The Dark Guardian

[Vax Kote™]

((If you have gone through the RP and watched some of the RPs performed then you may of seen my character; Vax Kote turn to the darkside of the force then return to the jedi. But what if Vax never returned to the Jedi Order instead remained a corrupted individual of the darkside? Then what? Well that is what I am basing a fan fiction around. The path that Vax took that many did not want to see him take. If you have any ideas to add in please don't be afraid to PM me those ideas. THANKS!!!))

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Information

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[glow=red,4,000]Korriban[/glow]
Lightsaber combat form 7 Vapaad and Juyo had little information about it. Only a few individuals had managed to grab a hold of the information of Juyo. Rumore had stated that those jedi who practiced Juyo were subject to turn to the darkside of the force? But was this information true - well that was the reason why the Jedi Council sent Jedi Knight Vax Kote to figure it out - to travel to Korriban to gather any information of the form. Vax had traveled to the planet after figuring out that studied information of Form 7 was actually on Korriban.

Korriban was a dark and mysterious planet, it held many secrets that many including the jedi wanted to figure out. Only a few jedi would travel to the planet. Those jedi who traveled to the planet never left the planet; instead they turned from the lightside of the force over to the darkside of the force. It had happened time and again; it had been seen as a dangerous planet. Only a few jedi who had recieved the right amount of training would come to this world.

Information within the Jedi Archives would only be held to Masters and Knights of the jedi order. It was restricted knowledge. Holding a Sith Temple and many sith bases that could act as a decoy to the actual temple were sith apprentices trained.

"Korriban shall be as it always was. A graveyard for the darkest of the Sith Lords, still whispering within their tombs. It shall always be a source of evil, spawning threats throughout the millennia. It, like Malachor, brushes the edges of the empire that waits in the dark. And like Malachor, the Sith have forgotten it … for a time. They will remember."

---Darth Traya

Jedi Knight Vax Kote had been sent to the planet to uncover the mysteries behind Korriban and gather the information of Juyo to practice the form. It had been said that he would be the one bring Form 7 back into the jedi order. Several days after Vax had landed on Korriban contact had been cut short from Vax and the Jedi Order. Somehow? Someway? Vax had lost contact with the Jedi Order and the order had lost contact with Vax. Fearful of what happened to Vax; Grandmaster Aeon Kensho and Jedi Master Ronok Vang traveled to Korriban only to realize that Vax had been turned to the darkside of the force by a sith named Visciouz.

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The Characters

These will be the characters involved in the fan-fiction. More will be added so keep checking back here for information on the characters that will be apart of the story. Enjoy!!!!!

Darth Zaken

The once Jedi Knight Vax Kote turned to the darkside of the force by a sith named Visciouz. Being broken through physical torture he is pushed to his limit eventually striking with his lightsaber and following through the path of anger, hatred, and revenge.

Jedi Grandmaster Aeon Kensho

Awoke Vax from his freezing on Kamino and trained him in the ways of the jedi. Vax considered him more of a father then what the Kaminoans put him through during his time in the Clone Wars. After becoming a Jedi Knight; Aeon assigned Vax to travel to Korriban to gain the information needed for Form 7 to be used in the Jedi Order.

Jedi Master Ronok Vang

Aside from the many clone brothers that Vax had during the Clone Wars; as a jedi Vax held one close to himself as a brother. Ronok Vang. Granted master status before Vax but through it all they held a strong bond to each other.

Darth Visciouz

An unknown individual that the jedi have no knowledge of. But after turning Vax to the darkside of the force it became clear that Visciouz had not been to taken upon likely. Forcing Vax into the darkness through physical torture and being broken to give into his anger and hatred.

Jadoch Taithum

A young jedi padawan who followed Master Aeon and Master Vang onboard the Illuminative to the dark planet of Korriban. He remained on the ship and encountered a sith assassin known as Lacerus.

more to come..... ;D

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Prologue will be posted after Christmas. Seasons Greetings everyone and have a Merry Christmas.

[Vax Kote™]

((Before I get into big nasty long Chapters in this Fan-Fiction that I will be working on. Here is a prologue of the how Jedi Knight Vax Kote had transformed into the sith Darth Zaken through torture. Then we will move on from there.))

~~Prologue~~

[glow=orange,4,000]"Korriban is a dark and mysterious place to be Vax. You must expect the un-expected when venturing into something unknown such as this. The lightside of the force will guide you and help you. Remember though that you must stay centered and focused on what you are performing. In the wrong direction that you turn forever will you find yourself down the dark path of the darkside of the force. Stay safe and may the force be wtih you....my friend."[/glow]

3 Days Later

Three days; that is what took was three days and then nothing. Jedi Knight Vax Kote had gone to Korriban to gain a holocron that contained information of Form 7: Juyo. But during his stay communication between him and the Jedi Temple on Coruscant had ceased. Nothing was coming in or out of Korriban. All hope seemed lost at the very moment.

However, unknown to the Jedi Order; Vax had been beaten in a brutal lightsaber fight against a sith lord who went by the name of Visciouz. This sith was completely unknown to the order. No history? No family records? Nothing came through of who this individual was. But like everything no one in the order of the jedi knew who she was. It was a complete mystery of what she wanted. It came to be told when Vax had disappeared after being beat in a saber duel against Visciouz. Lossing against the mastered form of Juyo. Soon after Visciouz took Vax and tortured him into submission. Submission of turning against the jedi and becoming a corrupted user of the darkside of the force.

He had completely changed in three short days of being tortured by Visciouz. The oath he took with the Jedi Order was all but gone. He was now a servant of the sith. An apprentice of the sith lord Visciouz. Training under her to use his anger and hatred; learning the ways of Juyo so he could fully master the form. The darkside of the force was slowly corrupting him; changing his face....taking control of the once proud Vax Kote. He was not no more then a servant to the sith.

[glow=red,4,000]"You are indeed skilled in lightsaber combat Lord Zaken. Juyo will serve you well. Now that you have turned from the ones who kept many lies against you we can now focus on your true potiental as a sith. But you must first destroy past and through that would be killing your former master and your near brother. The darkside of the force is with you Zaken and so is Form 7 it will only be a matter of time before your friends arrive and we destroy what is left."[/glow]
Stepping back Zaken de-activated his new lightsaber; a silver and black color fueled with Zaken's anger and hatred. Moving the weapon down he clipped it onto his black belt and kneeled down before Visciouz bowing to the sith that moved through days of torture just to turn Vax from the lightside of the force. Wearing now the cloths of a sith he lowered his head hidding the features of his face and what he was wearing. A red hood drapped over his head, shoulders, and down his back.

[glow=purple,4,000]"Yes, my master. The jedi wont have a clue what hit them until they arrive and it is to late."[/glow]
[glow=red,4,000]"Good. Now rise; go an prepared. I sense that they will be arriving shortly. Lets make our jedi guests feel....welcomed."[/glow]
A cold cackling laugh escaped from Visciouz's throat. Nodding his head; Zaken rose to his feet the red hood casting over his face hidding everything except for a pair of corrupted sith eyes which glowed through the darkness of the room that the two stood within. Turning away he left the room his black boots clanking against the ground while he red robe swayed behind him with each step that he took. Memories phased through him of Aeon and Ronok. His eyes closed for a moment knowing full well what he would be doing? Destroying his past....that was his objective.

*More will be continued on tomorrow*

[Vax Kote™]

Prologue Continued....

The Illuminative (Aeon Kensho's flag ship)

There was no holographic image; just simply the sound of static cackling through the communication message that Vax had sent to the order. A message that no one knew of it being a trap. It was hard to believe that the order would send in whatever they could to rescue an improving Jedi Knight who held high hopes for becoming apart of the Jedi Council. But now was a different price. Jedi Grandmaster Aeon Kensho, Jedi Master Ronok Vang, and a young padawan by the name of Jadoch Taithum where on their way in a search and rescue mission for the jedi knight.

In the midst of the travel Master Ronok Vang held a strong connection to Vax just as Aeon did. Vax seemed more like a close brother to Ronok while Vax nearly considered Aeon to be his father more then a brother. The strong connection each of them held was undeniable. It was enough for them to leave Coruscant to help Jedi Knight Vax. Over and over again the transmission played while Ronok sat in a cross-legged postion; his black jedi robes hanging loosely on his shoulders with the hood covering his face. The sounds moved through Ronok of what was going on.

[glow=purple,4,000]"Ma...-static-...master....Aeon....-static- can you read.....-static- me. This is Vax.....-static-...from Korriban. I am in....-static-....of assistance. Transmission....-static- was cut short....-static- when I arrived. Please....-static-.....I need....."[/glow]
There was a sound of pain, anquish....along with the ever lasting sound of anger and hatred of what was happening to the person he truly cared for. He wanted to help Vax whatever happened to him he wanted to deal with it on his own turf. However, Aeon also felt for the worse of what happened to Vax.

The blue-skinned man walked into the room that Ronok sat in on-board the Illuminative. The transmission sent by Vax looped over and over again; static sounds a steady cackling of Vax's voice. The anger within Ronok rising of what could of happened to Vax. Aeon's eyes glowed a bright red color. Not the color of a sith but it showed a color of honor and readiness aside from anger and hatred. Lifting his hand up Aeon waved it over shutting off the transmission. As it ended Ronok turned around to the person that taught him as well as Vax.

[glow=orange,4,000]"You are angry Master Vang?"[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"I am worried for what had happened to Vax, master."[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"I too dream for the worst Ronok but you must remember your training. Anger is not the way of a jedi. You must remain calm, centered, and focus on what you are doing and why you are doing it. I fear for Vax's saftey as well but that is no reason to have anger for it. Whatever trouble Vax is in I am sure he will find a way out of it. We just have to hope for the best and truly hope he is alright."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"I understand master. Thanks."[/glow]
Ronok let off a smile as he rose to his feet and bowed to Aeon just as Aeon bowed to Ronok out of the deep hardness of respect. Standing up they turn to leave the room walking back to the bridge of the Illuminative where they would be awaiting to arrive above Korriban. It was now or never to reach Korriban and rescue the soon-to-be Jedi Battlemaster of the Jedi Order. Time seemed short but each had to hope for the best on this mission.

[Vax Kote™]

Prologue Continued....

Sith Academy- Korriban[/u][/color]

Zaken closed his eyes and looked down; the broken and battered gold and black lightsaber sat calmly in his right hand. Silver like marks and dents surrounded the weapon. Painful memories of what he did as a Jedi Knight for the Jedi Order filled into his head during each passing second. Was this a decision that he was aiming to ful-fill? or would he return to the lightside of the force and continue the training he had spent so many years on. There was the path of the darkside of the force; a path that could corrupt him and send him into a state of madness? Then there was the path of the lightside of the force; a path of honor and protection without fear. All the pain he had sustained was hard to go through; being tortured into submission of the darkside of the force.

What more could he ask for? There were people that cared for him: Aeon Kensho? Ronok Vang? People who felt more like his family then the ones he was created with back on Kamino. A clone? That was all he was considered during the clone wars....executing Order 66 was one of the hardest things he had ever done. It was a tough decision to make and yet he made it....he killed his own Jedi General plus many more back on Coruscant.

Gripping the broken gold and black lightsaber he exhaled a breath of warm air which pressured against the cortosis-made mask that bore over his ever changing face. His eyes re-opened and gazed down at the jedi lightsaber he once had; perhaps he could repair it and use it in combination of jar'kai? There was that possibility. Standing up he lowered the broken hilt down to a brown nap sack and placed it within it. Reaching over he un-hooked his sith lightsaber. A weapon created out of his own anger? pain? and hatred? A weapon of pure darkness; crafted here on the sith temple of Korriban. It held a metallic silver color along with a darkened black color.

Raising his right thumb he pushed it against the hilts activation button. The weapon hissed to life in a blood red blade color. His yellow changing eyes locked on the blade as he brought it about killing the air that formed in front of him. Closing his eyes he lowered the blade down at an angle to his right side and clicked the activation button once more de-activating the lightsaber. Then something caught his senses; a tremmer in the force....energy of light. Three lightside force signatures.-

Lifting his right arm up only slightly he clipped the metallic silver and black lightsaber onto his black belt and turned. The jedi had arrived; he could sense it and he knew Visciouz could sense it? Turning he left the room out to the room where Visciouz stood; a dark black cloak covering the nautolan. Through the cold darkness of the temple she had spoken in a cold deap tone.

[glow=red,4,000]"Your fomer master has arrived, Lord Zaken. As well as your close friend Ronok is it. This will be the time to burry your past and submit yourself to the darkside of the force. Are you ready to leave everything behind?"[/glow]
Zaken did not say a word; the sensation of feeling the calming aurra of Aeon would normally bring peace to him but this time around was different....this time he would be destroying the aurra that had broughten peace to him. The destruction of his past was now at hand.

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The Illuminative- Above Korriban[/b][/u]

Aeon, Ronok, and Jadoch stood within the bridge of Aeon's capital ship. It seemed like a long travel from the safe haven of Coruscant and leaving the jedi temple to make a rescue for a lost Jedi Knight named Vax. It seemed suicidle for the moment but what choice did they have. There was a strong bond between the three that seemed un-breakable for the moment. Ronok and Aeon could only fear for the worst of if Vax really had survived the three days that he had gone missing. Crossing his arms as the Illuminative came out of hyperspace Ronok gazed on down at the dark planet. Dark memories of his own time filled into his mind but as quickly as they came he shook them off and turned to Aeon.

[glow=green,4,000]"It's now or never, master?"[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"You're right Ronok. Let's get down there and rescue Vax. Jadoch stay here and may the force be with you."[/glow]
[glow=teal,4,000]"Yes master. May the force serve both of you well."[/glow]
Turning both Aeon and Ronok leave the bridge and go down to the hanger of the ship. Boarding into respective fighters they blast off down to the dark planet of Korriban to rescue Jedi Knight Vax Kote while at the same moment another sith assassin prepared to boared the Illuminative to take care of Jadoch.

((please don't post anything until I complete the prologue....thanks!!))

[Vax Kote™]

Prologue Continued....

Arrival on Korriban[/u][/color]

Just as it seemed easy arriving on the dark world of Korriban it would be difficult to get to Vax. And endless maze and they did not know where to start looking. Aeon only wondered if it was safe to allow Vax to travel on his own to this dark mysterious world. True he was a powerful jedi knight who was also skilled in the form of saber combat but there was always that slight chance that something would go wrong. The unthinkable would be a better way to put it.

Escaping the atmosphere after a near death experience with an asteroid belt; Aeon's ship began to flash red. Adjusting some of the controls within the ship he manuevered it down to the planet near what seemed to be some kind of sith base by the looks of it. Jumping out of the ship Aeon took note of the shifting winds and the blinding sun that grazed through the ever roaming deserts. A feeling that seemed like the planet Tatooine. But un-like Tatooine; Korriban seemed more like a planet constructed of pure evil. Not even a sense of the lightside of the force coming from the surface.

Activating his com'link he directed a transmission over to Ronok. Just as the transmission ended Ronok landed his own ship next to Aeon's. The Ghost Guardian jumped out wearing a black robe over himself; his hood casting over his face hidding his features. Looking out he sensed a trap as well.

[glow=green,4,000]"I have a bad feeling about this."[/glow]
Keeping on the alert the two jedi masters walk over to Vax's jedi starfighter. Within the fighter the R-astromech droid notices Aeon and Ronok approaching and begins to wize in excitment while at the same time starts to beep in a worried tone for Vax. Stepping closer Aeon lifts his hand and lowers it for the astromech droid to settle down.

[glow=orange,4,000]"Slow down. We're here to help. Where is Vax?"[/glow]
The droid beaps pointing to a valley ahead of them where there looks to be a tomb of some kind waving at the Jedi Masters to enter. Walking to the entrance a strong darkside presence moves through the ancient temple. Sand flows through the center of the dark room. In the distance screams of torture could be heard off in the distance. Individuals that had been captured and tortured for many months or possibly years.

[glow=orange,4,000]"This all seems too easy, too convenient. Too perfect it would seem. I sense something, Something I have not felt since..."[/glow]
A cold breeze lifts up blowing the sand within the temple: both Aeon's brown robe and Ronok's black robe sway in the cold air. Lifting their hands up they remove the hood hidding the features of their faces; Aeon's red eyes piercing the darkness while Ronok's eyes held an orange fury of glow.

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Darth Zaken[/b][/u]

The aura of light was growing stronger and stronger as each of the jedi neared the location of the ancient temple. The deep dark presence of Visciouz could also be felt within the temple but for that moment Zaken ignored that darkened presence and kept his focus on the two individuals that were approaching. Zaken waited patiently with his arms across over his chest as the two jedi entered into the room. His dark red cloack hid his masked covered face while his sith eyes kept their focus on the individuals entering. Once they where in the darkened individual that held the name Vax approached lifting his right hand up the doors slammed shut behind the two jedi darkening the room even more.

[glow=red,4,000]"Well, well, well set fly paper out and catch not one but two jedi masters. It seems like the Jedi have fallen for the bait. You seemed a little confused Aeon and you Ronok. You don't recognize me? No matter we managed to pull in two jedi for the price of one."[/glow]
Reaching into his nap sack Zaken pulled out the damaged gold and black lightsaber hilt; the weapon that had many dents, scratches, and battle scars not only from his encounter with Visciouz but with others as well. Holding the weapon in the palm of his right hand which held nails like Starkiller he looked down at it and then back at the jedi tossing it towards them. The weapon clanked on the ground rolling to the feet of the jedi.

Stepping forward Ronok kneeled down picking up the severly damaged lightsaber that Vax had tossed him. Overall he was suprised to see his best friend in this condition. He had turned to the darkside of the force.

[glow=green,4,000]"Why Vax why? Why did you give in?"[/glow]
Zaken smirked reaching down to his newly constructed sith lightsaber. The weapon that he constructed out of his own anger and hatred; through physical and mental torture he had constructed the weapon for the purpose of killing a jedi. Un-clipping it he held it in his right hand; the emitter pointed down at an angle.

[glow=orange,4,000]"I failed you Vax. You shouldn't have been sent alone on such a harrowing mission. We should have gone together. Now the after effect of that mistake obvious. We will defend ourselves, I do not wish to fight you."[/glow]
Aeon lifts his hand up as a signal to stop. He did not want to fight him; there was no reason for it.....no purpose. He took a glance over to the gold and black lightsaber that was damaged through his turning to the darkside of the force. For a moment Aeon closed his eyes shaking away the feeling of if Vax did continue down the dark path; killin both himself and Ronok would prove his loyalty to the sith. Looking at Vax he continued.

[glow=orange,4,000]"Vax don't do this. Remember your oath to the Jedi. You only did this to protect others. It is not too late to return to the Lightside of the Force."[/glow]
[glow=red,4,000]"That was your fault Master Aeon. You sent me to a planet that you knew crawled with darker enities of the force. Even I could sense the darkness when I arrived on this planet. I faced my horrors and lost a lightsaber fight against a sith who had mastered the form of Juyo. I was tortured until I broke through; and through that I saw the only way to learn Juyo was to grab the taste in the darkside of the force. It's too late for me...."[/glow]
Zaken remembered the oath that he took when he was apart of the jedi order. An oath that would never be forgotten. He came to this planet to get information of Juyo so he could master it. It was to protect others; not to put them in harms way. This was different now? Zaken wore the attire of a stih, dark red robes, and a mask to hide his features; the features that would be changing because of the darkside of the force. Lifting the silver and black hilt up he activated the sith weapon; a blood red blade hissing out of the emitter and slowly turning to a hum. Gripping it tightly he kept his focus on Aeon and Ronok who where now his targets - the ones that would meet Form 7 - something that would help him rid his past for a long time.

[glow=red,4,000]"Let's see who is truly a weapons master now."[/glow]
((One more post and the prologue will be complete. It will be up either tonight or tomorrow so keep watching guys.))

[Vax Kote™]

((Sorry it took me so long to get the last part of the prologue up for you guys to read. I have been getting ready for my day back to school. But finally, I was able to. So here it is the final part of the prologue. Please enjoy. Please don't post anything yet I have another thing to post. Hope you enjoyed the prologue. Thanks for reading so far.))

Prologue Continued....

Aeon and Ronok tried their best to bring their close friend back from the darkness but Vax would not listen. His mind was clouded and being corrupted into a much darker presence. The darkside of the force was grabbing onto him constricting him into the very thing he did not want to become when he gained the rank of Jedi Knight within the order. He was now fighting against those who he used to call his friends. Red, orange, and blue colored lightsabers clashed violently together in an all out saber duel. Pushing out he knocked Aeon back into a wall resulting in the grandmaster losing his lightsaber. Ronok on the other hand dodged the fatal attack. Turning he reached out pulling Aeon's silvery hilt into his grasp and activated the lightsaber. An orange blade erupting from the emitter. Looking back to Ronok he smirked twirling the two hilts in both of his hands.

[glow=green,4,000]"This isn't the way Vax. Turn on your dark mentor and come back to us"[/glow]
But Zaken did not listen to Ronok and continued on attacking at him with now two weapons in hand both his and Ronok's blades clashed together sending sparks out into the room giving it some light before it distinquished back to the same darkness as it was before - a cold and damp dark feeling - that jedi could feel when nearing this place.

[glow=green,4,000]"Though you attack Aeon I still belive there is good in you! Fight the raging darkness in you Vax! There is still time!"[/glow]
[glow=red,4,000]"Vax is gone Ronok; he disappeared during the torture. You are facing Zaken now. Nothing you say can bring your friend back. The darkness is here to stay Ronok"[/glow]
Zaken was growing tired of Ronok's constant efforts to bring his "brother' Vax back from the darkside of the force. Something deep within him told him to return back to the lightside and continue on training as a Jedi but the darkness within him - including the darkside of the force - told him to strike at his friends and forget his past. It was a constant struggle it seemed. A struggle to show that the darkside kept its grasp on him forcing him to attack his friends. He continued to fight.

Then from out of the darkness Aeon emerged shooting of a blinding white ray that caused Zaken to stumble back losing grip of Aeon's silvery lightsaber and drop his sith lightsaber. The sith mask he wore fell to the ground only to reveal the face that both Aeon and Ronok have come to know in the time that Vax had become a jedi in the order. Raising his hands up Zaken lowered the hood and took off the robe throwing it to the side. The two jedi would now see his face before he would kill them. However, Ronok still did not wish to dock harm on his friend; his brother.

[glow=green,4,000]"If you wish to doc harm to me then fine. I will won't fight back"[/glow]
Clicking a button on his lightsaber Ronok tossed it to the side along with his saber staff. Looking back to Zaken he stretched his arms out showing that he was un-armed and waiting for a final blow that a sith would punish upon a jedi to fully show that their loyalty belonged to the darkside of the force. Zaken's eyes only widened upon seeing Ronok doing this to show that he did not want to fight against him.

[glow=green,4,000]"You came here to save lives. But as this you will only destroy them, is this really you?"[/glow]
Zaken stood for a moment as Aeon walked around to the side of him with his lightsaber still in hand. For a moment Zaken closed his eyes feeling a sudden rush to strike hard at his friend. It finally came to him as he yelled out rushing forward toward Ronok while pulling his silver and black lightsaber to his hand. The red blade coming to life showing the color of blood along with anger, pain, and hatred. Coming in close he swung at Ronok's left side but sudenly stopped. Then a thought came to mind; why no pro-long Ronok's suffering to show his friend was truly lost. Instead of striking Ronok and killing him he would just injury him.

Taking a gradual step back he thrusted his other hand out sending a massive force wave into Ronok causing him to fly back into the entrance wall and out to the outside world. His body came slidding to a stop in the dust. Aeon watched in awe as Ronok was attacked by Vax giving into the darkside of the force. De-activating his lightsaber Aeon quickly grabbed Ronok's saber staff and ran over to Ronok jumping through the debree and knelling down next to him.

[glow=orange,4,000]"Are you okay Ronok?"[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"I am fine, but what about Vax?"[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"We lost him to the darkside of the force Ronok. We must leave before anything else happens resulting in death."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"Of course master."[/glow]
Ronok rose to his feet taking his saber staff into his hand that Ronok held out to him. Turning away from the temple the two ran off back to Vax's jedi starfighter. They had failed to return Vax to the lightside of the force. He had now turned down the dark path which would forever follow him.

Within the temple Zaken watched the two jedi flee only carrying the memories of what happened here. Looking over he reached out pulling the sith mask into his hand and placed it upon his face followed by putting the robe on with the hood over his head. His now sith eyes casting a gaze as a cold breeze entered into the roon. Visciouz jumped down behind Zaken only slightly with an evil smile upon her face.

The darkness of Vax Kote - now Darth Zaken - was to stay forever.

[Vax Kote™]

So with the prologue many of you noticed some of the quotes that were actually RP'ed out in the Outer Rim section in RP Galaxy. It came from Korriban- Dark Secrets thread which was where Vax's turning to the darkside of the force and becoming a sith started. It was a good RP and me, Ronok, Aeon, and everyone else who was involved within the RP really enjoyed it. Some thought that I was going to keep Vax on the dark path of the sith but I continued on with the Jedi because I had gained so much within the order of hard work and commitment.

There were three threads that came through to make the RP possible. To see what happened after Vax turned his back on his dark mentor: Visciouz and returned to the lightside of the force. Here are the links to each of the threads.

Korriban- Dark Secrets
forcefx.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rpgor&action=display&thread=5228

A rescue mission- Aboard the Illuminative
forcefx.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rpgor&action=display&thread=5368

Ossus-Destinies revealed
forcefx.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rpgor&action=display&thread=5389

Those are the threads based around what happened after Vax left the darkside of the force. This fan-fiction as you know it is based around if Vax remained on the dark path of the sith and continued his training to become a sith marauder within the sith order. The first start of Chapter 1 will be up Sunday this week so watch for it guys. I really hope you all enjoyed it thus far with the prologue.

If you have any character sudjestions, plots, planets, etc. etc. etc. please PM as I could use all the help I can get on this fan-fiction. Thank you for being patient with me and may the force be with you all.

[Vax Kote™]

Jedi Temple on Coruscant (before Chapter I)

A narrow escape from the planet; both Ronok and Aeon barley made it out alive after one of their own Jedi Knight Vax Kote was tortured into submission only to become a nightmare. Using the darkside of the force becoming the very thing that he did not want to become when he took upon an oath of the jedi. Now sitting in the jedi high council room Grandmaster Aeon Kensho and Jedi Master Ronok Vang feel the pain of loosing a strong guardian of the force. A noble fighter and a skilled warrior who held much honor and pride within him.

[glow=green,4,000]"He took an.....oath. How could he go back on his oath of keeping people safe. HE TOOK AN OATH!"[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"Easy Master Vang I feel ashamed that Vax turned to the darkside of the force and went against the oath he took when he became a jedi knight of the order."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"It should of been me, master. It should of been...."[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"If it was you Ronok then Vax would of been right here saying the very same thing. But it is not you Ronok. It is him? He became the very thing that he did not want to become and now he is paying the price. The darkside of the force will corrupt him.....consume him until his objectives is met by his dark mentor. And that is eliminating his past."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"Killing us."[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"The best thing we can do for Vax is to continue on without him and hope that he turns away from the darkside before it is to late. There is always redemption within the order Ronok. Vax is on a lost path. I saw it when he was about to strike you down. He hesitated but did not kill you."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"Then there is still good in Vax. He is striving to break free from the dark corrupted hold that was placed on him master. He went through torture that broke him causing him to turn to the darkside."[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"Yes there is but it will take time to make him see the path of light. Next time we meet him probably wont be that easy. He has a handle on Form 7 which only means we also need to be prepared."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"But we have no knowledge of Form 7 with a jedi using it."[/glow]
[glow=orange,4,000]"Be patient Ronok. The force works in mysterious ways. You must be ready for the time if you do face Vax again and he uses Form 7. Remember the lightside of the force is here to guide you. Don't fall down the wrong path like Vax did."[/glow]
[glow=green,4,000]"I understand master, thanks."[/glow]
Ronok smiled slightly but still felt the pain that Vax had gone through to turn to the darkside of the force. Physical and mental torture on his body forcing him to give into his anger and hatred and lash out causing him to turn. Ronok only remembered when that had happened to him and now it happened to his friend. There was a way to free Vax from the darkness it would just take time. The lightside of the force was there to guide him and every other jedi within the order.

((Hope you guys enjoyed this small bit before Chapter I. Just had to get something in there of what Aeon and Ronok did after their battle with Zaken. Don't worry Jadoch is still in the story. I'll find ways to get him in their. Keep an eye out for Chapter I guys. I may have it up either Saturday or Sunday. It all depends. I'll give you all the go ahead of when to post comments on it but for now just keep up on reading. Hope you are enjoying it thus far.))

[Vax Kote™]

The day has been slow thus far counting on where I live we are getting a big storm along with rain coming into the state of Arizona. On the side note classes in College have started up for me yet again. It is different in times and days then what I had last semester. Mondays and Wednesdays I have three classes while on Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Fridays I have only but one class. It's good because all of my classes are in the morning time. But don't worry I wont allow this fan-fiction take a dive. I plan on rolling through it till the end.

Now that I ranted about my classes and the weather that Arizona is getting here is some fan-fiction news.

The first chapter to the fan-fiction will be up on time either Saturday or Sunday depending on weather my nephew has a football game or not. I'll have a long post up for you all to read and get that start. To add in on the creative side along with some graphics I am hopping to use photos. Basically a format like this:

The Chapter Name (with a bigger size font)

Some kind of photo at the top to add in for display

There will be also times that I promise a certain date and can't ful-fill it. That would fall under the reason of 'school work catching up on me'. If that happens I will tell you all and speak of a new date of when the chapter will be up. For now have a good night/day and see you soon when the first post arrives......

[Vax Kote™]

((So here is another add-on before Chapter I. I am still trying to get some good stuff down for Chapter I. Basically, what planet I should go with and how it should go. Any ideas are welcome to me through PM please and thank you.))

The Republic Deserter[/u]

From the Personal Journal of Rang "Skar" Skirata



General Vax Kote was one of those Jedi who I held a deep respect for. He had trained under the order's grandmaster: Aeon Kensho. I served as a captain under General Vax giving him all the respect as a republic soldier that I could. He did the same for me? He told me stories of what training was like when he was on Kamino before the Clone Wars even began. Training as an Advanced Recon Commando (ARC) trooper and the kind of training the Kaminoans put him through. It was above all suprising to hear the stories of his past. What suprised me most was the fact that he was a force sensitive. Through research clones were said to never be force sensitives. However, unknwon to many there were a select group of clones who became Nova ARCs gaining the strength of using the force even though they had no memory of being force sensitives. Vax had no memory only saying that he trained as a standard ARC trooper and became a Captain in several batallions, squads, and legions in the Grand Army of the Republic.

The stories were overall amazing of what one individual could go through in such a large amount of time. I still don't believe that he could of survived this long. The enhanced aging that the Kaminoans could still very well push Vax's age beyond the limit of any normal human or species in the galaxy. Aside from him being a Nova ARC there were three others holding the same thing that Vax held. Here I thought I saw everything when coming with General Kote in the many battles that the jedi and the republic had seen. It is truly amazing.

But as soon as Generals Kensho and Vang returned from Korriban and told me that Vax had turned to the darkside of the force I nearly broke. What was to come of him now that he was a servant of the sith. The darkside would corrupt his mind and ultimatly destroy him. I have no idea what the difference between the Darkside or the Lightside of the force but what I seen as a difference between the Jedi and the Sith is how the jedi defend those in need with the lightside of the force. Whereas the sith tend to corrupt the galaxy and gain control of it through the will of the darkside of the force. My own focus became fractured of what I really want to do with Vax's turn to the darkside of the force. I had the decision of leaving the republic army or stay and fight against a good friend who I also took orders from. It finally came?

I left the Army of the Republic; though it was against the oath I took much like the oath Vax had taken.

I would no longer be a soldier or take orders until Vax returned to the light. Even if he did I still have doubts if I want to fight against the sith to keep the galaxy safe from the sith. The sith clam to want to bring peace to the galaxy but so do the jedi. My mind is still wandering of that and I am still unsure giving me another decision of what I want to do as the jedi and the sith fight against each other in a constant war with no ending. I could become a bounty hunter? an assassin? a smuggler? or a black market seller? But everyone of those would cause the republic or the sith to come after me. My decision has been made to travel to Tatooine and remain there until all this trouble is over with and Vax finds his true self.

That is....if he does not find me first? or the jedi don't find me.