Post by Terra Firma® on Apr 1, 2009 12:42:04 GMT -5
Ok vig it is good, but I would like to see a better description of whats going on, the dialog is good, but I am having a hard time visualizing what is happening. what do the characters look like, big ,small, blond, red head, dark, light skinned, elf , human. just a little more detail would be nice. IMHO
otherwise it is good.
otherwise it is good.
