make it something petty, like one Jedi beating another in a friendly duel.
i haven't been following this, but if my guesses are correct, it shouldn't be that hard, a friend of the sparrer feels that the loser's been wronged, tries to avenge him, turns to the dark.
like i said, petty.
Hmm...doesn't sound good enough. But here it is; the beginning Chapter 6! *SPOILER ALERT* For those who have seen "Jedi Saga" you'll see the Dark Jedi get shot & killed. But in this chapter.... SHE'S NOT DEAD!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8Kyi0WNg40LOL I had to put that vid there. Now to Chapter 6! Here Soul Ry'thm gave me permission to use her character for this chapter. As for the fan film characters, I do not own them. Whoever made the fan film characters own them. The only thing I own is Derek Skirata.
Chapter 6: A Venomous Encounter (Part 1)Derek Skirata couldn't believe that the information he had indicated that a Jedi High Councilor betrayed the Jedi. What was worse was that this same former High Councilor was one of Derek's closest childhood friends. Her name was nothing more than Kessia Mizeria, mostly known as just "Kes".
She was one of Derek's first friends & although she was only a few years older than him, she still came to him for advice & other parts of training. Over the years she started to be almost like a twin sister to Derek. However she was not as patient as Derek, she was physically stronger than Derek but only by a little bit. She was a little more ambitious than Derek but her Force potential was not as great as Derek. But she was just as quiet as Derek; she only spoke if she had to. Derek always referred to his friend as her real name; he never referred to her as her nickname.
Derek got the signal from Ro Sajac, the last person to see Oni Cay-Qel alive, that Oni was dead along with Kessia. Derek knew that Kessia was a Dark Jedi bent on acquiring power beyond her wildest dreams. But Derek didn't feel anything about her dying. So he decided to investigate on Veridan IV. He flew his fighter down to the exact base where Ro signaled Derek about a strange ship leaving but Ro said he got the ship & he's hot on its trail. Derek landed in the hanger & hopped out of his fighter.
He looked around & saw the corpse of Oni Cay-Qel. He was dead but Kessia was nowhere to be found. "Where is she?" Derek wondered. "Someone could have retrieved the corpse but is there anyone here?" Derek decided to try & find the security recordings. He went to the hanger control along with his astromech droid R4-D8 & looked at the security recordings that recorded all of the recent events in the hanger. Derek saw Kessia stab Oni right in the chest with her lightsaber, which strangely changed from her Jedi yellow lightsaber to a Sith red.
Derek knew what she was after: a datasphere that had all of the information that could be priceless to the Jedi Order. It contained information on who was responsible for creating the Clone Army including the Sith Lord. But what Kessia plans to do with this information was a mystery. Not even Derek knew what she was planning. All Derek knew from Tess was that Kessia sought to become the Dark Lady of the Sith. Derek continued to watch & he saw the bounty hunter, one he has never seen before, shoot her right in the back. She dropped to the ground & the bounty hunter got away with the sphere.
Derek then saw after Ro left that the "corpse" of Kessia get up & leave with a hidden ship. Derek was completely shocked to see that the former Jedi, now a Sith hopeful, was
not dead. Derek knew that he had to find her & stop her. "R4, download the archives." Derek ordered to his droid. R4 downloaded the archives & they went back to the
Hawk I & flew right out of the hanger. Derek has no clue where she could be now. She could be anywhere....
Meanwhile, in a disclosed location, a lone figure dressed in black was sparring against numerous training droids. The droids were instantly destroyed by either a lightsaber or Dark Force powers. A little bit before that same person lifted a few weights to warm up. "Thought you could make a fool out of me. Did you, Derek Skirata?" The darkened voice of Kessia "Kes" Mizeria growled, destroying each one of the droid as she spoke. Memories ran through her head instantly, those that only fueled her rage. "You almost didn't get me promoted, chose your brother over me to command your flagship, humiliated me in front of everyone, & you get to have the best jobs in the blasted galaxy while I got to be stuck with the hypocrites!!" She finished when she sliced three droids to pieces with her lightsaber. "You rejected the dark side when it offers unlimited power! Well surprise, Mandalorian; you will pay for everything. From now on...." Kessia then vented her rage & it began to take control of her & her voice deepened due to the dark side. "...I'm poison to the Jedi now, Derek Skirata & that is why I am called..... VENOMOUS!!!"
Soul Ry'thm & Serra Keto were walking to a cantina to discuss about the Clone Wars so far. "I wish this war would end. We've lost too many Jedi already." Soul whispered. "Well why don't we just find Dooku & just--?" Serra started but Soul interrupted. "We can't. We don't even know where he is." Soul then looked behind her. "I sense a disturbance in the Force...." Soul & Serra looked around & when they realized there was no disturbance, they proceeded into the cantina.
When they walked in, the cantina was completely empty. No one was inside, save the bartender. "So...." the bartender started. "What can I get you two?" The bartender smiled & she grabbed two glasses. Serra frowned but Soul was horrified. "I know that person." Soul whispered, pointing at the bartender. Serra looked back at her. "What do ya mean? I haven't--." Serra was interrupted when a Force Wave forced her flying & crashing into a wall. Debris fell on her. Soul stepped back slowly & horrified to see that the bartender was a Force user. "Kessia?! I thought you were dead!" Soul shook her head, refusing to believe that Kessia is still alive & is right in front of her.
"Kessia is dead." Kessia cackled. "She was killed by the Jedi. Believe it. Let me introduce myself now. I'd like to call myself.... Darth Venomous!" Venomous finished by pulling Soul to her & grabbing her by her throat. "What do you want?" Soul asked, struggling to free herself from Venomous' grip. "I want Derek." Venomous answered. "I want him to meet me on Veridan IV in three standard days." "What?! I don't know where he is." Soul reasoned. Venomous just glared hatefully at Soul. "Well you & his little girlfriend is gonna help me find him.... or you two will be my new Sith apprentices."
Soul glared at Venomous. "I'll never turn to the dark side!" "We'll see about that." Venomous smiled evilly at Soul & then threw her with tremendous strength, right where Serra lay. She then picked up the unconscious bodies of Serra & Soul & carried them to her ship. There standing was the bounty hunter who "betrayed" Venomous.
Did the Jedi fall for it? The bounty hunter asked in his language. "Yes they did. Plus they are more ignorant than I thought." Venomous laughed. The bounty hunter laughed with Venomous.
So when will ya pay me? "I will pay you when we get back to the hanger. I thought about doubling your pay but I decided to triple it. Let's go. I want to see the look on the Mandalorian's face when he sees that I'm about to torture his two women." Venomous cackled as she boarded the ship.
Meanwhile Derek was continuing his search for Venomous when he got back to Coruscant. He then met Ro Sajec there. "Is something wrong, Master Skirata?" Ro asked. "Yeah. Apparently your friend Kessia is not dead." Derek answered. "What?" Ro asked, confused & surprised. "Yeah. She's not on our side anymore. The bounty hunter you encountered didn't kill Cay-Qel; Kessia did. She has turned to the dark side & is out there somewhere." Ro's expression turned to shock. "What? How could she have betrayed us?!" "I dunno, but I'm gonna find out. I'm gonna try to find the security recordings."
Ro & Derek walked to the security recordings & found a particular one that Ro immediately recognized. "This is the only transmission I sent to the Council. Kessia was the only Master present at the time." Ro played the recording & they saw her. When, in the recording, Ro's transmission ended they saw an unidentifiable figure come inside. "I dunno who that is but--." Derek started but was interrupted when a hologram came on. It was Venomous.
"You!" Ro stated, starting to get angry. "Oooooooooh. Let's watch your temper." Venomous laughed. "There's a child present." Venomous moved to the side a little bit to reveal Serra Keto & Soul Ry'thm in a Force Cage. Their hands & legs were tied up. "I'm not a child!!" Serra shouted. "Serra, calm down. The more you're angry, the more you're pleasing Venomous." Serra nodded & then noticed Derek. "SERRA!! SOUL!!" Derek shouted, concerned for their safety. "Derek, help us! Please!" Serra pleaded.
"How sweet!" Venomous smiled evilly. "Just like in the holovids!" Ro was shocked at what Venomous was doing. "I can't believe this! We trusted you! Cay-Qel trusted you! How could you kill him?! How could you betray us?!" "Me?" Venomous laughed. "
I betrayed the Jedi? Apparently you're far more ignorant than I thought!
I never betrayed the Jedi; they betrayed
me. Plus Cay-Qel was weak & was in my way to ultimate power. However this message isn't for you, it's for
him."
Venomous was pointing to Derek & then turned to him. "I want you to face me on Veridan IV in three standard galactic days or you'll see them turn away from the light." "If you lay one finger on them..." Derek started. "You'll do what?" Venomous asked, smiling evilly. "Meet me there or they will have no chance at 'redemption'." The transmission signed off. "Was that Kessia?" The voice of Master Plo Koon asked when he entered. "Plo Koon? I thought you were dead!" Ro asked, surprised. "Well it was fortunate that Master Skirata was on his mission with Tess Vipera before I was sent to Veridan IV with Kessia. He warned me only moments before I left the Temple. As a Council Member I give you, Derek Skirata, permission to go on this mission. May the Force be with you."
Derek walked to the hanger, Ro following closely. "Derek this is suicide. She is more powerful than you & she is bent on destroying the Jedi Order. She wants you to be the second to die." Ro pleaded, remembering his friend Cay-Qel. "Ro, I have to do this. Two Jedi are at stake & if I don't save them...." Derek started but Ro finished. "They're gonna go to the dark side? You don't understand; she's using those two Jedi as bait! She'll think of nothing but killing you. But if she can't kill you she'll try to turn you too!" Derek shook his head before going into his fighter, the
Hawk I.
"Ro, I know that the Republic & the Jedi Order depend on this mission. But I never said you couldn't come along. I might need ya in case I can't free Soul & Serra by myself." "Derek, she wants you to come alone." Ro pleaded. "Ro, she won't know you're there if she doesn't see you." Derek explained. "Plus her attention will be focused on me. Please board your fighter & join me on the
Infiltrator." Derek flew out of the hanger & flew to his flagship. Ro hopped into his fighter & followed Derek.
Part II coming very soon! ;D