Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Aug 5, 2008 23:00:42 GMT -5
(its ok but this is the time that I lose an arm and after i make my losing arm post I will flee its just that time.I'm cool with your current post and I'm going to flow with it.)
Shivilow was first thrown on her back by the jedi and with that throw her breath was knocked out of her.Her saber was also knocked out of her hand and she kept backing up.Then the jedi's foot came at her she attempted to grab it but failed to noticed the saber.The saber came down at lightning speed and cut off Shivilow's left hand.Shivilow grabbed her hand and pain soared threw her hand like wild fire.She got on her com link to her men and yelled out an order.
"Retreat get out now I'm on my way and have a medic ready i'm losing blood and fast.You have win this war jedi but you have not seen the last of me when you see the darkness think of me."
She let out a force scream as she got up from the ground and took off running back to camp.She called her saber back to her hand and placed it back on her belt.Shivilow had no energy to fight because blood kept coming out of her arm.Shivilow was ten feet from the came when she fainted from the amount of blood that had came out.She had now lost her first limb ever in a war but this time she didn't stay to fight.
"Get her to the med bay now she is dying can't you see that!"
Shivilow was unconscious from the lack of blood flow and was rushed into the med bay.They stopped her blood from flowing any more and gave her two pints of blood because thats how much she lost.The had to operate on her arm but they couldn't do it now they need to get out of this planet now.Mean while shivilow felt through the force and reached out to Revan.
"Revan take us out of the war we must retreat i have lost an arm and i need to get out of here alive!"
Shivilow-0=77 Hue-0=117
(ok i hope you can work out this into your next post hue and sure bring brink back!)
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Hue Ran
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Post by Hue Ran on Aug 6, 2008 19:57:20 GMT -5
Hue watched silently as the battle ended. There was nothing to fight nothing to kill. It was over......for now.
He knew as well as anyone that as soon as that Sith was healed she would come back for Hue. She would entice more killing and more suffering. The thought made Hue cringe. He had his chance to kill her. He could have finished her there, but what kind of person would he be then? He couldn't kill anyone in cold blood. He had hate in his heart for her and he knew if he had killed her he would have lost himself to the dark side. He would have let revenge and pain taken over his live. He could never let those things be part of him.
He did not require his soldiers anymore so in seconds he stood and opened up a com connection with his commander.
"Commander please take your troops back to the command center. Find Aeon and tell him the war has ended."
He still couldn't get the feeling of lose out of his mind. The Sith's commander had a child at home. He had a life to go back to. Hue couldn't allow his own choices to punish those around him. The soldier may have died, but Hue had something down his sleeve that no body had seen in this generation at least. It was a technique that he used only minutes ago. He could watched the points in the body to feel those that have died. It would take alot out of him, but he would be able to do it.
He concentrated hard on the force. His eyes changed colors again and all he saw was the force around him, the planets in orbit, the people on the planet. He could see all of that. He looked for the points in this Commander Brink and found them easily. He concentrated on the one point that was severed and hurt, he healed it and nortured it. The point started glowing again and Hue slumped down to the ground in exhaustion.
He got back to his feet slowly and started his walk away from the battlefield. Death had ruined this place and rained down upon this area. It happened all the time Hue knew, but that never made it easier to face. Death was everywhere. It controlled things. Evil, good it didn't matter which you served what mattered was how you lived. Good and evil would never get along and this was the cause of that. When they fought they killed more then simply their soldiers, they killed husbands and brothers and wives and sisters.
Sad as it was it helped Hue move quicker away from the ground littered with dead troops. One troop from them all had a faint light growing inside of him. It was the light of live. It spread and grew with the force.
Hue made it back to the command center. He didn't look to battered, but it wasn't his body that hurt, it was his heart. He had killed this day and that was punishment enough, death was never easy to deal to others for Hue. He had saved one, but killed many.
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Aeon Kensho™
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Post by Aeon Kensho™ on Aug 7, 2008 16:36:37 GMT -5
(Over looking the holo projection I see the full retreat of the Sith forces. Victory was ours this way. We had liberated the Kwi and saved their way of life and home world. While blood had been shed it was for the right reasons. The protection of others. While medics attempt to wrap bandages around my stomach I still continue with my duties as General. The Sith seem to be leaving their troops behind to make a hasty retreat with their tales between their legs. Their Ego's hurt more than anything I am sure.) "Commander Katar excellent work. Now scour the beach and east bridge for any survivors Jedi or Sith. Send the transmission to the Kwi it is safe for them to return the city is being abandoned by the invaders. Do not kill the enemy troops surrendering. We will show mercy, They could be useful." {Commander Katar}-"Yes Sir!" (Walking with the help of the medics they help me to our Med bay. Sending Healing energy into my side and arm I turn my hands away from myself, I could endure the wounds for the time being many of these troops will die without help. Lifting my hands I go from table to table sending Force healing energy to each victim. While some still die it helps their transition helping them attain peace in their final moments before death.) (Healing the last troops stubs left for legs I use my last ounce of strength helping others instead of focusing on myself. Staggering and falling over the table I go un conscious falling to the floor. Bringing in a medical pod it hovers in and I am lifting by the two medics. Treating the wounds again I am moved back to wards my shuttle. Laying there my face has cuts covering it beads of blood trickle down.) (As I am brought to the Shuttle I regain consciousness as the medical pod sidles Hue. Reaching my right hand out I place my hand on Hue arm grabbing the soth cloth of his robes in my battered blue hand.) "Master Ran do not focus on their negative, I can feel your sorrow. You focus is wandering as you focus on the pain. Know that we did what we did to protect the innocent. Your motives were pure. Killing is never the answer. Just be glade your are now among the dead. Yet I guess I am not one to talk! Ha!" "Return to the Jedi temple when I regain my strength I have council and training for you my old friend. It is good to see you again. The Force was with us this day. Soon we will hold a council great job Master Hue Ran" (The faint grip releases as I am pushes up the loading ramp of my shuttle. The Republic was victorious! And we had gained allies and information, Another ripple in the Force echoes. New Foes revealed, Conflicts concluded. )
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Hue Ran
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Post by Hue Ran on Aug 7, 2008 22:12:45 GMT -5
His soft words rang through Hue. Yes Hue had helped to save some, but had killed others. It was not the fact that he had killed so many, but it was harder then he had thought. He had been away for so long, to come back in this light in this situation was never how he thought it would happen. He always was so confident when he was younger he was so helpful, he had wished he would have come back with that. He didn't though.
He accepted the death of these soldiers. He could do nothing more then to look to help those that had been hurt. To concentrate on the pain was just another way of lossing himself to that exact pain. He was stronger then that, and this day he had proven that to himself. He could not stop the course of nature, he could only help make the course less rough.
He left those that would die to die. And knew that those that would live would live to help those that had lost one or more people in this fighting.
He walked through the entrance to the medical tent. The soldiers looked up stunned to see the commander that had helped them win this battle here helping them instead of coordinating some kind of pursuit. Hue walked up to a soldier. He had lost his leg to a grenade by the look of things. He was in intense pain. Hue laid his hand over the leg, he couldn't bring the leg back unfortunately, but he could heal the wound so that the bleeding would stop. Softly the opened wound sowed itself. Hue continued to the next table finding a soldier with a blaster wound to the shoulder. This wound was easy for Hue to heal and he went to the next person quickly. Behind him as he continued mmore soldiers got to their feet. He had healed many as h continued down the row of beds. Some in pure shock, others so very thankful for this blessing. All of them felt a obligation and honor to have served with him.
As Hue came to the last bed, he felt his energies low, but he went to that last table. The wound was bad. He had been shot over five times. One to the shoulder to close to the heart for the medics to help him. Another to his head, it wasn't bad, it was off to the right side of the head. One more to his left leg and two had hit his chest. The soldiers held their breath as they watched Hue walk up to the soldiers.
"Soldier what is your name,"asked Hue softly.
Oblivious to the fact that Hue could easily invade his mind to get the answer the soldier replied in a broken voice. "Captain John Colind sir."
"Captain John Colind, tell me, do you have any family?"
Tear formed at the ends of the soldiers eyes. The pain must have been horrible, even as Hue looked at the wounds he could only imagine how much they hurt him. " I am married with three daughters sir. Sir if I may, I want you to tell them that I love them."
Hue felt tears sting his own eyes at this point. His energy wasn't enough to use his technique twice. He had already saved that commander on the field. He would pass out before he would even start healing the multiple points in his body.
He would not give up without trying though. His eyes changed color and his vision cleared. He watched the force fade from within the soldier. He concentrated as much as he could. He wanted this soldier to have a chance to go back. To help this soldier to be complete and have another chance at life. His vision faded as he healed two of the points, but when he moved to the third, he fell to the ground and his regular vision returned. He had hoped, but hoped with his heart that he had healed enough to keep the soldier alive for a short while.
Even as he looked up to expect to see a live and more energetic soldiers, he looked up to find a dead and beaten soldier. He cried for the soldier, but he accepted this and he granted the soldiers what the soldier wanted most.
"I will tell them," was all Hue could manage to say before he passed out from the effort of his force powers.
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Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Aug 8, 2008 12:46:19 GMT -5
Shivilow's body was raced out of the tent and into her ship and four of her men went in with her.They had had no time to waste they had to get off the planet and they knew it.As the ship lifted off from the ground Shivilow finally woke up from the tiny comma.She looked around and noticed her arm was still gone which made her scream in pain.Shivilow didn't know why she made a stupid mistake in trying to kill the jedi when the sith were losing.She tried to get up from the table but then all medical people held her down from getting up.
"No Lady Shivilow you must stay down your still not ready."
She tried to grab him but the medicine kicked in and knocked her out so they could operate.While in deep in sleep they began to operate on her robotic arm.She began to watch the war again in her mind watching all her bad moves that she made.Then she saw another scene one with Revan fighting Aeon it went better than her fight.Shivilow was so arrogant with her fight with Hue how could she be so blind but that had to wait.The ship that she was on finally got out of the atmosphere and headed of to Mustafar.Shivilow would be asleep for days but would be awaken once the made land fall on Mustafar.Her robotic arm would look like the one she lost but she would have to wear a glove on it.
Back on the planet surface the rest of Shivilow's troops were all running to their ships to get away from being a POW.Once inside the escape pods they all took off from the surface and meet up on Shivilow's ship.One of her troop's turned to another warrior such as himself and asked.
"Did you see that fight oh man that was awesome!"
The woman trooper replied
"You idiot she lost an arm do you think that is awesome no its not she will not be the same.She even lost her life but she survived it now we will have to go into hiding from the Jedi."
The other's said
"Yeah we are no longer safe these Jedi will hunt down all of us no matter what."
(ooc. OK this is my last post in the war and it was a blast thanks everyone for giving me something to do!;D)
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