Reign of the Darkside~Prologue~ (comments welcome)

[Darth Angelus™]

This is the prologue of the fim that I am making. This prologue shows you how the galaxy has come to its knees and why the Jedi have been destroyed.

~~PROLOGUE~~

He stood there, watching, waiting for his moment. The cyan blade hummed softly as he stood. A high pitched sound, his saber clashed against the Sith's as the battle waged on. The sabers clashed in almost every angle. The Sith dropped to his knees panting. His moment was here, the Jedi raised his saber and sliced the Sith in two. A cold presense crawled up his spine. He turned. Hundred of Sith stood there all sabers ignited, the Jedi ran at them knowing he was doomed. Luke Skywalker was doomed.

Six thousand years later

Ronok stood infront of the council. His presense made some of the council members uncomfortable, he was part Sith after all. The council had made a decision.

One of the masters stood up and walked to him. a blue hand reached his shoulder.

[glow=orange,2,300]"Ronok, welcome to the council"[/glow]
Before he could speak Starship blasts showered like rain on the planet Onderon. Ronok regained his balance and headed to the entrance. He quickly pivoted on his right foot and turned around running away. The Sith entered the Temple. red blades iluminating the entire Temple. The council stood firm, they lightsabers came to life and they exploded out of the hilts. Colours ranging from blue to purple, challenged the Sith's.

Ronok stood in the middle. The force was strong in him. He channeled his power to his hands and out exploded an amazing force push. Sith were flung into the air like ragdolls, some were killed by hitting collujms but most fell out of the exit.

[glow=green,2,300]"RUN!"[/glow]
Ronok screamed at the top of his voice as he activated his lighsaber, the orange blade erupted from the hilt. Some Sith stood back up shocked by the boys power some laughed. Ronok threw his lightsaber, using the force to keep it activated. He killed six Sith in one throw. The rest backed off and retreated. Blood curdling screams came from just outside. he looked back the council stood there. They walked forward pushing Ronok back.

[glow=green,2,300]"What are you doing?"[/glow]
The grandmaster turned to face his padawan his red eyes glowed, and showed partial bits of his face. A smile appeared on the mans face. His padawan nodded, and back off.

[glow=orange,2,300]"We stand here and now, to protect Ronok from harm. Got it?"[/glow]
All agreed by raising their lightsabers high. One Sith walked up the stairs, his stature was incredible, not built but not slim, just on average. His took off his hood and laughed.

[glow=black,2,300]"Is this the great Jedi Council? And Grandmaster Aeon Kensho? My I thought your little friend Ronok caused the death of the Sith"[/glow]
A female master stood forward. Her hair passed her shoulders, it flowed like a water fall. her eyes piercing cyan. She pointed her blade at the sith.

[glow=silver,2,300]"He did, and you aren't getting near him Machron!"[/glow]
Machron lifted the master in the air and crushed the air from her lungs, killing her. Her bones cracked, she twisted in all directions. Then she fell to the ground. Dead.

[glow=orange,2,300]"You will pay for that"[/glow]
But before Aeon could do anything. The rest of the Coucil charged. Machron cut them down as if they were insects under his shoe. Aeon activated his orange blade and span it in hs hand.

[glow=orange,2,300]~Ronok run! I won't be able to hold him off for long, but it is esstential that you get out. Go into hiding change your name! Start a new life~[/glow]
Aeon charged at the Sith who in turn arn at him. Aeon attempted to cut the Sith in twop but was countered as the Sith threw Lightning at him. Aeon absorbed the Lightning and sent out a powerful force push. The Sith fell backward. He got up and threw his saber at Aeon, who easily cut the hilt in three.

[glow=orange,2,300]"Surely you do better than that"[/glow]
The Sith was outraged. Using the force he activated every Lightsaber in the room. The room glowed as twenty Ligghtsaber came to life. Aeon had no time. He charged at Machron, dodging the blades as he threw them at him. He got in reach of Machron. But then he felt a sharp pain in his stomach. He looked down to see a silver blade was ticking through him. He fell to his kness, he could feel Ronok stopping.

[glow=orange,2,300]~Run....Don't stop.....Don't forget yout training....May the force be with you, master Ronok...~[/glow]
Aeon collapsed to the ground dead. His eyes dulled to gray as his head made contact with the ground.

Ronok got into his fighter and blasted out of the Hangar. He dodged bolts of energy as he twisted and turned. He broke atmosphere and saw 'The Fleet'. He shuddered as he jumped to hyperspace just in time. It was time he made a new life. And he new just the place. Nar Shaddaa.

[Darth Angelus™]

~~PROLOGUE CONT.~~

It was a few hours, Ronok couldn't believe it. It wasn't possible. The location was secret, no one knew where it was except the Jedi. And the Queen of Onderon, Yangferia. And she wouldn't have given the location while she still lived.

Ronok punched the sonar screen, cracking the glass. He was fustrated. The only place where he grew up was destroyed. And as far as he knew, he was the only Jedi left. But there could be another...No, he would've been on the Sith's hitlist and been killed a long time ago. But no harm in checking.

He entered Nar Shaddaa atmosphere, and entered the surface. He was glidng through like a bird on dantooine. But Dantooine was destroyed. Like Tatooine, lehon, Raxis Prime, and even Coruscant. He cleared his head and settled down in a refugee sector. he will start looking there. As he exited, he was greeted by a Bounty Hunter.

[glow=yellow,2,300]"You gots big bounty on your smelly head jedi. Erm...Hands up"[/glow]
Ronok lefted him in the air and broke his neck. Ronok took the clothes off the Boutny Hunter, and took his robes and tunic off, and quickly changed. He consealed his lightsaber, and took the blaster. He threw the body oveer the edge, and tucked the robes, and tunic into the spare parts compartment.

[glow=black,2,300]"Okay. Man, this place looks like Coruscant"[/glow]
He had a plan, he would ask around for information onn this ex-Jedi. He would need his help. he walked outinto the open and stopped as a bunch of Bounty Hunters passed him by. He headed for the arms dealer. He got there and found that the rodian was sleeping. He picked up the only helmet there. A black and gold Mandalorian helmet. He placed eight hundred republic credits on his pillow, and walked off.

He passed so many people, they looked at him as iff he was going to kill them. He went to talk to a man, but the man screamed in horror and ran away.

[glow=black,2,300]"Great now I'm a scary Mandalorian. Just great!"[/glow]
Ronok walked to the canteen where he would start plan B. It took him half an hour but he eventually found it. He went to enter but the gaurd stopped him.

[glow=red,2,300]"Password"[/glow]
[glow=black,2,300]"Let me in or I'll have your head next to my drexl head on my wall"[/glow]
He turned on the voice changer to sound threatening. The gaurd obviously pictured the senario as he shuddered and let him in, without haste.

As he entered he saw his man. Sitting down at a table head high in Juma Juice. Drunk. Ronok walked to him and kicked the table.

[glow=black,2,300]"Vax Kote?"[/glow]
The mans head raised. His eyes widened as he saw the mandalorian standing there, only a metre from him. He reached for his Lightsaber but Ronok used the force and grabbed it before he could. He then took off his helmet, Vax's eyes widened, and a smile appeared on his face.

[glow=purple,2,300]"Ronok Vang! It is good to see you. Sit down, what can I do for you?"[/glow]
[glow=black,2,300]"Vax the order is destroyed. We are the only remaining Jedi, in the galaxy"[/glow]
[glow=purple,2,300]"Ha! The last? Are you serious?"[/glow]
Ronok's face didn't change but Vax's smile turned into a frown. He leaned forward, and whispered in his ear.

[glow=purple,2,300]"Aeon? Is he alive? What about the council?"[/glow]
Ronok spoke quietly into his friend's ear. The wrods he spoke put a hole in Vax's heart.

[glow=black,2,300]"No, Aeon is dead. Darth Machron killed him. We, and I mean we, are the only thing standing in the way of the Sith"[/glow]
[glow=purple,2,300]"So what do we do?"[/glow]
[glow=black,2,300]"I plan on surviving this purge. There is a place called Sanctuary, I will head there"[/glow]
[glow=purple,2,300]"I can't leave the galaxy yet my friend but I will send com messeges if anything brews"[/glow]
Ronok rose from the table. It hurt him to part woth his old friend again, he was exiled by the coucnil for saying thst the Sith would return to crush them all. He was right.

Without looking back he gave Vax his lightsaber and walked back to his fighter. He got there quicker this time around. He put his helmet on and ran to his fighter. Everyone jumped out of the way, as he expected. He got to his fighter. He threw the helmet over the side and hopped in. He took off and exited the atmosphere. He then blast ed into hypersapce and headed for Sanctuary. The place where he could rebuild the Order and destroy the Sith.

[Corran Horn]

-I loved the start! the vision, i could picture it all with such clarity. Now that's a very, very good thing. I understand that this is just the first sorta outline of the story, but the conversation text with vax is a bit short and seems a bit rushed. The last of the jedi thing has been done, has it not? And how are you gana make a film with RP characters that live over seas? But please don't get me wrong, this looks very promising. I like it I love the fact that you make sure every one ronok's actions and expressions are described.

*Borat: Izz very nize!*

[Vax Kote™]

Well that is what a prologue is for. It sums up what is going to happen in the story. Like this story; it's a non-cannon version of what would happen if the sith managed to wipe out most of the jedi except for two....a Jedi Master and an ex-jedi. I find that really creative and it could give us some ideas of future storylines.

[Darth Angelus™]

This is a short piece to understand Vax's position in the storyline. Will write more later. Stay tuned for more!

~~PROLOGUE CONT.~~

Vax was sitting in his chair, he was greeted by another round of Juma Juice. He laughed loudly, his eyes were quite heavy. He wanted to go with Ronok but, he had to do something first.

His eyes darted upward as a Sith entered the bar. Vax smiled, the Sith walked to him and stopped where Ronok had.

[glow=gray,2,300]"Are you Vax Kote?"[/glow]
Vax merely laughed at the Sith, he had to cover himself somehow, thinking on the spot was his speciality. His closed and opened his eyes, adjusting to the light.

[glow=purple,2,300]"No..I'm....I'm Darret Ashes. Bounty Hunter, you see Feroc just in here? Mandalorian! Ha! And I thought they were extinct"[/glow]
It happened so fast the Sith went for his lightsaber, but Vax had his in hand. Vax sliced the table in two and cut the Sith's head off. The purple blade hummed as he stood. Blade blade creeped back into his hilt as he left the bar.

[glow=purple,2,300]"I was so comfortable"[/glow]
As he got outside he saw Ronok's fighter take off. he cleared his throat, and continued downthe empty street. He stumbled a few times then arrived at his destination. He went through the doorway and headed toward the hole in the ceiling. He got there and looked at his old starfighter. He opened the cockpit and got in, the astromech droid came to life as Vax primed the engines.

Sixteen Bounty Hunters walked into the house and stood in shock at the fighter. They all raised their rifles and rocket launchers, and pistols aiming at the fighter.

[glow=purple,2,300]"Can we talk about this?"[/glow]
He got no reply. So he, using the force pulled the pin in the detnators, they all screamed in shock and exploded. Vax laughed at this, they sounded like little girls when they screamed.

[glow=purple,2,300]"What a shocking suprise. I wonder what else I have up my sleeve"[/glow]
He took of twisting and flipping. Screams of triumph, erupted from his fighter as he engaged a squad of Sith fighters. One cme at him fast, he took that one out with rockets. There other five, well, they were pathetic, he just shot them while they were dead ahead.

[glow=purple,2,300]"What the Sith are recruiting children to fly fighters now? Why didn't the Jedi do that?"[/glow]
He gasped at the end of his sentence, he then blasted into hyperspace, leaving the bar behind to accompany Ronok on his mission.

[Vax Kote™]

Keep it coming vod. You are doing good.

[Darth Angelus™]

Ronok collapsed to his knees. After he had exited hyperspace he had sped his way to Sanctuary, only to find it already been attacked by the Sith. Ronok let out a large scream, it echoed through the mountains and back to him. Tears rolled down his cheeks. Nowhere was safe, no one was safe.

He got up and headed to the closest hut. He saw the horror that was Darth Machron first hand; a man lay on the ground in pieces, the rest if what seemed top be his family lay dead, necks broken, shocked faces looked into empty space. Ronok shivered.

[glow=brown,2,300]“I am no longer a Jedi. From this day forward I am now a Hunter. I will be known as Feroc Canos! Sith Hunter!”[/glow]
He had yelled at the top of his lungs, screaming every word as they escaped his mouth. The words echoed through the mountains again. He exited the hut and looked around, after hours of searching he found the armoury, he busted the door open and searched the building for ammunition, and supplies. He took a DC-15, two DL-44’s, two thermal detonator belts, and finally a rocket launcher just in case.

[glow=brown,2,300]“This will be handy, I just picture Machron when I set this off in his face!”[/glow]
He chuckled to himself, and took five rockets. He walked out of the building and walked to his fighter. The droid beeped and the spare part compartment opened, his robes fell out first and the parts tumbled over them. He took the robes and stuffed them into the back. He then out his weapons in with the ammunition, the compartment closed and the cockpit opened. Ronok hopped in and he primed his engines.

[glow=brown,2,300]“Time to get even mate. Lets go to, oh I don’t know. You pick”[/glow]
The droids beeped excitedly, beeps and whirls escaped him. Ronok chucked hard at the droids answer. He shook his head smiling. He looked back at the droid, he built the bugger form scratch, but he didn’t program it with humour.

[glow=brown,2,300]“Okay, I think that’s a bit ironic really. But hey, your choice. Okay set coordinates for Korriban”[/glow]
The coordinates were locked and he took off blasting through the atmosphere, he exited it, and sailed for a moment in space. He thought of a game plan, once deciding what he was going to do he entered hyperspace.

While in hyperspace, he thought for a moment. Then he crossed him arms. He cloaked his force ability, and put his game face on. He wasn’t looking forward to going back to Korriban.

[glow=brown,2,300]“Home sweet home”[/glow]

[Darth Angelus™]

~~A quick piece for Machron. My friends have been bugging me to write about him~~

Machron sat on his chair, his eyes closed, he sat in the middle on a stone room, Sith Assassins at every corner, watching for any enemy movement. And two Marauders next to him, their red blades hummed at every movement they made.

A man ran down the hallway, he ran to Machron's chamber. He stopped, he showed the gaurds the datapad who let him in.

[glow=red,2,300]"My Lord! We have a fix on a Jedi!"[/glow]
Machron stood up quickly, a smile erupted onto his face, he walked down the steps to the messager. Each step he took was elegant, he was nkown as the most elegant of the Sith, yet the most ferocious. He took the datapad from him and read it, after reading it he laughed. He finally got him. Vax Kote.

[glow=black,2,300]"Why would a Jedi Knight go to Dathomir? The Jedi Temple there is in ruins"[/glow]
The man stood firm, not showing any loss of energy. He was the most respected of the Sith Marauders. He smiled back at Machron, a smile so evil it challenged Machron's.

[glow=red,2,300]"what will we do about this insect?"[/glow]
[glow=black,2,300]"Do what we do best boy. Kill him.....Slowly"[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]"My pleasure"[/glow]

[Darth Angelus™]

Vax walked among the ruins of the Temple on Dathomir, his eyes watered as he saw the aftermath of what 'The Fleet' can accomplish. He yelled in apin as he felt the absence of light on this planet. Vax fell to his knees as they buckled beneath him.

[glow=purple,2,300]"Why? Why do this to civilians? THEY WERE INNOCENT!"[/glow]
His voice echoed through the moutnains, and carried on scaring away nearby creatures. His anger came to a boiling point. The veins in his head showed, his muscles tightened. He picked up what was left of the Temple with the force and threw it away from him!

[glow=purple,2,300]"AAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHH!"[/glow]
He heard footsteps behind him, then clapping. Next the sinister laugh that Vax reconized immediately. Dassij Bancan. Machron's personal assassin. Vax laughed at the little man. Then he paid the price.

Two lightsabers activated and cut his chest, and left arm making him fall, he screamed in agony. But using the force quickly he healed his wounds and got up acivating his own saber.

Vax swung at his neck only to have it met by two blades as he expected, he then shuved his knee into Dassij's gut winding him. Dassij fell to the ground. Vax pointed his purple blade at the man's neck.

[glow=purple,2,300]"Surrender?"[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]"I die for Machron!"[/glow]
Dassij moved his neck forward making the blade go straight through, Vax couldn't believe it. But he shrugged and walked off into the distance, then he saw the assassin's fighter. He put the body into the fighter and sent it back to Korriban.

Vax put his large black hood over his head casting a long shadow over his face, he walked back to his fighter. As he reached it he was welcomed by his droid, who was modifying the thrusters like Vax told him to.

[glow=purple,2,300]"You done yet?"[/glow]
His answer was happy beeps, andbops, coming from the droid. Who in turn flew up and onto the fighter, hopped into its area and primed the engines. Vax then hopped in and took off. Vax knew if there was one place Ronok would go it would be Korriban. Vax hated Ronok at points, especially when he would drag him into these messes.

[glow=purple,2,300]"I hate when he does this"[/glow]

[Vax Kote™]

Looking good; anything more coming up vod?

[Darth Angelus™]

~~Sorry it took me so long but here is the second last piece of the prologue! ENJOY!!~~


Ronok was quick on his feet sprinting straight to the Temple, he dodged multiple blasts from heavy turrets, with his helmet still on he was able to target several soldiers coming vlose tio him, he pulled out his DL-44's and shot each and everyone of them in the head leaving the hole smoking as he ran past.

[glow=maroon,2,300]"A few down one armada to go!"[/glow]
He was closing to the Temple as two Sith Acolytes jumped down and activated their lightsabers, they laughed at him thinking he was a normal assassin.

[glow=red,2,300]"Looks like we got ourselves an assassin boys"[/glow]
Ronok was lifted into the air thrown at a rocky wall, he flipped and jumped off the wall landing on his two feet. He laughed loudly, and lifted them up with the force and smashed theminto the temple door, killing them.

He walked over the bodies and into the darkness toward Machron, the slayer of the Jedi...

* * * * * * * *

Machron watched the assassin dodge the blasts and kill three patrols with no effort. And after sending his bodyguards he then realised this person may very well be Ronok. He sat back in his throne. His eyes darted as a body was brought before him, Dassij Bancan's dead, limp body was dropped in front of him. He looked at the men and then the body.

[glow=black,2,300]"What am I to do with this thing? It is a shell, the life of this person is gone. Incinerate it"[/glow]The men looked at eachother and then back to Machron who frowned and raised his right hand and lifted both men into the air choking them.

[glow=black,2,300]'If you don't then I WILL DESTROY YOU!"[/glow]
A large explosion detroyed the door and a man entered, his frame was built, and this person meant buisness. The person entered and squinted his eyes.

[glow=gray,2,300]"Boo"...[/glow]

[Vax Kote™]

Getting up their my friend....anything more. I have been waiting for some more hard-core action to take place.

[Darth Angelus™]

Machron clapped as he got up from his throne and walked to the figure standing where the door used to be. Big mistake. Within seconds Machrin was sent flying arcoos the room into the black stoned wall, the guards stood in shock at the power the man possessed.

[glow=silver,2,300]"Now. Who's next?"[/glow]
A silver blade erupted from a bronze lightsaber hilt, the man went straight into Ataru and attacked before the men inside the room knew what happened. The man became a blur, using the force to speed his movements to a point where everything was nearly at a stand still. He had killed everyone in the room before a single body hit the ground. When he finshed the bodies fell to the ground in sync.

Machron woke to see the black eyes of his attacker, the eyes were like pits of death, no mercy, no remorse for the Sith. His eyes widened as the large fist amshed into the Dark Lord's face knocking him out cold.

* * * * * * * *

Ronok entered the Temple to find that it was filled with dead guards and blood stained walls. In his years as a Jedi he had never seen such carnage, he sight he saw would make anyone suspect a Drexl lava came through here, but Ronok noticed the lightsaber wounds in a few soldiers, the rest were sliced and diced.

[glow=maroon,2,300]"What a messy man"[/glow]
He shook his head and proceeded down the dark hallway. He felt a presense behind him, a orange blade hissed from his silver and black hilt and stopped when he saw Vax was behind him. Vax nodded and Ronok deactivated his hilt and put it back on his belt. Then the blood curdling screams began, and they both ran to the direction of the screams.

[Darth Angelus™]

~~I have to put this in, I don't cre if the last post was the last I have to fill the gap, so when my Fanfilm is done it makes sense with the prologue. enjoy the last pieces of the puzzle~~


The two Jedi ran down dark corridors and passed many blooded up man and women, soldiers for Machron now dead, Ronok smirked as he ran past an Admiral who obviously 'lost his head'. The two stopped at what was left of a large door that led into Machrons chamber. Ronok picked up a large custom made gun, after a few seconds of inspecting it he cocked irt and entered

[glow=maroon,2,300]"I have a bad feeling about this. Look at these bodies, clearly lightsaber damage"[/glow]
[glow=purple,2,300]"Ronok!"[/glow]
Ronok pivoted on his right foot and ran to his calling friend, when he got there he found out why. Machron. The threat that was meant to be unstoppable lay there limp, but not dead. Ronok inspected the wounds Machron had on him, he took a large fist to the face it seemed. Ronok chuckled to himself, Vax looked at him worried. Whoever could take Machron out was indeed a powerful person, but is the attacker a Jedi or Sith? Or maybe neither.

[glow=purple,2,300]"What do you think did it Ronok?"[/glow]
Ronok kept inspecting and hardly heard his friend question him, he noticed something on Machrons chest, a pendant, a small, and light corotis pendant. Ronok had seen it before, but where? He snapped out of it when Vax shook him.

[glow=maroon,2,300]"What?"[/glow]
[glow=purple,2,300]"What could've done this?"[/glow]
[glow=maroon,2,300]"I don't know, I really don't know"[/glow]
They both up at the same time as the Dark Lord started to wake up, Ronok put the large gun down and activated his lightsaber, the orange blade erupted from the hilt with a quick hiss. Vax did the same, a purple blade emitted from the black hilt, he eyed Ronok for a second and then kept his eyes on the now conscious Machron. Ronok couldn't hold it in any longer, he had to do it.

[glow=maroon,2,300]"Wakey, wakey, Makey"[/glow]
Vax looked at Ronok in disbelief, how could Ronok still have something funny to say after all these years he had known him, it wasn't right. He slowly shook his head, and slowly looked back at the man trying to get up. Ronok began to smile, the moment he had been waiting for is at hand. A duel with Machron, the most ferocious warrior in the galaxy, against two Jedi Blademasters.

[Vax Kote™]

Awwww c'mon why did you have to do that. I was getting really into the story. Please tell me you have more coming up because I am getting really interested in this story. PLEASE!!!