaten down. She wanted to stop it, she wanted the pain to stop. She wanted the power to defend herself from getting hurt anymore. She graved it and then within she felt this strange unknown power grow up and with it she turns over and blasts it at the kids. Flying back like the force pushed them away from reaching Adriana, the kids land on the ground and quickly were scared too death to get near her for a second attempt to kill her. Running off like dogs running away with their tail in between their legs, Adriana only heard them screaming like they just say a scary monster. Adriana felt her power retract back within herself and she sat there looking a bit confused. Her eyes were wide open as she wondered what just happened. She asked herself, “What was that power I had just felt?…What just happened? What did I do?”. The Jedi knight knew from that very moment that this small little girl wasn’t just a normal human being, she was something more, she was a Jedi just like him. Only thing is he knew that she couldn’t control this power without some kind of guidance to help her embrace this power she had. The Jedi knight replied to Adriana’s question with, “That power is called the force, little one. You had used the force to protect yourself from getting hurt.” Adriana heard the Jedi knight but still she didn’t understand what he meant, she was still confused. He realized she was confused and knew she needed help really bad, she needed guidance to survive as a Jedi. If he wouldn’t take it into himself to help her she would someday kill herself with her own power. The Jedi knight bend down to look at Adriana in her eyes. He saw in her beautiful lime green eyes that she still had tears running down from them. Adriana looked at the Jedi knight as she was still confused about what happened and what she was. She didn’t know what she was and she asked the Jedi, “What I’m I? I’m I a monster? Please…please tell me?…I’m so confused..”. She glared at the Jedi knight and in hopes he would tell her. The Jedi Knight then reach a hand up to Adriana’s face and wiped the tears from under her eyes with his thumb that was covered over by his black glove. He replied to Adriana’s question, “You are not a monster, little one. You are a Jedi, just like me.” Adriana then replied, “but you’re powerful….*looks down to the floor* I’m just a pathetic weakly. *looks back up at the Jedi knight* The two don’t match.”. The Jedi then knew it had to be done, he had to teach this girl the true nature of a Jedi and help her control her power. He knew that if he could make Adriana into a Jedi that she could be of good use and a good alley to other Jedi knights in the wars they face. Then the Jedi knight said, “You’re not a pathetic weakly. You just need guidance and you to can be powerful. And I’m going to help you. I am going to teach you the ways of force and you will become a Jedi knight, I promise you.”. Adriana then swallowed her pain as it disappeared for she believed in the Jedi in what he was saying. He then stood up straight and then reached his out for Adriana to make the final decision to accept his offer or not. Adriana looked around and thought quickly about her life and how she was always alone. But here someone actually came to her aid and is offering to help her. And then Adriana accepted the Jedi’s offer as she reaches up and grabs his hand. The Jedi helped Adriana to her feet and then he stared her into her eyes to let her know that this is where it begins. This is the beginning of her new life, this is where her quest will start for her become a Jedi knight.
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this is an amazing story i love where she came from