Korriban-Sith temple: A Dark Survivor

[Aeon Kensho™]

On the graveyard world of Korriban a unidentified starship enters the Sith temple's scopes and scanners. It appears to be on a course to the Sith temple. The dark lord watches the incoming ship. Sensing a disturbance in the Force...

(Working in the command center the dark lord watches the screen with her large eyes. The Nautolan Sith master named Darth Visciouz sees in incoming ship to the Sith temple on Korriban. This Sith graveyard planet had becomes just that after the last wars that tore the galaxy apart.)

(From under her large black hood over half of her face is covered in darkness. Feeling a tremor in the Force, Visciouz senses the darkside. Surprised to see the ship seems to have the clearance code to the Sith temple's hangar bay. Rising from her chair Visciouz leaves the command center of the temple.)

(Walking down a long stone ramp back into temples great room. Walking along the large blood red reflecting pool. Sith Hieroglyphs cover the walls. Large statues of ancient Sith lords are set along the covered walls. Large obelisk's are at the four corners of the large rectangle reflecting pool.)

(This planet became so desolate after the remaining Sith lords turned on each other vying for power. Thinking to herself that she never believed in the rule of two. Especially when the Sith numbers were so thin. The planet died periodically as usual, Time showed this. Betrayal and lust for power were regular for Sith.Her black and red Sith robes flow up as the dark lord heads to the main hangar bay. Tomb robbers and smugglers have been plaguing the planet recently. Intent on killing those that would steal and Sith relics and artifacts.)

(It wasn't long unto the female Nautolan entered the main hangar bay. See the doors opening and dust falling off of them. This hangar bay is dark and dusty. All ships were docked accept for a few of Visciouz's shuttle. Lifting her head up to see the starship enter the hangar bay. It was very clear. There was only one way into the temple-Through Darth Visciouz!)

[Darth Shivilow™]

(Shivilow who had been in hiding from the rest of the galaxy decided it was time from here to arrive back on scene.She was on Ziost when she felt the need to return to Korriban and to the sith temple.She then got up from her chair from the control both and headed out the doors to her flagship the mind bender.As she entered the ship she made a quick check list of all her weapon's and everything was in in order.She then grabbed the control's of her ship,punched in the exact coordinate to Korriban,and then closed the exit ramps door.With just a few mins she was out of the atmosphere of Ziost and heading towards Korriban.

When an hour had passed by she was now looking directly at the planet of Korriban.She only could think about how sweet it was to be back on her home planet the place where she was born.As She turned off the auto-pilot she began to sense a dark force on the planet.One who had high skills in the darkside of the force and possible surpass hers as well.She then the gave the clearance code to the planet and began her descent into the valley of the Kings.As she landed the ship she raced out of her chair and down the now opened Exit ramp.She pulled her hood over her eyes and began to explore her home world again.She stands at 5'8 tall and she was wearing an all black tunic.With a green skull on her right armed tunic that had a snake coming out of the skulls mouth.She then leaned up against the pillar near her and began to focus her energy towards the other darkside energy that she felt when she entered the planet.She then Said to her self)
"This world has scene a lot of wars but I feel that I am not done with my work yet.Its good to be home on the planet of my fellow sith.I just wonder about this dark power i sense that pulses off my very bones.There is someone here that is just abiding their time before they come out to meet me."

[Aeon Kensho™]

(The doors slide open and the ship then flies past the temple's open doors. A transmission comes through of the information the dark lord was already privy to. Activating her pilot droid it rolls up the loading ramp of the Sheathipede class transport shuttle. Walking up behind it Visciouz point to the starship that has already landed. He long black sleeve of his Sith robe hangs)

"Fly us over to that landed vessel. Fly low and return to the hangar!"

(Closing the ramp for just a moment is slides back into its flying position. The bug like legs close up against the belly of the shuttle. Feeling the Force signature of a darksider getting closer. Hitting the button for the landing ramp once again the ramp extends in mid flight.)

(Leaning out the Nautolan spots the source of this tremor in the Force. Hitting the close button Visciouz step out before the door shuts. Planting one of her black boots onto the ramp the dark lord flips out twisting her body around. Her large hood flaps back onto her back. Landing the twenty feet with out a problem she reaches her left hand out touching the sand, stabalizing herself. Rising up she walks to the person which seems to be talking to themself. Hearing this womans words in her mind.)


"I am not sure how you got the clearance codes to land, and I don't really care. No one enters the temple without facing me first. I sense the Darkside in you. Now let me show you the full power of the Darkside!"

(In close dust blows up kicking up the dark lords black Sith robes. Hanging from her black belt is a long black half skirt hangs off of the dark lords hips. Black and dark red pants lead down to black knee high boots.)

(Lifting both hands at this close range Visciouz shoots two handed Lightning at this woman! A wide arc of powerful Force lightning blasts the stone around and the pillar the woman leaned on! A large smile coming to the cringing face of the dark lord. Pushing hatred and anger into the attack Visciouz stick to Sith tradition as she usually does. The proving and asserting of superior power was a tradition for Sith. The powerful lead until they show a sign of weakness. Then leadership must shift as it always does.)

[Darth Shivilow™]

(Shivilow still leaning on a pillar stood up as she just saw out of the corner of her eye a ship headed her way.She rested her hands at the side as she watched it come closer to her current position.She reached out into the force more and saw with her own eyes a woman sith was on her way to meet her.Shivilow glaring out out the corner of her eyes saw the lady sith land right near her.She listen to the sith ask her how she got clearance and how she wasn't going to let Shivilow move one more step.So Shivilow attempted to say something when she saw the sith lady throw up her hands to throw lightning at her.Shivilow braced herself and held up her hands to absorb the lightning that issued forth from this young sith lady.

Shivilow then threw the lightning backwards and as she did it hit the very pillar Shivilow was standing at before.Shivilow still absorbing and throwing lightning away from her body stood there glaring at the person who stood before her.This woman was surely strong in the force but Shivilow will show this woman her knowledge of the darkside's powers as well.Shivilow began to dig deeper into her hate of everyone in the galaxy the jedi and worthless fools.The wind began to pick up and as it did Shivilow's hood fell off her head revealing her face.Her eye color was yellow for her anger was beginning to show into her eyes.Along her face were scars from old battle's where she fought jedi's and bounty hunters alike.Shivilow then said above all the noise that was coming from this young lady's force lightning)


"I am Darth Shivilow and I got those code's for I was once a master here until I decided to go into hiding.You will not stop me young lady from getting to that academy I will do anything to get past you.Even if I have to strike you down myself!!!!"

[Aeon Kensho™]

"Big words!"

(Not stopping shooting the Lighting the woman definitely had knowledge of the Darkside. Stepping in closer Visciouz blast any lightning away or right back at the woman. Her long black sleeves flap up with the increasing intensity of the attack fueled by the Darkside. As the two arcs of Lightning smash into one another.)

(Cringing her face Visciouz fuels the dark attack. Stray bolts of Lightning smashes into the pillar behind the woman. Destroying the rock face near the two fighting Sith. Holding up her end Visciouz goes on with this dark ritual. There was a method to this mayhem. Testing the womans words instead of trusting her. Trust was something that had no place with the Sith.)

(Pushing hatred into this attack Visciouz see's to pillar coming down behind the woman. It comes towering down and would crush the woman if she didn't move!)

{OOC-Garyn and I have revised the rules. They aren't all up right now. But they will be soon. Look at the first page of the rules. Some changes have been made. Force absorption is a top tier Jedi power. So instead of writing if Shiv is absorbing the Lightning. She would be using her own lightning to reflect and redirect the lightning. Like how Dooku redirects the blast of Force lightning that Yoda fires back at him in AOTC.

So yeah look at the rules and we will have to work on what type of Sith Shivilow is. Also it would be good to make a new bio or revise your old one. Tell everyone else where and what Shivilow was doing. Perhaps scouring the unknown regions for the Sith or something. Send me a PM if you need anything! }

[Darth Shivilow™]

(The lightning coming at full force Shivilow watched as chunks of rock being blasted away because of the lightning.Shivilow then sensed in the force that the pillar behind her was about to fall on top of her.So with not but a split second to act she force jumped into the air and landed a few feet behind the sith woman.Tossing off her cloak quickly she then with both hand shot out her own force lightning.The color of it was red for the fire in her was bursting with hatred now for this woman was blocking her way.She began to intensify her anger and when this happen her insanity would soon to follow.

Shivilow wanted to test the waters more with this woman so she began to think of ways to play with this new threat.Shivilow wasn't like other sith that had come to past on this planet she was a sith who loved to play games.Games that would end up killing her opponent if they didn't react to her moves.The power of the darkside was surging more into Shivilow's body.The more it did the more Shivilow embraced it for the darkside is her first love)

(ooc.Thanks I will take a look at those rules and I guess i'll make a new bio thanks again my friend.)

[Aeon Kensho™]

(Reading the subtle signs given off by Darth Shivilow. The shift in her eyes and sensing the waning of her control Visciouz assess this woman's abilities. Dodging the pillar the Sith intruder shoots red lightning at the dark lord. Tumbling over rolling out of the way of lightning and the tumbling pillar.)

(The pillar crumbles into many pieces as it slams down into the sand. Lifting both her hand Visciouz matches the woman's red lighting with her own blue standard Force lightning. While this woman did have considerable training in the use of the Darkside. Visciouz could hold her Lighting back with her own without difficultly. Had sitting in hiding weakened Shivilow's resolve and in turn her powers?)

(Still blasting lightning at the woman the collision of the lightning slams into the ground around both the women. Still firing the Lightning the dark lord lifts two sizable pieces of the crushed pillar. Throwing one after another with each hand just at the end of Visciouz's own Lightning!)

(Grabbing her saber off her black belt and igniting the crimson blade pointing it at her opponent. The wind blows up her sleeves as the dark lord extends her right arm holding her saber.)

"You have some knowledge of the Darkside I will grant you that. You still have much to learn. You lack control I can feel it within you. You will find the Sith are held to a higher standard now. If you make it that far I guess! I am Darth Visciouz, dark lord of the Sith."

(A large grin comes to Visciouz's tattoo covered face. Looking to this woman the dark lord could sense the stirring within. Her shift in her eyes seems to show some lack of resolve. Sith deal in absolutes. From her absolute resolve is where Visciouz draws upon the Darkside. A strong connection to the Darkside is important to reaching the full power of the Darkside at the moment.)

{OOC-There are three different classes. Take a look at them in the rules.}

[Darth Shivilow™]

(Shivilow pushed more against the other sith's force lightning words that came from the other sith's mouth made her mad.She watch with both intensity that both her's and this other sith lightning was pushing against one another.Shivilow called more unto the darkside and at this same time she then noticed the sith had her red saber out.She pointed it right at Shivilow and Shivilow then smiled at her with a twisted sadistic smile.She then cut off her own lightning and grabbed one of her saber's from her belt.)

"So I see that you still insult me very well I am up for the challenge lets see what you can do."

(Shivilow ignighted her saber and glared at her opponent with her blacken eyes for just at the moment she turned her saber on. Insanity began to course through her veins Shivilow's insanity is her source of power her passion.This is when she is the most focused was at this very point.Only few have survived a battle with Shivilow when she was at this point.Shivilow then pushing off with her right foot and began to charge at her opponent.Shivilow was first gonna use the Shii-Cho form then migrate to Aturu but those plans were hidden in her mind.When Shivilow reached her opponent She then made a upper thrust towards her right shoulder blade.If that attack failed she would then make a vertical slash towards her upper left torso.)

[Aeon Kensho™]

(A slight chuckle comes to the Nautolan's tattoo covered face. Keeping her blade in a one handed grip Visciouz fans her blade across her right shoulder batting the thrust away. Lowering the hilt down to waist level the blade point up held vertically. Holding Shivilow's attack back with one hand again the dark lord holds this lock for a moment.)

"Already losing control. For someone who claims to be a Sith master. You seem to lack a channeled rage as Sith marauders learn. Interesting."

(Grinning to Shivilow through the saber lock. Pushing her attackers blade up and back. She had charged in just as the dark lord anticipated. With two quick Djem So counters Visciouz stops this woman's attacks. Not even reaching into the depths of her darkness Visciouz swings from her right to her left down at the woman's legs in a quick sweeping swing. The opening created by the dark lord's last counter attack.)

(Her red blade hums louder for a moment. This swing was aimed down at the woman's lower thigh's just above her knee caps. Instead of recoiling or moving it another swing Visciouz punches in his her hilt at the woman's face. Attacking her with the hilt with a Teräs Käsi technique for quickness. If the hilt hit it would knock the woman back in her footing.)

(Capitalizing if the space created by this last attack Visciuoz moves into a swing. Swinging horizontally from her right to her left side aimed the woman's head moving seamlessly into a brutal linked Juyo swing! The dark lord black robes lift up with the forward motion. Stepping out turning around to face the woman just after last quick slash.)

[Darth Shivilow™]

(Shivilow quickly was getting madder she then said in the harsh and mocking tone towards her foe.)

"Alright miss know it all if you so know everything in this world and think you know me so well.Then how is it that I have knowledge of the force and Zannah's spell book with in my position.You haven't seen nothing yet but you think you have me all figured out don't you.Bleh I mock you for you have no clue who's very bloodline runs through mine!"

(She had enough she saw the attacks in the force coming right at her she jumped backwards into a sliding movement to avoid the bunt.She changed forms again this time she was now into Aturu one with acrobatics.She force jumped over the head of her foe and landed 20 meters away.She grabbed two thermal detonator from her belt and tossed them towards the columns in front of her.She then with her free left hand began to throw chunks at her opponent one by one she kept throwing them at her.She channeled her insanity and turned it into hatered she allowed more of the darkside to flow into her.She then began to mumble under her breath in the Ancient Sith Language)

"Blood for Blood I use my fathers Talisman to summon Darth Sidious's soul to guide me in this endevor"

ooc.I didnt know what to do if you like message me so I can know what the out come shall be of this meeting of your character.

[Aeon Kensho™]

{OOC-Not everything is always predetermined here. Sometimes we talk about the outcome to be on the same page as needed. Don't worry you will see the outcome soon enough.

I let you slide the last post you didn't write in evading or dodging the pillar pieces Visciouz threw at you. The same with the first swing you write in dodging the second attack but not the first. As I said look at the rules. You have to write in all you defensive moves which do not count at you attack. I will let you slide of the last swing since it would kills Shiv. As for the first attack that becomes an autohit since you didn't write in defending or dodging it.}

(A large grin comes to the dark lord's tattoo covered face. Visciouz's first swing connects with the woman's lower thighs slicing above her knee's the woman jumps back. Cutting serious wounds into her legs, slicing into her skin fairly deep. Shivilow's slide dodges the second attack, jumping places just enough distance to evade the third as well. Shivilow jumps a good distance away from the dark lord. It was of no matter, The first attack had landed on both of her legs. Even as she landed I am sure the pain surged through her. Even a Sith wouldn't be able to continue on after taking such a serious wound for much longer.)

(Tumbling over into a roll dodging the first chunk of pillar. Lifting her left hand Visciouz catches the second piece of pillar. Hearing the woman speak in the ancient Sith language. The dark lord laughs to herself for a moment. Speaking in the ancient herself to the Shivilow as Visciouz catches the second piece of stone. Tossing it aside with a flick of her wrist. Clenching her tattoo covered fist Visciouz crushes the last incoming piece of stone with ease. Pebbles and stones land all around Visciouz.Speaking to her opponent in the ancient Sith language.)

"He can't save you now! You are mine!"

(Force leaping in Visciouz swings down vertically as she comes leaping in. Thinking her opponent would block this move Visciouz kicks down at the woman right lower thigh. Hoping to kick the already bleeding wound on her legs.)

(Then in a quick downward crescent like swing on the dark lord's right side. Visciouz swings down Diagonally at the woman's left ankle. Hoping to exploit the woman's weakness Sith philosophy in motion. Knowing the woman stance would have to weaken the dark lord send attacks in to weaken her opponent further.)