Darth Shivilow™
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 14, 2008 0:42:05 GMT -5
(ooc. I will take what you posted Revan and use is for my own because it was a good post!oh and I will add a bit to it so i can show what is going on in her mind.)
*Brinks forces were being flanked, and he knew it. Grinding his teeth together his brain started to reel for a solution. He snapped his head around, viewing his surroundings. They were on a bridge, and they were being held there. He had a few plans. He could charge them, and pierce their center, giving them the upper hand, and a way out. He could pull back and funnel THEM through the bridge and pick them off, or he could hold his position. making up his mind, he took a gutsy move. In his comlink within his helmet he tilted his head to activate it.*
"Snipers, take out people on the sides, we are charging through. Pick off any you can."
"Roger that Commander."
*Brink turned back to his soldiers to face them*
"Troops! We are charging through! Be prepared to move! Fire at any who pose a threat, when i create the gap in the center, run through it. Once we break them into two we will take them from behind. Get ready!"
*With that, Brink took out his last thermal detonator pressed the button and as it started to light up he tossed it far ahead of him. It bounced in front of the Republic troops that held the middle ground of the flank. Before anyone could run the detonator went off in a ferocious explosion, taking the lives of 7 Republic troopers and sending the rest flying out of the way making a clear and straight path.*
"MOVE!"
*All forces charged through the opening gap. Snipers from the hills behind them only managed to pick off two more Republic troops. After Brink had made it through with the rest he gave the order to open fire. The Sith troops were now behind Republic forces and were no longer flanked, that was the good news, but the bad news is that was his last thermal detenator, and he didnt know what was going to happen next, but the odds were evening out, neither side had the advantage and this is what he had hoped for.*
"OPEN FIRE!"
*Brinks troops followed the exact order. Tilting his head to the side again, his helmet triggered the comlink for his troops.*
"Snipers, you and the troops here are making a sandwich with Republic forces between us. Pick off any that you can, and if they charge the bridge, end every one of their lives. I doubt they will though, it would leave their backs exposed to us."
"Copy that Commander."
*Back where Shivilow was standing she watched as Brink's troops were getting picked off her hands were clutched into a fist.Looking to her right she was ready to march on that bridge now but had to wait.Few minuets later she shook her head and began to march to wards the bridge.Now she was ready to jump and slash throats if need be.He patients had worn off she was most ready to face her foes from a far and then crush them.The arrogance that blinded her was what caused her to move up with Brink and the troops.
Then ten minuets later She caught up with Brink and his men who was about to charge the bridge.*
"Brinks it looks like I have to help you out from my view back there it look you had a few flaws.Never the less the order you have now keep it! I will lead a charge into bridge if the Jedi attempt to charge us back.'
*The dark side was now surging in her veins her anger and hate was what she now focused on.She walked to wards the troops that were about to charge the bridge.She took one of her light sabers from her belt and ignited it.*
"Alright men when I give you the signal charge them on the bridge and show no mercy!!"
Sith Troops Shiv/Brink-161, Revan-119 Jedi Troops Hue-130, Aeon-120
(Revan's EDIT: Shiv did no damage to any troops so this count is accurate and correct.)
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Jul 14, 2008 1:50:46 GMT -5
(The line had been compromised, Seeing the dark General savagely kill a allied troop. Half of the body slams on to the front of the speeder sliding down leaving a bloody trail. Sith Troopers attempt to pick me off shooting I raise my hand sending four shots back killing their shooters they fall in unison face first into the sand.)
(The Skiff hovers over raising my hand I launch a Force push at the General! The Skiff slides over across the beach headed back to wards the east bridge. The line on the hill was holding losses were being sustained on both sides. No doubt I shall be dealing with this Sith. Commander Katar will have to lead while I take care of this Jedi Business.)
(Wind blows my robes to the side as I look to the masked Sith General. I could feel his anger, The darkside was with him. His murdering of the troop shows he thinks to intimidate me. Little does this Sith realize who he is dealing with. He will know shortly. The Skiff Hovers away but still faces the Sith.)
(From under my hood I gaze to the Sith awaiting his response. Raising my hand pulling my saber to my hand with the Force. Snapping on it screeches into existance, casting a thick orange glow. Flipping the saber around to my left and right in a quick salute my blade points to the Sith.)
"Know lets see what you got young one?"
[glow=red,2,300]Sith[/glow] Revan-119
[glow=Blue,2,300]Jedi[/glow] Aeon-120
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Post by Darth Valrum on Jul 14, 2008 21:13:24 GMT -5
*Watching the Jedi's mock salute he obviously understood the message. This Jedi better prove to be a worthy adversary. Revan extinguished his lightsaber and his blade hissed out of existence back into the hilt. Followed by clipping his lightsaber to his belt, Revan began to run towards the distant Skiff. Upon picking up speed, Revan used the force to enhance his speed, making him appear as a racing blur to those around his path. Just before the Skiff could move any further, Revan called upon the force once again and launched him self far into the air. Tucking his legs in towards his chest he used both hands to hold them in place as he somersaulted once over the head of the Jedi and descended on the other side of the skiff. Revan was crouched down from the land, one hand in front of him touching the ground to hold in steady. Straightening up, his back was exposed to the Jedi for a brief moment; the wind throwing itself at the skiff, his cape could do nothing but follow the current of the wind but stick to its owner being held in place.*
*After briefly landing he turned to his left, so his side faces the Jedi, the black cloak still drifting in the wind gave the illusion of a black wall shielding the Sith, except for his head, which was angled to give a stare at the Jed though his mask. His left hand grabbed his cloak and threw it behind him and he turned now to fully face the Jedi. The wind was still present but grew faint like a whisper, still making his robes flutter softly and silently like a shadow.*
*Revan's lightsaber was clipped to the left side of his belt, hanging motionless much like how Revan was standing as he faced the Jedi. Revan examined the Jedi and his drawn lightsaber. He saw confidence and strength, no doubt a Jedi Master at least. A smile of approvement and much awaited satisfaction Revan's right hand snapped for his lightsaber and unhooked it from his belt. Holding his hilt in his right hand he extended his right arm down diagonally, then activated his lightsaber. The crimson blade hissing into life down towards the ground hummed at the ready. Revan brought his lightsaber forward and twirled it in his right hand in front of him then brought his hilt back right next to his head, but the crimson blade pointing directly at the Jedi, his left hand reach up and seized the remaining space of his hilt and he waited at the ready.*
*The Dark Side was with Revan, it was compressed inside Revan, ready to explode like an uncontrolled Krayt Dragon. But Revan wasnt like the other Sith. Insanity, Greed, and other qualities that Sith have been known for never took part in Revans duels. Most Sith made mistakes because they let themselves be blinded by the dark side of the force, or blinded by power and greed, leading to their downfall. Revan was not blind in the slightest in any way.*
Sith Troops Shiv/Brink-161, Revan-119 Jedi Troops Hue-130, Aeon-120
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Post by Hue Ran on Jul 14, 2008 21:45:15 GMT -5
"Darn it," Hue softly said under his breath.
He knew his troops would only last so long if they continued to sandwich themselves. There was very few options to correct this problem. The sith had joined the fight and now odds seemed not to matter. Both equally ready for the other and both just as strong. His troops formed a perimeter around him, keeping the troops from completely overtaking the position. It would not be enough though. After awhile being hit by both sides would lower the will to fight and they would crumble.
"Commander?" Came Hue's voice through the comm system.
"Yes Sir?" Came the commanders reply.
"Our troops will not last long in this position. I have a plan, but you must make sure that if we comply and do this plan that you can break through their position. Otherwise this plan will be only a waste of time."
"I do believe sir that I can overcome them, what is your plan sir?" Asked the commander.
"I am going to allow you time to push through the forward troops will I guard your rear from the troops on the bridge. I will only be able to hold them for so long. After awhile I will have to retreat and take a quick rest, which if you succeed will be simple to accomplish."
"Of course sir."
The conversation ended and Hue looked up at the bridge. His left hand moved down towards the left side of his hip, when the hand came up it came up with a gold lightsaber. When the lightsaber ignited it shown a great yellow. His right hand moved to his makashi saber and ignited it. The green and yellow from the sabers lit the area around him.
He ran forward quickly, jumping to the air as he became closer to the enemy at the bridge. Blaster bolts came from every direction, the force warning him ahead of time before any damage could be done. Most be deflected away harmlessly hitting the water or bridge. He landed his lightsaber coming around in a quick circle, his left handed lightsaber went forward with the power of the force, slicing off two heads of the enemy troops. The lightsaber quickly came back to his hand, and as the enemy quivered with fear he smiled.
"Try to cross this bridge now."
Three more soldiers thought they could surpass the Jedi. Two shooting bolts right away, only to have the bolts fly harmlessly over his shoulder. With the force guiding his feet he moved faster, going quickly in front of the soldiers. Their surprise was understanding, but sadly this was war and to hesitate meant death. Hue brought his right lightsaber around in a tight zigzag, taking the arms of both soldiers with it. His left handed saber came around in a quick a vicious circle, deflecting three bolts back to their original shooters.
While Hue distracted the troops on the bridge, his troops pushed strongly into the ranks of the troops on the island. The Commander ordered the leftover grenades to be thrown into the ranks of the enemy. With the enemy dazed and confused, Hue's troops pushed forward. They broke easily through the middle of the unknowing troopers, and as the troops broke apart of their formation Hue's troops brought themselves together. They targeted only one side of the broken formation. Taking all resource and energy to the left side.
(As I protect the rear this is what it would look like. X are my troops, B are your troops, I will be marked with a L
BL XB My army is attacking only one side of your formation so in order to attack their rear you will have to get through me. But make sure you don't god mod it. I get a chance to fight back on that.)
Troop Counter
Shiv-6=155 Hue-4=126
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Darth Shivilow™
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 14, 2008 22:35:41 GMT -5
Shivilow gripped tightly to her saber as she witnessed Hue's troops destroying her plans.She then turned to brink and gripped his armor with her hand(the left one with out a saber in it)and said.
"You keep an eye on that enemy line do you see what I see find a way to brake the x formation as for me I'm going to the bridge."
She then turned to her men as she said.
She held out her hand pointing to the direction of the bridge and the Jedi troops as she yelled
"CHARGE!!!"
The rush of her anger belted out as her men began the long charge across the bridge.She the marched herself across the bridge when she came upon two Jedi troops.Bringing her saber up she deflected the shots that were aimed at her.Then bending her knees she force jumped onto the bridge and as she landed.So did the heads of the two Troopers that took fire at her as she was now caught up with her troops.Marching forward she watched as a explosion hit from behind her taking out four of her troops.Getting on the comm link she barked orders to brink again and also asked a few questions.
"Brink where did that bomb come from it was twenty meters from my position!"
Brink replied
"The enemy ma'am one of the Jedi's troopers threw it to wards your position."
Shivilow then said
"Then get your snipers and shoot him down I can not be killed today do you under stand me?"
Brink replied
"Understood my Lord"
Shivilow then added more
"Brink I want you to make the snipers to take aim at the.."
Communications was then cut off as another Thermal Detonator hit three feet from her to which she had to jump forward and roll.Standing back up again she then looked around and noticed that she was right in the middle of the bridge and could see that a Jedi was on his way to wards her.She heard what he had said and replied in kind but in taunting words.
"Well if you want me then come and get me!!!"
Shiv/Brink-4=151 Hue-2=124
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Jul 14, 2008 23:14:19 GMT -5
(Restraint? Curious coming from a Sith. I had sensed a control but still at the edge of the restraint I could still feel an unbridled rage. I knew better than to under estimate this opponent. Seeing his eyes in the eye slot of the mask, A Revan mask.)
(Wind churns up my robes lowering down into a low stance, Orange saber held high over my shoulder.Jumping at the Sith I swing my saber down in a diagonal slash from my top left to bottom my lower right. Turning with the swing away from the Sith my back faces him for a split second. I keep the swing going as I spin around. My robes twist around my body in the spin.)
(In not even a second and I has closed the gap and begun my attack on the Sith aboard the Skiff hover craft. Moving around in a 45 degree turn after my initial swing, I stop immediately allowing my saber to swing behind my back in a quick jab strike from around my back aimed at Revan right side.) (The Swing pops over into the attack and swing back around over as I step into a swing in a Revan's opposite side his left side. Both swings were angled in just above waist level. In a few seconds I had launched a blazing fast offensive combo on my opponent.)
(Dust kicks up as the hover craft makes it's way across the hill nearing the east bridge. The glare from the orange and red sabers can been seen in the distance. My robes flow to the side as we fight aboard the Skiff speeder. The sun sets casting an orange red glow to the floorboard of the Skiff.)
(Glimmers of light shine off as a cloud is kicked up behind the hovercraft making is way up the hill to the bridge slowing it rocks a bit from side to side as we begin our duel aboard the Skiff. The water ripples sending breaks into the red and orange reflection. The beach changes color into a orange red scene. Turning more red as time goes by as if the sky bled for the death.)
[glow=red,2,300]Sith Troops[/glow] Revan-117-2(to firefight) [glow=blue,2,300]Jedi Troops[/glow] Aeon-117-3(to firefight)
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Post by Darth Valrum on Jul 15, 2008 22:04:43 GMT -5
*The planet reeked of the Dark Side of the force. The taint it had was beautiful to Revan, because like him, the planet centered itself with Dark Side energies, feeding off of them, producing, and harnessing it. A ripple of the Dark Side came from the planet and whispered to Revan like a distant voice. It was in the planet, it was in this war, this duel, himself. Tightening his grip on his lightsaber he didnt hesitate as the Dark Side of the force flowed through him.*
*The Jedis attacks came fast, momentum behind every swing. Revans Makashi form held him equally at bay though, his speed and precision matching every blow. Revan moved his lightsaber up towards the Jedis first over head blow but tilted it slight to his right by a small fraction as to redirect the momentum of the Jedis swing to Revans right.*
*With fluidity and speed, Revan stepped back with his right foot, but his left stayed in place, leaning back from his waist slightly to avoid the blade from the Jedis spin he brought his lightsaber down in a stabbing motion to his right to block his opponents jab, only to bring his lightsaber back to his left to meet his opponents blade in a fierce connection.*
*Both blades connected in a clash, the orange and red blade danced around one another, when colliding the colors fused in the lock to look like fire. Breaking the connection quickly, Revan used his strength to push back his opponents lightsaber away and his left hand let go of his hilt all together, only to bring his lightsaber into the offensive swings with wider and fiercer swings. Using his strength to push the Jedis blade back, Revan aslo used that force to lift up his left leg and then right leg, turning himself around in the air in a 360 degree turn to his left. Revans black robes flapped up in the spin, almost hitting the Jedi, but instead came around from the spin fully and planted his left foot back down in front of the Jedi followed by his right while his crimson blade flew momentum and force, straight towards the Jedis right, just above his elbow.*
*After the first strike without even a seconds pause Revans attack continued with fluidity. Revan pulled his saber hilt back up over his head, his lightsaber pointed down behind him, but only for a brief second as he guided his crimson blade down behind his back, hands still holding his hilt over his head, bringing the lightsaber down in a low sweep to the Jedis left calf.*
*Flourishing around, Revan was in complete focus with the Dark Side, amplifying his Makashi's speed and grace with power and precision. The Dark Side of the force within him began to bubble. After striking the Jedis right Revan brought his lightsaber up back behind his back as he spun to his right. His back was momentarily exposed to the Jedi, but his lightsaber was held straight down protecting it. Completing the spin to his right, Revan brought his lightsaber crashing swiftly down low to the Jedis right calf.*
*Crimson blade with such elegance in his Makashi form it appeared to seem like his blade moved with the swiftness and fluidity of water. But behind his swift streaks of crimson attacks came power. Nothing else around them was of importance. Revan was focused right now on taking out this Jedi from his very existence. The troops were irrelevant and a blur as was his ally Shivilow and everything else this war represented. In this moment of time, all that existed was the fight between the Sith and Jedi.*
Sith Troops Revan-115(Firefight -4) Jedi Troops Aeon-117(Firefight -2)
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Post by Hue Ran on Jul 16, 2008 20:59:41 GMT -5
The troops continued to flood into Hue's position. His concentration only deepened as the situation became dire. His breathing slowed giving way to a reat calmness inside of himself. It spread through his body like water through a river. Silence took over the moments. He remained unmoving, the troops across the way watching him curiously. He didn't make a move to attack nor did he make a move to retreat. He just stood, silent and unprepared or so it appeared to the eye. He felt his troopers behind him overtaking the enemies position. He didn't need to make sure they would get the job done in time, he knew they would. He could tell they no longer needed his motivation, for the time they could fight by themselves. His mind shifted away from their fight, making sure that he no longer helped them with the battle meditation.
Two troops ran forward seeing a perfect opportunity to defeat the Jedi his concentration was elsewhere and he was no longer even watching them. They thought he wasn't, but even as they ran forward his eyes opened and in those eyes laid perfect concentration, and their deaths.
Hue brought his hand up, centimeters before the blaster bolts hit him, they redirected to hit the bridge. His hand remained in the air and the two troops fell to the ground. Snoring could be heard coming from the two of them. Hue's Malacia worked on them. It worked on most targets that would be caught unprepared though.
Three more soldiers moved up to take their positions. They shot continuously. Hue rolled to the left to avoid the first round of shots, then seeing a small opening he lifted his lightsaber to the air and deflected the next round. With the small second inbetween the shots Hue lifted his other hand and his electric judgements flew from his hands. The troops screamed in pain as they floated into the air and flew right off the bridge from the force of the electricity. The enemy succumbed to fear, no troops daring to move forward at this point.
"If you wish to fight, then stop talking and fight," replied Hue to the arrogant Sith. He looked straight at her and remained silent waiting for her to take the first move.
His troops continued to push. The left part of the enemies formation crumbled until all troops simply either ran away or hoped to find some other way of victory. Commander Jarul smiled in the great victory. His smile faded fast though as he looked down at the bridge and saw Master Hue fight the troops all by himself. Although he looked to have things under control he still needed to help him. He ordered his snipers to kneel in the bushes. Barking orders to the heavy calvary he moved everyone into position. He pointed to the snipers and they started to bombard the troops in front of Hue. They knew they could at least thin the numbers of the enemy and then help Hue. Commander Jarul ordered the snipers to continue the bombardments until directed elsewhere.
Hue watched as the troops behind Shiv started moving backwards, only slightly, but at a steady speed. The sniper fire picking them off one by one.
Troop Counter Shiv-3=148 (I will let you determine how much you lose due to sniper fire.) Hue-1=123
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Darth Shivilow™
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 17, 2008 20:48:13 GMT -5
Shivilow watch as his troops began to pushed hers back away from the bridge and she wasn't going to have it.She got back on the com link and said this to Brink
"Commander Brink take those snipers out and take out the troops!"
He replied
"Yes my lord."
Shivilow then began to advance to the Jedi position more as she spun around every few seconds cutting troops down.She came upon one over men that had fallen in the fight and took his med pack.She marched on with a heavy heart as her troops began to move in with her.As she walked by a create of explosives a Jedi trooper came out from it and began to shot at her.She had to use her quick reflexes to deflect the shots from her head.As she block his shots she came closer to his position and spun her saber across his neck.She watched for a brief second his emotions at his last moments of life.Which there was none for he had a battle helmet on so his head roll with no eye widening effect.
Shivilow marched on for a few more meters before another explosion hit from behind her this time it was seventy meters from her.She force jumped out of its way and landed right dead in the center of the bridge.She could now see Hue the Jedi that lead this Jedi garrison across this bridge.She turned a deranged look to him as she said.
"Ah but you see my point of view you are the arrogant one and I'm the more civilized one.You on the other fact along with your order are the ones who are deaf to the force."
She said as she walked a bit to wards you with no fear in her what so ever.As the dark side was building off her so was her troops that was beginning to advance to wards her position.She took one look back as she continue to speak.
"As you see young Jedi you can't stop me today for you see this is just a start of things that are to come."
Shiv/Brink-6=142 Hue-4=119
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Jul 18, 2008 19:05:17 GMT -5
(This Sith had the darkside with him, The planet was strong in the Darkside as well, this aided the young Sith. He matched my speed and power something rare for one of his age, Even with the Darkside speeding his progression in the Force it still is impressive.)
(He stave's off my attacks and launches an assault of his own. With a quick one handed grip I swing my saber In a quick crescent in front of myself as I lift my elbow up and away replaced by my orange saber. The red and orange meet mixing and melding with one another. Static and electrical buzz fill the air as the flash from our saber fills my hood with light.)
(The swing connects at redirects the attack away to my right. Stepping back as I counter the attack at my elbow, Placing one foot back I place myself to defend. Moving my saber to point to the floor in a 45 degree angle I step in a spin to my right. Not very quick at first stepping to intersect with the swing at my right calf. Utilizing the power of Shien.)
(Stepping in connecting I push the attack away to my right and move into a quick spin around. My robes fly out and up into the air in front of Revan blocking his plane of sight. Slamming a foot down locking into position we lock blades. Pushing forward the sparks fill our faces with the red and orange glow. The Sith's mask reflects the white flashes. Looking into the slit for his eyes I can barely make out his eyes.)
(Shrouded in the darkside of the Force, This mask seemed similar shrouding his face. Used to allow the user to focus within and separate from outside distractions. But also it symbolized what a Sith focused on things like The Selfishness, The Power, And Oppression. Holding a hand down on my hilts end for leverage.)
(My dark brown robes flutter, Stepping forward I use the power of Djem So. Makashi was weak to a master of Djem So. Stepping forward I lower in my stance releasing a very powerful one handed swing.)
(The swings force was indeed powerful. The swing starts just under my left shoulder. Swinging the saber over to my right but keeping my body locked into place, much like my hilt which had sunk into my palm held in place by the hand grips.)
(My saber swings across and just at the opportune moment, I move into a quick shun. Different from the Shun I use while in the Ataru stance. In this spin I swing around for power, Keeping the saber closer to myself. It was not such a broad open and extended swing)
(Leaning down my saber move up as I move down bending at the waist down. My saber moves up at my side still in a one handed grip. The saber moves in a Circular slash holding at my side while i spin. A quick orange circle fills the air, Aimed at The Sith left shoulder but would move up toward his neck the face.)
(Moving around pivoting on my right foot I slam down my left. The spin wasn't a complete circle this time. Thrusting my saber forward and up I aim it at the Sith's right shoulder. The blades arc changes a slight bit leading my saber up as to stab the Sith in his right shoulder.)
(The firefight seems so distant as we clash blades in a duel to the death. This was one of the First Sith I had encountered that wasn't a loud wind bag or a manipulative monster. He seems more focused on the battle. But make no mistake he wanted me dead. Furious winds churn up a large sand storm up the beach climbing the dune and then covers the troops.)
(In the distance white flashes,Accompanied by the glare of red and orange glowing through a dust cloud. Robes flowing off the two locked in a duel aboard the skiff speeder.)
[glow=red,2,300]Sith Troops[/glow] Revan-113(Firefight -2) [glow=blue,2,300]Jedi Troops[/glow] Aeon-113(Firefight -4)
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Post by Darth Valrum on Jul 19, 2008 4:18:54 GMT -5
*The Jedi was a formidable foe, exactly what Revan was looking for. The force was strong with this Jedi, there was no doubt about that. As the Jedi evaded and blocked all of Revans moves he dished out a fair number of his own, throwing Revan on the defensive side. Still allowing his Makashi form to fight he set up a series of moves to block the deadly blows the Jedi wielded.*
*The orange blade lashed out towards Revan with force, but with a small duck and a side step it was easily evaded. But the orange blade didnt stop, it came with a slash towards Revan's left arm, but before the orange blade could make contact with flesh, Revan's own crimson blade was brought back up at an arch to redirect the Jedis blade away from his shoulder and narrowly missing his hood to his left by inches. Not even wasting time Revan prepared for the next move without hesitation.*
*Twirling the crimson lightsaber in his left hand he smirked and switched forms completely and went under the new form of Djem So. With the twirl in motion, he used the spins momentum to bring the lightsaber thundering up diagonally towards the Jedis stab with the force of Djem So to completely counter the Jedis stabbing attempt, and to overwhelm the Jedis stance completely. Sending the orange lightsaber up over his head instead of into his gut. In the swing of bringing up the Jedis lightsaber, he turned to the right with the swings momentum, and stopped as his back was exposed to the Jedi, but instead of leaving a time open for the Jedi to strike, Revan brought a sneak attack as he redirected the previous diagonal swing into a side slash, aimed over Revans own right side to strike at the Jedis right side as well.*
*Though the Jedi proved to be quick in parrying the attacks, Revan made up for it with his natural speed as well as the power from the Dark Side combined with Djem So. After the right side swipe, Revan turned to his left, no longer exposing his back, he now faced the enemy but brought his lightsaber hammering with him, aimed for another devastating side attack, but this time towards the Jedis left and used the momentum and power from the spin.*
*Their inter locking blades flickered and from afar it looked like a sun set in the sky with the two orange and red beams of energy clashing together. As the Skiff raced across the battle field a few troopers on both sides saw the fierce battle of the blades.*
*Revan tightened his grip on his lightsaber hilt with both hands. Now the Dark Side of the force was swelling within him, getting to the point of white hot coals, ready to be unleashed at a moments notice. That moment would soon come, due to anger and hate fueling Revans emotions, but never blinding him. He would not succumb to the same mistakes the other Sith have been known for. If ever the time came for Revans death in a battle, he knew for sure that it would not be from overconfidence of being blind by emotions or the Dark Side. He would never fall like the Previous Sith Lords before him. No, today, Revan would recreate a memory of the Sith to be burned into the minds of all through out the Galaxy, Sith, Jedi and Non force users alike. Revan would strike fear into the heart of the galaxy and make sure it stayed that way.*
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Post by Hue Ran on Jul 20, 2008 20:41:40 GMT -5
"Young you say?" Asked Hue on the verge of laughing. He simply shrugged it off and turned to one of her troops. He lifted the troop off the ground and flung him over the edge of the bridge with the force.
"Why dont we settle this ourselves. These troops are only here as a distraction anyway. We both could kill each others troops in no time, it is each other that we do not know if we can kill. Their lives need not be wasted here," exclaimed Hue.
He let the empty silence take the field and turned to his troops. He watched them carefully. He motioned for them to back away slightly then spoke his orders.
"Men give us some room."
He watched the faces of his troops as they moved backwards, the sniper fire died down and his commander gave Hue a warning look. HIs commander moved forward and whispered into Hue's ear.
"Sir you are already exhausted, maybe you should simply allow us to finish the fight and retreat to the command center. You can't trust her anyway. She will simply order her troops to kill you. Don't be stupid. We can at least have the snipers in position to take out anyone that even thinks about attacking you."
Hue's eyes settled on the commander and his gentle and understanding voice wandered into the commanders ears.
"Do not worry about me commander. I hope only to save as many of your troops as possible. Should I die, so be it. At least I died fighting for something bigger then myself. But hopefully I will be able to grant you and your troops more time with your families," Hue told the commander. His paused for a second letting his words sink in. "Commander you should get going with your troops."
The commander backed up allowing Hue to have some room and then he made a signal wih his hand. The troops backed up further allowing only Shiv, Hue, and Shiv's troops remaining on the bridge.
"So will you take this time to kill a helpless Jedi, or allow your troops to do it for you and allow your betrayal to tell me how truly honorable Sith really are."
His comment stung her troops hard. It brought anger through their hearts, it was a obvious thing. The heart of a person was easy to see.
Being only half Miraluka, Hue was able to change his eyes between regular sight and the sight of a Miraluka. Times like this was where that came in handy. His vision blurred for a couple of moments. He seemed blind for a second, but in seconds his vision returned, this time he saw what was right in front of him. This Sith Master that was in front of him was extremely..... well there was no way around it. She was hideous. Her troops faces now easier to read he could see much on them, unlike before when he could only see the emotions floating off of them.
"Are you ready?"
Troop Counter Shiv-1=141 Hue-0=119
(I only killed that one troop that went over the egde of the bridge. Which you got to admit is hilarious. ;D)
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Darth Shivilow™
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Myspace is where I have been but now I'm back to rp!Tuesday&Thursday is the only time I can get on.
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 21, 2008 20:53:52 GMT -5
(about to beat him now but will edit this now sorry for my lateness i had to finish a report for school.)
Shivilow watched as he threw one of her troopers off the bridge which she could careless.One less troop to worry about getting captured and being a prisoner.She walked to wards him and turned to her troops and said.
"Leave him to me I'm going to teach this one a lesson he'll never forget!"
She turned her evil glare at him and smiled her most deranged look ever which could only mean one thing.She had snapped blood and death had tapped into her mind.She had now reached her highest level of insanity.When this has happen before she has blacked out to find herself standing on top of bodies which she killed herself.She tilted her head to a crocked angle and then again to the other side which popped her neck.
"Ah but you see I have decided to fight you myself and see what is so great about the Jedi."
She said in a mocking tone as she smiled
"You see master Jedi there is a difference between you and I for one thing I like to fight.Second I want nothing more but to prove to this Galaxy who really is the evil one."
She began to move in closer and as she did her troops began to back up for they knew what she was about to do.
"I'm just going to have to show you what you need!Can we say hmmm a nasty cut between that pretty face of yours!"
She said as at that exact moment a knife from one of her fallen comrades came flying by her and straight to wards his direction.She had looked into his eyes while she was focusing in the force to cause the knife to come at him.She then fell into a middle stance as she yelled at Hue showing her true identity.
"Your blood will drip today as will mine but enough of the chit chat its time to fight!"
Shiv/brink-0=141
Hue-0=119
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Aeon Kensho™
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Jul 21, 2008 22:20:43 GMT -5
(Stepping back I take steps countering his advance and keeping distance between us. In a quick flip my saber switches it's direction to point down. Utilizing Shien the variation of Djem So. My saber is in my right hand in a one handed grip. Swinging in to intersect at the last moment I pull the blade back a little to absorb the force of the attack and Nerf his momentum.)
(Swinging the saber under my hand I push my hand over to my left side. Still in the reversed grip I use the same move helping stop the sheer force of the Djem So swing. Pushing the swing away I do not recoil I cannot afford to lose any more ground as I could fall off the moving hovercraft.)
(My right sleeve blows in the wind as I swing my saber in the reversed grip across in a downward diagonal swing from my top right to my lower left. Staying in fluid movement I lift my hilt up to my left at shoulder height. My blade pointing straight down I swing the blade back across myself aimed at the Sith's legs. The saber staying in constant movement.)
(As my saber reaches my right side still at shoulder height. I let go of my hilt allowing my saber to flip around the back of my hand. Grabbing my silvery hilt as it flips over my hand I take a horizontal swing at the Sith's head. If the swing hit it would slice his head in half. In a split second move into Djem So moving through the variations I utilize the full potential of the form 5.)
(My dark brown robes flutter quickly as we continue our duel aboard the Skiff speeder. We are beginning to hover over the bridge now. The sounds of our sabers clashing a swinging fills the air around us. Focused and at peace with myself, I pull on the lightside of the Force. Feeling my Solari crystal helping me hold off the penetrating Darkside energy, I remain focused.)
(I had heard the Sith's surface thoughts, He was delusional. Believing himself not corrupted or to be consumed by the Darkside. Exar Kunn thought this same way, Only to become a monster in the end. My attacks were of an advanced nature, Not a slow combo, The combination of Shien and Djem So on my end help me keep up with the enraged Sithlord. The combo was fierce as precise.)
(Explosion tear off behind us, Five allied troops are blown to smithereens in the cloud a heavy trooper begins to fire out with his gattlin gun, Two troops on each side cover him as he warms up his large shoulder strapped gun. The electronic winding sound begins to become of a higher pitch. Tearing out killing 5 troops in a line across they fall. The four other allied troopers had were shooting from one knee two on each side, Just as they seem to gain the upper hand another explosion tears the men apart!)
[glow=Purple,2,300]Troop Count[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]Sith troops/Revan[/glow] 108
[glow=blue,2,300]Jedi troops/Aeon[/glow] 103
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Darth Valrum
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Post by Darth Valrum on Jul 22, 2008 20:47:27 GMT -5
*Revan remained focused and refreshed. The Dark Side never slipped from his grip. The Jedi made a valiant defense against Revans Djem So, always negating the power of the forum, or evading it completely. But this was turning out to be a mere childs game, one that reminded him all to much of Revans Jedi training.*
/Flashback/ "Hold back Emry. Your allowing your forum to become to aggressive." *Gridding his teeth he nodded* "Yes Master." "Good. Just like that Emry." *Little by little things were adding up. Lessons were not making sense, they were flawed. There is no emotion, their is only peace... LIES! Emry had had enough. He clashed blades with the opposite student and pushed him a meter back from sheer strength, his emotions started to seep in, making him faster, more powerful, but more focused. He rained down blows upon the opponent, never faltering. Every one of his blows was precise and powerful, accompanied by speed and focus. His emotions guided him, opened his eyes, and before he knew it, his opponent was on the ground on his back, crawling backwards to get away from Emrys advancing blade pointed at the opponents throat, his master shouting in the background telling him to stop. Emry finally did and pulled his blade back up, his emotions snarling. He looked at his master who continued to frown and lecture about Emrys faults, that letting his emotion was a mistake, a path to the Dark Side. Without a word, Emrys pivited towards the Master and flicked his lightsaber from his hand. The blade hurled from out of his hand, the blue blade flew inches from his masters head and the blade cut into the pillar and then was still. The blade still pulsed in the pillar, digging deep. The Master was dumbfounded, as was the opponent, both in a state of shock. Emry walked out of the academy that day, never to be heard from again.*
/End Flashback/
*Emry felt the memory flow through him, it was fresh in his mind, as was his hatred for the Jedi, hatred for behind held back, lied to, and blinded. The Dark Side has never decieved him. At first it was too much to handle, and took control of him, but not anymore. No longer did the Dark Side Master him. Revan had mastered the Dark Side. And now, both Revan and the Dark Side would Master this battle, and this War.*
*Bringing his Crimson lightsaber up to his right he titled it down to his right to redirect the incoming blow from the Jedi's Orange blade. Directing the Jedi's blade to his right, the Jedi was wise to use this to attack his feet. He leaped sideways to his right, doing a cart wheel in mid air, but none of his limbs touched the ground to thoroughly evade the Jedis lower strike. A bit over to the right from his landing on both feet he smirked at the Jedi, but gave no pause and moved in.*
*The Jedis next move was strong, and would prove fatal if it connected. Revan never gave it that chance. Ducking down, he spun to his right, the Jedis blade flying straight though the path where his head had previously been. Completing the spin, still crouched down, Revan used the momentum of the spin and the power of Djem So to rise up as he attacked, making a slash aimed straight up from the Jedis right leg to his left hip.*
*Using the force he propelled himself up in the air, doing a back flip he ended up on the edge of the Skiff. Taking a few steps forward He used the force to propel himself forward, letting his anger seem into him, becoming white hot. Endless attacks ran though his mind, the Dark Side at his side, he chose the combo that would suit him well.*
*Revan ran at the Jedi and jumped into the air, spinning to the left, coming down straight in front of the Jedi, he brought his lightsaber from around his right aimed at the Jedis left side of his stomach. bringing his lightsaber back he crouched down, once again spinning to the right but brought his lightsaber away from himself, only holding it with one hand, but bringing his left foot aimed up diagonally at the Jedis stomach.*
*War waged around them, Troops were in hot battles of their own. Explosions sounded off, almost seeming to keep a beat and rhythm. Both sides did not intend to lose this war, but both wanted to come out alive. But sometime along this war, one side would fall.*
Sith Troops Revan(-3)-105(firefight) Jedi Troops Aeon(-4)-99(firefight)
ooc- i know i gave you a kick as my last move, it can be dodged or w/e, but i do not want it sliced off thanks. i plan to keep all my limbs, as well as yours, in one piece, for the most part.
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