The Hunt- Open

[Cadeus]

:Cadeus took his shuttle out of lightspeed once He hit the outer rim, He paused to think about where His target might be. The former Sith General and betrayed the Sith and had been giving away military information that was important to the Sith's success in the coming war.:

[Hmm, most of these planets are remote with dismal populations, I shall start with tatooine and work my way through the other planets.


: Cadeus then plugged the location and flew into hyperspace. About an hour later the shuttle landed in one of the space ports. He stepped out of His shuttle almost silently, He felt His lightsaber hit against His light as He walked."



: A few minutes later He was about halfway through the city when a few men walked to wards Him. They appeared to be bodyguards, very bad ones at that.:

" Hey man!" One of them called.

" Come over here." The other said.


: Cadeus eyed them both and thought until He felt that they were not a threat. He walked to wards them without looking them in the eye. Then He realized that these might be the Sith General's men who were ordered to protect him! Or they could be a distraction. He had his back to them, and could hear them slowly taking their blasters from their holsters. Cadeus spun around and activated his lightsaber, the men were frightened but not enough to run. Just shoot. They began firing bolts at a rapid pace which Cadeus began deflecting with ease as He walked closer to them. Within a minute He was in striking distance and sent His lightsaber through the second and third bodyguards chest. He sent a short cut to the body guard's knees that brough him to the ground but only to have Cadeus promptly lift him back up. :

" Where is the General. " He said quietly the first time.

" I don't know. "


" That was the wrong answer " Cadeus snapped.


" He's not O-on this planet. He goes from planet to planet not staying at one place out of paranoia. Most of us don't know where he's at. Were just a diversion."


" Hmph, well I supposed I'll have to drop you now."

: Cadues used the force to lift the bodyguard into the air and when he felt close enough he cut with his lightsaber killing him. He cursed for a moment but headed back to his ship. :

: Once He returned He tried to send a message to His master, He bowed once the hologram flickered to life..

" Master, The target goes from planet to planet staying at no one place for a longer period than a week. So I feel I need something a bit better for interception. "

[Lord Sidious II]

::The hologram of Cadeus flickered on Sidious' desk and gave the message sent to him. On Cadeus' end a miniature of Sidious stood in his palm and answered back.::

"Do not be so quick to dispatch his followers, allowing him to know he is being followed could benefit us in the end, in time he may seek you out. The General is smart, there is logic to his seemingly sporadic movements. Follow the trail of followers he has left behind and it should lead you to more answers, eventually one will talk."

[Cadeus]

: it had been about a day since he left from Tatooine. He was tired angry and most of all He felt rebellious... He had been left to rot at the temple for almost a month and now He was sent to find a traitor in the most disgusting crevice of space He had ever seen, on the other hand He had probably learned more of battle and survival in general on his own than He would have with supervision. Still it sort of hurt that He wasn't thought to be worth attention. It once again made Him look at the ideals of the sith and jedi, as it had these last few weeks. :


: Still He shook off the thoughts and kicked his shuttle into Lightspeed towards his next target, still angry as ever. :

[Cadeus]

: Cadeus walked through a dirty street on the snowy planet mygeekto , continuing his mission to hunt down the traitor. He prefered not to think about Korriban or even the Sith at all right now, Here He was on a planet that was mostly populated by SNOW and that isn't exactly a population, all just because He had picked up a strange reading on His censors back on the shuttle. Still, He thought, better than Hoth. He headed towards a nearby bar that housed a small handful of the lemur like people, the mygeetans. He walked up to one of them and stood before it until he felt his presence. :


" Yeah? " The mygeetian said.


"I was wondering if you have seen a human and maybe a group of bodyguards coming through this area? "


" Nah, I don't think so. Ask the bartender He knows practically everyone in the city. "


" thanks" Cadeus said quietly as he walked to the bartender.


: The bartender looked wary as Cadeus walked forwards to meet him. When Cadeus removed his hood and revealed his sulfur coloured eyes the man starred for moment before regaining his composure. :


" Yeah? " He asked.


" I am looking for a human male, pale, sith military attire, brownish black hair, cyan eyes. He may or may not be traveling with bodyguards. Have you seen him? "

" Alot of guys come through this bar, I can't be expected to remember each one. "


" I suppose you want help remembering then? " Cadeus asked irritably.


" You could say that. " The bartender said grinning.


: The mans smile almost literally fell off of his face when Cadeus activated his lightsaber and pointed it at them. The entire bar was quiet. :


" Easier to remember now? " Cadeus asked.


" Its all coming back to me now." He said panicing.

: He leaned over to whisper.:


" Down this street til the intersection, turn left. Last building on the street."



" Smart man." Cadeus said walking out and putting his hood back on.



: Cadeus left the bar and walked to the intersection at a brisk pace, This may be his chance to capture the general. This JUST MAY BE his shot. Reached the intersection and turned on to the left street. It was a short street with a small dumpy building. He reached it and with a burst of adrenaline kicked the door and jumped into the room with his saber activated. The second He entered He heard blasters firing straight at him. He diflected their bolts with ease and while he was doing this He gathered his energy and with that sent a blast of force lightning at the men knocking them unconcious. He walked upstairs to a small console with a few sets of cuordinates on it. He took out a small tool He had bought when He was younger that would let him extract information out of machines. He found the outlet and extracted all the information that was in the machine and
ran back to his shuttle to read out the contents. :





:: On the shuttle He plugged the information into the computer. It brought up two planets, tatooine and endor and it allowed him to choose information about each planet. Knowing the General was not on tatooine he chose endor.::




Planet Endor

Dominated by forests


Boss meeting up with renforcements

To be shipped to republic

Small outpost


Undetectable

All contact with boss is to cease



:: Fired by this knowlege He powered up his ship and headed to endor. If this was not where He was this was at least somone important ::

[Cadeus]

: Cadeus landed on endor and prepared himself for the General's arrival. This was his test, this was his mission. He remembered his learning on subtility. Now was the time to test it. He saw a large metal structure with a landing pad on it. He was lucky He thought as that was most likely the General's landing zone and He had not arrived yet. But this place was most likely guarded, though since the General was not here yet the protection was likely to be minimal or non existent. So Cadeus ran towards the side wall. He force jumped up to the roof, from where He saw that there was a door on the floor that lead into the base, upon closer examination it was bolted shut and even it Cadeus tore it off it would make a giant racket that would wake up the whole planet. He saw four screws on the door so He slowly knelt down and with one hand used the force to unscrew the door screws and with the other collect the screws before they could fall:

: His work was finished quickly and He jumped down into the base. Inside this place was a large guard room in which were, well guards that He took care of quickly. Once they were disposed of He took a look at the cameras all over the building. He seemed to be the only one here so this almost seemed too easy, MUCH too easy. :


: An hour later A ship landed and out came the General with about ten bodyguards, He was about to walk into the guard room. Cadeus's heart was pounding, as He struggled to keep himself under control. The door started to open and the General came face to face with Cadeus. The bodyguards froze, the General blinked several times, Cadeus just stood there, He slowly removed His lightsaber from his robe and activated it. :


" Lord Sidious would like me to bring you home. "


OOC: I love cliff hangers dont you? ;D dont worry guys the hardest part is yet to come.

[Lord Sidious II]

OOC: You are saying you have done a lot, in a large amount of time, the problem is you must RP it out. You do not need to rp out every second of your characters life, but major events that lead up to a climax and exchange of information, meeting people, etc. Must be rped out. We cannot just make assumptions. Remember our thread in the tomb, we rped every turn in that tomb. Not just "I journeyed into the tomb and found what i was looking for."

You are not doing bad, but with this slight change you will vastly improve your writing.

PM me with questions.

[Cadeus]

OOC: * currently suffering from writers block and suffers from lack of free time, but will make attempt to write somthing better than the last posts. *



: Cadeus watched the general smile, He had planned this...He knew that it was only him coming, not a trained sith. He reached for somthing within his uniform. Cadeus's anger rose higher by the half second...Sidous hadn't told him ANYTHING anything at all. He just threw him out of the temple by the rear and told him to go find this General that MIGHT be trained. He was burning with fury... He couldn't control it any longer He pointed his lightsaber and the guards and rocketed towards them cutting through the first three with out of control slashes. They began firing at him with rapid fire blasters, to avoid them He deflected them at first and ran towards them and cut down the front two with a horisontal and then virtical strike. He spun his lightsaber and as a result cut off another guards hand, who fell to the ground. He thought that it was now or never. He pointed his hand at the last group and reached inside himself and forced the energy down his arm and through his hand then out his fingers. The blue ionic energy blasted the remaining survivors off their feet and he finally deactivated his lightsaber and exhailed slowly. He turned to the place the General had been only to see the window broken and the General running away. Cadeus actually screamed at the top of his lungs and as tired as He was He was NOT going to let him escape. He inhaled and activated his force speed and hurtled after the general. :

[Cadeus]

Jun 8, 2008 9:49:00 GMT -5 Lord Sidious II said:

OOC: You are saying you have done a lot, in a large amount of time, the problem is you must RP it out. You do not need to rp out every second of your characters life, but major events that lead up to a climax and exchange of information, meeting people, etc. Must be rped out. We cannot just make assumptions. Remember our thread in the tomb, we rped every turn in that tomb. Not just "I journeyed into the tomb and found what i was looking for."

You are not doing bad, but with this slight change you will vastly improve your writing.

PM me with questions.

OOC: added major edits. Fixed stuff. PM me if you have anything else you want me to add. I plan to edit a few more things but if you have any special requests pm me please.

[Cadeus]

:: The General was obviously not trained in the force as He was running at a normal pace, within a second Cadeus tackled him and pinned him to the ground. ::


:: But strangely the General was laughing at him, LAUGHING! When He was about to die. He pointed to the right away from the base to Cadeus's shuttle. There were men planting explosives on it. Cadeus activated his lightsaber, cut the generals arm and left knee deep enough that He wouldn't move any time soon then He charged at the men. He used the force to pull off a pair of explosives and throw them at a pair of the men. The sheer weight of the explosives sent them flying as apposed to the force of the explosion.


: He threw His lightsaber at the third thug who caught the wepon in his chest and collapsed on the ground. Cadeus speedily yanked off the explosives and with another slash killed the remaining thug, and with that he walked back to the crippled general. He pointed at him. :

" This is for the misery you have caused me. " He said.


: In one fluid motion the saber hilt flew from his cloak to his hand and gutted the general bow to stern. He was more angry than before now as he dragged the General's body into the ship. He had expected more challenge. But when He reached the controlls He almost gasped, they were broken and torn up. It would take time to repair, but He didn't have time. So I looked through what systems were working, the engine panel was fine, the lightspeed was damaged but workable. But the real damage was in the navicomputer, without it the lightspeed was useless. He pounded his fist against a wall and growled as He went into a small box to take out his tools. :


: He took out a crow-bar like tool and pried off the metal top of the navi computer to look at the guts. They seemed decent but the screen was unreadable. He didn't have any glass working tools but If He was able to some how melt the glass just a little He might be able to smooth it out with the force. He looked through the bag of tools He kept on the ship and found a small welding device. It gave enough to probably melt the glass. He activated it and held it close to the glass. It slowly started to melt. Once it melted a little He took it away quickly and started using the force to smooth it out. The glass had not cooled down yet but it was temporarily readable. He used to the force to press the nessicary buttons and the ship took off towards korriban. :



: When the glass actually cooled down it was even less readable but it didn't matter as He was already on his way. :



OOC: Whewh longest rp ive ever posted.