Post by Grandmaster Death Creature on Nov 7, 2006 22:22:58 GMT -5
ok this is the rewrite i think it is much better but like i said i recommend you read the other four stories here you go part five of the story wellmy BIO and i am thinking of adding kit fistos Rpg to my story but i am going to have to edit it lol
In despite of the fatalities of the Jedi and the sith in the battles we knew that the galaxy was safe until there is a new threat that was upon us, as we begin to exit the planet on the ships I start to remember I wonder if no don’t think of it. I radio to the others we need a place to start a new a place where rogues can co-exist on a planet with others but which one? I ask Aayla Secura Speaks how about Toola? only things there are Motmots, Snow Demons and Whipids also it is a planet of former Jedi K’Kruhk it is mainly tundra and snow with some oceans it will be a good place for us to start the Rogue Temple but isn’t that where they kept the Jedi fugitives after order 66 ? Aayla respond yes from what I heard from Chiloraul there might even be some still alive the more powerful Jedi were supposed to be there as prisoner to remain if we failed in which we did but you destroyed the creators of the clones and the machinces so they won’t be able to bring them back, but I didn’t catch all of what Aayla said because in the back of his mind I began to get a flash back of Her, he remembered her long white hair that went to her shoulders in which she usually had it braided on the sides her eyes blue/green in which it felt like her soul was in her eyes. He whispers one word “SOUL” he begins wondering if she had made it through the extermination of the Jedi the Dreaded order 66. What do I mean IF SHE MADE IT? Of course Master Soulrythm made it, she was one of the strongest Jedi I had ever known through the intense training me and here went through she was one I tried not to send to the medic soul and myself had a very strong bond I knew her presence even when she was far away on other planets but for some reason I can’t sense her now. Kit speaks Creature you still with us I respond yes, yes I am sorry I was just think of the past Shiek responds I know it hurts but you got to let the past go I respond you don’t understand If I find out that SHE is Dead I will Hunt every sith down and destroy them I won’t stop there I will dedicate my life in bringing her back she was one of none who understood me and felt as I felt, There was silence which felt like it took a millennium for Shiek to speak you feel that strongly towards who is it Master Creature you are referring to It’s Master Soulrythm Kit Stops I remember her you and soul were very close you two if it weren’t for the order more than likely would have gotten married I don’t know about that Kit I do Love her but I don’t know if she feels the same about me and here had one of the strongest bonds like you and Aayla. Shiek interrupts let’s set our coordinates for Toola and let’s go,
I respond yes let’s go in the last words before light speed Master Soulrythm I will find you now entering light speed think of nothing but her but I know of her father how will she react that I am now a rogue like her father before her God what do I say to such a beautiful person hey soul it’s great to see you hey just to let you know me kit Shiek and Aayla are rouges now! NO!!! That would kill her I need to let her know slowly that is the only way to let her know. It was decided to give her hints and let her figure it out on her own I just hope she doesn’t get upset that I am not a Jedi anymore but like her father but she doesn’t know that I care for her more than a friend as we arrive on the planet I speak we need to set up the rogue temple but I want to check out the Ithaqua Station to see if any Jedi are Still alive they all speak May The Force Be With You I leave the others I will send you a transmission If I require assistance I leave to go to the Ithaqua Station but I sense a Evil Presence stronger than everyone I had every faced even Chiloraul it felt like 10 of him he continues as he smiles I might even have to transform for this maneuver to work as I continue to get closer I feel two other presences one of a very familiar person It was Master Soulrythm and another but the other presence is one I had never felt before the presence was good so I entered the station and immediately attacked by droids they say to put you weapons down I respond today is not your lucky day they respond today is your lucky day this doesn’t compute you are under arrest and start to shoot at me big mistake I pull out my saber and they are finished within seconds as I leave them to go and get Soul and the other presence they were above me I force jumped up the stairs and arrived at the door in which Master Soulrythm was laying dormant I knock on the door her sweet voice responds who is there I sense a familiar presence bit I do not remember who it is that I am feeling I respond it is I Grand Master Jedi Creature of Death she responds oh my God I thought you were Dead with the others I respond there are others Kit Fisto and Aayla Secura and Twistedshiek as I let her out the door flies open with her coming out jumping into my arms she hugs me well you seem to be as strong as ever since the last time we met yes I have been fight in a lot of battles lately but, who is the other person in this cell it is Master Skirata ok I remember him but vaguely I let him out but as soon as I did a transmission begins to play are you stupid do you not know not to come her because I am the strongest known force user alive I respond are you really good then I will go down in legend in defeating you I am coming for my friends if you want to try and stop me come and get piece he then appears before me I feel his awesome power I put out my hand and flip it over so my palm shows I bring my fingers toward my hand back and forth he charged and fought I defended he was powerful as was I but not powerful enough I could not take much more of this I heard Soul yelling to fight and wondering if I was ok that was her always caring for her friends everytime one died she grew in the force, but there was nothing I could do he was defeating me kicking me in the face he punched me and force pushed me into the pillar I try my tail he grabs it and twirls me around like a towel and let me go I crash into the stairs shocked that my tail? my tail was blocked!!! exhausted from the fight I knew one and only one way to get out of this I stand up the man looks at me astonished that took such a beating but he thought there was nothing more I could do he must have figured that I was using the last of my strength to stand up boy was he wrong my body around me started to glow I was begging to transform into my human state my three head became one my tail shot up and my legs became two my eyes Glowed Green my hair Black I was a 6’2” human I looked at soul who blushed. I grew in twice in strength the man looked at me astonished and freaked, I begin to fight back I gain the upper hand I tell him I’d see him later and I force pushed him out of the window in which I seized the moment and told Soul and the other skirata to follow me he will be back and very pissed. I sent out a transmission to Shiek, kit and Aayla telling them that I had just encountered the most powerful sith in the galaxy or so he stated. but I told them I got soul and this other master called Skirata they both say never heard from him but bring him too it sounds as if we are going to need the help but there weren’t any others were master soul and master Skirata the only ones I didn’t see anyone else have time to search anymore I need to get soul and Skirata out of there I also didn’t feel any presence of any others in the station send me your coordinates, of course kit replied they sent the coordinates to me in which we followed and arrived but every step of the way I felt the evil presence was he stalking us no we are to good to be stalked we arrived to the shelter well the shelter for now. I look at Master Skirata and say I don’t remember you too well Master Skirata he replied you all are new to me as well I just finished my training before they executed order 66. Soul was looking at Kit and spoke I thought you were Dead I was until the sith made me into a clone in which I and Ki Adi Mundi was set to hunt Master Creature and Shiek in which we failed they killed Ki Adi Mundi Shiek was about to kill me before Creature stopped him and they converted me back to the light side well not exactly the way they had me come back was mentioning the name of my love Aayla he look sat Aayla and Smiles she smiles back Soul response but you can’t love your not supposed to it’s not the Jedi way he looks at her and then to me you didn’t tell her Creature soul asks tell me what I go pale I didn’t want this to happen she starts to grow impatient starts tapping her foot Creature what is he talking about? I look at Kit with a look I sigh I wanted you to find out on your own so it wouldn’t be a shock but me Kit Sheik and Aayla we are all Rogue Jedi’s like your father before you she looks at me and starts to cry it’s not bad soul she looks at me with her eyes tearing what do you mean? Well this is our philosophy we are not Jedi or sith we are neutral we believe it is the person and what he decides to do with the power that makes him either good or evil we are not bound by any laws like Kit and Aayla have found each other they can love and not be discriminated against I am Sorry Soul I wanted you to figure it out gradually not all at once. Soul looks at me and a rare thing begins to happen she smiled this is the one in a million chance to ever see but if she smiles you know she is very happy I have seen her do this only in my presence a few times every time I seen her soul threw her eyes and this was no different with her smile it always made me smile. I look to Kit we need to stop this threat he suddenly looks at me and says your human. Yes I replied I had to transform into this form, this is my other form I prefer my Hound form but this one is twice as strong as my hound form and I prefer my hound form more than the human form you all are the only ones to see this form of me and will be the only ones to see it Shiek replies he is that strong huh I reply yes I force pushed him out the window and took off with the others we must attack at once to defeat him I look at soul and think “I am not losing you again I would die before I let that happen” we left to the Station every step of the way were droids soul also talking to me the whole way so you all are Rogue Jedi? She asked me I replied yes I am sorry I did not tell you I wanted to but I didn’t want to hurt you she responds you could never hurt me not even in our sparing sessions I felt you holding back against me I knew you care for me more than a friend and I knew you wouldn’t disobey the counsel you followed the code and seeing you go with the Rogues you must be in the right Place so I am with you for the rest … but before she could finish the presence of the man was back he came into view and I step in front of everyone and state did you not have enough of me when you fell out that window? why don’t you go cry out to your master he replied oh I did Jedi Scum this sentence shot threw me I knew that statement from Malivictus he said that before I smiled is that what all your kind say Jedi Scum the last Sith to say that to me is dead on Redoubt so you are the one who killed Malivictus? said another sith who came from behind him who are you two? I reply why do you wan to know you won’t live long enough to remember them I replied on the contrary I want the so I know who to add to my death list I am guessing you are the one who force pushed my son out the window as well yes I replied impatient tell me your names!! I state good use your anger I replied you are a moron we are not normal jedi we are the Rouge we believe in both so that crap won’t work on us as it did on Anakin Skywalker again who are you I am Sadicious and this is teratreitious. Thank you now can we get started no he replied you are anxious to die. ha you aren’t killing anyone you are weaker then your apprentice odd oh he is not my apprentice he is my son and Malivictus was my other son a smirk came to my face so I get to kill the rest of the family oh by the way your other son was weak I beat him in my weaker form I hope you two can give me more of a challenge. You will die for that remark!! with that they drew there sabers and charged as did we I fought with the son along with Shiek and Soul while Aayla Kit and Skirata took on the father the battle teratreitious began with a force push towards Shiek which put him into a wall but this did not phase him he charged back into the battle sabers flying back and forth in the air we were more than a match for him Until Shiek was hit with another force push and threw into the air Shiek went through building after building he fell and was out cold soul took her eyes of the teratreitious for a sec and she was hit in the arm which she fell to the ground I saw this looked at the teratreitious and said big mistake I pull my other double saber out and the battle raged on teratreitious soon fell to one knee soon the head of teratreitious fell to the feet of the father I yell to Kit if they are ok yea but we could us your help I will be right there I yell to Shiek you ok no answer no time I go to Soul was getting up and look at her wound I am sorry soul she looks at me it’s just a cut and will just leave a scar that is all, go help the others and I never got to finish what I wanted o say before I was interrupted I am with you for the rest of my Life because I Love You I look at her a single Tear comes from my eye and I Reply I love you too. I look to the fight and the four of us take the Sadicious out in no time I transform back into my creature form and bend down and soul get’s on my back we walk over to Shiek who is just waking up I reply good to see you alive he replies yeah good to be we all laugh me and kit help shiek up and we all walk together with me and Soul holding each others hands and Kit and shiek say it’s about time we look at them and laugh we need to finish checking the station and the start on the temple yes we have much more to work on and I feel like those two weren’t our last enemy to face there will be more.
In despite of the fatalities of the Jedi and the sith in the battles we knew that the galaxy was safe until there is a new threat that was upon us, as we begin to exit the planet on the ships I start to remember I wonder if no don’t think of it. I radio to the others we need a place to start a new a place where rogues can co-exist on a planet with others but which one? I ask Aayla Secura Speaks how about Toola? only things there are Motmots, Snow Demons and Whipids also it is a planet of former Jedi K’Kruhk it is mainly tundra and snow with some oceans it will be a good place for us to start the Rogue Temple but isn’t that where they kept the Jedi fugitives after order 66 ? Aayla respond yes from what I heard from Chiloraul there might even be some still alive the more powerful Jedi were supposed to be there as prisoner to remain if we failed in which we did but you destroyed the creators of the clones and the machinces so they won’t be able to bring them back, but I didn’t catch all of what Aayla said because in the back of his mind I began to get a flash back of Her, he remembered her long white hair that went to her shoulders in which she usually had it braided on the sides her eyes blue/green in which it felt like her soul was in her eyes. He whispers one word “SOUL” he begins wondering if she had made it through the extermination of the Jedi the Dreaded order 66. What do I mean IF SHE MADE IT? Of course Master Soulrythm made it, she was one of the strongest Jedi I had ever known through the intense training me and here went through she was one I tried not to send to the medic soul and myself had a very strong bond I knew her presence even when she was far away on other planets but for some reason I can’t sense her now. Kit speaks Creature you still with us I respond yes, yes I am sorry I was just think of the past Shiek responds I know it hurts but you got to let the past go I respond you don’t understand If I find out that SHE is Dead I will Hunt every sith down and destroy them I won’t stop there I will dedicate my life in bringing her back she was one of none who understood me and felt as I felt, There was silence which felt like it took a millennium for Shiek to speak you feel that strongly towards who is it Master Creature you are referring to It’s Master Soulrythm Kit Stops I remember her you and soul were very close you two if it weren’t for the order more than likely would have gotten married I don’t know about that Kit I do Love her but I don’t know if she feels the same about me and here had one of the strongest bonds like you and Aayla. Shiek interrupts let’s set our coordinates for Toola and let’s go,
I respond yes let’s go in the last words before light speed Master Soulrythm I will find you now entering light speed think of nothing but her but I know of her father how will she react that I am now a rogue like her father before her God what do I say to such a beautiful person hey soul it’s great to see you hey just to let you know me kit Shiek and Aayla are rouges now! NO!!! That would kill her I need to let her know slowly that is the only way to let her know. It was decided to give her hints and let her figure it out on her own I just hope she doesn’t get upset that I am not a Jedi anymore but like her father but she doesn’t know that I care for her more than a friend as we arrive on the planet I speak we need to set up the rogue temple but I want to check out the Ithaqua Station to see if any Jedi are Still alive they all speak May The Force Be With You I leave the others I will send you a transmission If I require assistance I leave to go to the Ithaqua Station but I sense a Evil Presence stronger than everyone I had every faced even Chiloraul it felt like 10 of him he continues as he smiles I might even have to transform for this maneuver to work as I continue to get closer I feel two other presences one of a very familiar person It was Master Soulrythm and another but the other presence is one I had never felt before the presence was good so I entered the station and immediately attacked by droids they say to put you weapons down I respond today is not your lucky day they respond today is your lucky day this doesn’t compute you are under arrest and start to shoot at me big mistake I pull out my saber and they are finished within seconds as I leave them to go and get Soul and the other presence they were above me I force jumped up the stairs and arrived at the door in which Master Soulrythm was laying dormant I knock on the door her sweet voice responds who is there I sense a familiar presence bit I do not remember who it is that I am feeling I respond it is I Grand Master Jedi Creature of Death she responds oh my God I thought you were Dead with the others I respond there are others Kit Fisto and Aayla Secura and Twistedshiek as I let her out the door flies open with her coming out jumping into my arms she hugs me well you seem to be as strong as ever since the last time we met yes I have been fight in a lot of battles lately but, who is the other person in this cell it is Master Skirata ok I remember him but vaguely I let him out but as soon as I did a transmission begins to play are you stupid do you not know not to come her because I am the strongest known force user alive I respond are you really good then I will go down in legend in defeating you I am coming for my friends if you want to try and stop me come and get piece he then appears before me I feel his awesome power I put out my hand and flip it over so my palm shows I bring my fingers toward my hand back and forth he charged and fought I defended he was powerful as was I but not powerful enough I could not take much more of this I heard Soul yelling to fight and wondering if I was ok that was her always caring for her friends everytime one died she grew in the force, but there was nothing I could do he was defeating me kicking me in the face he punched me and force pushed me into the pillar I try my tail he grabs it and twirls me around like a towel and let me go I crash into the stairs shocked that my tail? my tail was blocked!!! exhausted from the fight I knew one and only one way to get out of this I stand up the man looks at me astonished that took such a beating but he thought there was nothing more I could do he must have figured that I was using the last of my strength to stand up boy was he wrong my body around me started to glow I was begging to transform into my human state my three head became one my tail shot up and my legs became two my eyes Glowed Green my hair Black I was a 6’2” human I looked at soul who blushed. I grew in twice in strength the man looked at me astonished and freaked, I begin to fight back I gain the upper hand I tell him I’d see him later and I force pushed him out of the window in which I seized the moment and told Soul and the other skirata to follow me he will be back and very pissed. I sent out a transmission to Shiek, kit and Aayla telling them that I had just encountered the most powerful sith in the galaxy or so he stated. but I told them I got soul and this other master called Skirata they both say never heard from him but bring him too it sounds as if we are going to need the help but there weren’t any others were master soul and master Skirata the only ones I didn’t see anyone else have time to search anymore I need to get soul and Skirata out of there I also didn’t feel any presence of any others in the station send me your coordinates, of course kit replied they sent the coordinates to me in which we followed and arrived but every step of the way I felt the evil presence was he stalking us no we are to good to be stalked we arrived to the shelter well the shelter for now. I look at Master Skirata and say I don’t remember you too well Master Skirata he replied you all are new to me as well I just finished my training before they executed order 66. Soul was looking at Kit and spoke I thought you were Dead I was until the sith made me into a clone in which I and Ki Adi Mundi was set to hunt Master Creature and Shiek in which we failed they killed Ki Adi Mundi Shiek was about to kill me before Creature stopped him and they converted me back to the light side well not exactly the way they had me come back was mentioning the name of my love Aayla he look sat Aayla and Smiles she smiles back Soul response but you can’t love your not supposed to it’s not the Jedi way he looks at her and then to me you didn’t tell her Creature soul asks tell me what I go pale I didn’t want this to happen she starts to grow impatient starts tapping her foot Creature what is he talking about? I look at Kit with a look I sigh I wanted you to find out on your own so it wouldn’t be a shock but me Kit Sheik and Aayla we are all Rogue Jedi’s like your father before you she looks at me and starts to cry it’s not bad soul she looks at me with her eyes tearing what do you mean? Well this is our philosophy we are not Jedi or sith we are neutral we believe it is the person and what he decides to do with the power that makes him either good or evil we are not bound by any laws like Kit and Aayla have found each other they can love and not be discriminated against I am Sorry Soul I wanted you to figure it out gradually not all at once. Soul looks at me and a rare thing begins to happen she smiled this is the one in a million chance to ever see but if she smiles you know she is very happy I have seen her do this only in my presence a few times every time I seen her soul threw her eyes and this was no different with her smile it always made me smile. I look to Kit we need to stop this threat he suddenly looks at me and says your human. Yes I replied I had to transform into this form, this is my other form I prefer my Hound form but this one is twice as strong as my hound form and I prefer my hound form more than the human form you all are the only ones to see this form of me and will be the only ones to see it Shiek replies he is that strong huh I reply yes I force pushed him out the window and took off with the others we must attack at once to defeat him I look at soul and think “I am not losing you again I would die before I let that happen” we left to the Station every step of the way were droids soul also talking to me the whole way so you all are Rogue Jedi? She asked me I replied yes I am sorry I did not tell you I wanted to but I didn’t want to hurt you she responds you could never hurt me not even in our sparing sessions I felt you holding back against me I knew you care for me more than a friend and I knew you wouldn’t disobey the counsel you followed the code and seeing you go with the Rogues you must be in the right Place so I am with you for the rest … but before she could finish the presence of the man was back he came into view and I step in front of everyone and state did you not have enough of me when you fell out that window? why don’t you go cry out to your master he replied oh I did Jedi Scum this sentence shot threw me I knew that statement from Malivictus he said that before I smiled is that what all your kind say Jedi Scum the last Sith to say that to me is dead on Redoubt so you are the one who killed Malivictus? said another sith who came from behind him who are you two? I reply why do you wan to know you won’t live long enough to remember them I replied on the contrary I want the so I know who to add to my death list I am guessing you are the one who force pushed my son out the window as well yes I replied impatient tell me your names!! I state good use your anger I replied you are a moron we are not normal jedi we are the Rouge we believe in both so that crap won’t work on us as it did on Anakin Skywalker again who are you I am Sadicious and this is teratreitious. Thank you now can we get started no he replied you are anxious to die. ha you aren’t killing anyone you are weaker then your apprentice odd oh he is not my apprentice he is my son and Malivictus was my other son a smirk came to my face so I get to kill the rest of the family oh by the way your other son was weak I beat him in my weaker form I hope you two can give me more of a challenge. You will die for that remark!! with that they drew there sabers and charged as did we I fought with the son along with Shiek and Soul while Aayla Kit and Skirata took on the father the battle teratreitious began with a force push towards Shiek which put him into a wall but this did not phase him he charged back into the battle sabers flying back and forth in the air we were more than a match for him Until Shiek was hit with another force push and threw into the air Shiek went through building after building he fell and was out cold soul took her eyes of the teratreitious for a sec and she was hit in the arm which she fell to the ground I saw this looked at the teratreitious and said big mistake I pull my other double saber out and the battle raged on teratreitious soon fell to one knee soon the head of teratreitious fell to the feet of the father I yell to Kit if they are ok yea but we could us your help I will be right there I yell to Shiek you ok no answer no time I go to Soul was getting up and look at her wound I am sorry soul she looks at me it’s just a cut and will just leave a scar that is all, go help the others and I never got to finish what I wanted o say before I was interrupted I am with you for the rest of my Life because I Love You I look at her a single Tear comes from my eye and I Reply I love you too. I look to the fight and the four of us take the Sadicious out in no time I transform back into my creature form and bend down and soul get’s on my back we walk over to Shiek who is just waking up I reply good to see you alive he replies yeah good to be we all laugh me and kit help shiek up and we all walk together with me and Soul holding each others hands and Kit and shiek say it’s about time we look at them and laugh we need to finish checking the station and the start on the temple yes we have much more to work on and I feel like those two weren’t our last enemy to face there will be more.