Coruscant, Rick Almanov's Estate

[ocelot]

somewhere in coruscant, there is RIck Almanov, in his apartment, while he is sitting in his chair contemplating when his parcel will arrive.

-the door opens and the delivery droid hands rick a package sayign "danger: Lightsaber materials" supplied with a red crystal, and three different lightsaber hilts, all coated black-

Droid: that will be 15000 credits, Mr. Almanov... -Rick pays the droid-thank yuo sir, have a nice day -droid exits the estate-

Rick: now let's see... -rick reads the instruction manual, and begins to follow directions for a KATANA lightsaber hilt. Rick grabs a curved handle, and puts on several parts, after 30 minutes, Rick assembles it to look like this:

[Aeon Kensho™]

{OOC-Ok I know you do not have a master yet Rick. I will lend some aid to help you in direction and etiquette.

First- Make sure that Dialog and actions are separate. Which you seem to be close to doing now. All you need to do is make sure to put quotations when you and others are speaking.

Second- Use Wookieepedia. There is much wrong with this in theory and in cannon. So go to Wookieepedia and look up lightsaber. Once you do that come back here and edit this post. Here is the link to Wookiee. Check your ideas before posting them.
starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page

Third- Be descriptive. Describe everything in much greater detail. Describe what you are wearing. Where you came from, Where you are planning on going. Remember keeping a direction is key.

Forth- Search for images of lightsabers from the movies. If you have over 25 post you can even get some help with the image if you need it. But I would say this picture of the hasbro lightsaber was a horrible choice.

8-)You have been allowed to post in the Galaxy which is very rare. So I will give you some aid so when you do go in for training you will be well on your way. ;)Right now you are in need of some guidance. And I will be happy to help you with that. So do this and edit this post move on to your next post and I will keep an eye on your progress.}