Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
Myspace is where I have been but now I'm back to rp!Tuesday&Thursday is the only time I can get on.
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 18, 2007 17:53:26 GMT -5
*Shivilow had been on the planet after the battle of Byss which the Jedi didn't know she stashed her clone's. She knew the secrets of the dark side and knew how to return to the land of the living. As her spirit enters her new clone that was in shackles. She let out a loud scream that sound like a mad person who has lost there minds. She hackled away for the Jedi's thought of her dead but her father taught her how to come back to life. She had many clones a wall of 15 to be exact the reason why this one was shackled. Was to protect the caretakers from dieing Shivilow would have to wait a month before she could free herself from these shackles. Only 2 weeks had gone by and yet she had turn into a mad woman and was raving mad. The blood she wanted was for her taking once she freed her mind from this torcher. She might be here for years if She couldn't let the force free her from the chains. The battles that she had fought was flowing through her head she wanted revenge. She thought about Shadow dweller,Luke Solo,and Darth Sinestra above them all.* "I will get them all for doing what they did to me for I shall have revenge!!!!!!!.. *She the hackled and thrashed about in her chains.* OOC. If you seen the new Harry Potter movie she has gone mentaly insane like Bellatrix Lestrange has.
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Paou Q
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Post by Paou Q on Jul 18, 2007 19:52:49 GMT -5
thats pretty cool Darth Shivilow cant w8 2 read the rest!!! ;D
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Post by jedi1life on Jul 19, 2007 9:43:37 GMT -5
awsome work shivilow can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
Myspace is where I have been but now I'm back to rp!Tuesday&Thursday is the only time I can get on.
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 19, 2007 10:22:56 GMT -5
Well i'm working on it just in the drafting process but when its done i'll let you all know.
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Post by My Name is Darth Vader... on Jul 19, 2007 11:35:41 GMT -5
[glow=red,8,300]I always knew you were a little crazy!
LOL
Nice story! Keep up the good work!
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Darth Torimo
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Post by Darth Torimo on Jul 19, 2007 15:39:45 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]I agree with everyone here, even my name is tater lol Very good stuff ya got there cuz, awesomeness [/glow]
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Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
Myspace is where I have been but now I'm back to rp!Tuesday&Thursday is the only time I can get on.
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Jul 19, 2007 17:08:08 GMT -5
A moment of insanity (Continued) *After what seemed years 5 years shivilow was in fact been shackled for nearly 2 years now. Deep in the cell she awaken herself up by the dreams that she had of being killed by a Jedi named Anakin Solo . Her beauty had be robed of her the darkside took total control of her appearances now. She torched herself for years and now she was beginning to fall into dispare. She had cut herself with the chains and blood was beginning to drip. She lean her head down and started to lick her wombs she created all by herself. Her eyes turned red for the blood satisfied her madness she created. The force began to roll in her like a storm growing on the planet of Telo's. Her anger,hate and her lust for power grew intensely with ever passing moment. The Shackles that held her for many years began to shake vigorously out of control. Then with a thunderus thud her right hand was freed from bondage.She let out a huge laughter for she had one free hand but not all just yet. She built up more force powers and with in another two minutes she was completely free. She looked around her as the caretakers began to bang on the door of where Shivilow was being held. She laughed again and started to fall to her knees. She had been weaken by the force not to mention the lost of blood from her own hands. She started to feel light headed and fell to the ground completely and with in moments was unconscience. After a Few more days she awoken from unconscienceness and found that she was still in the cell. The caretakers that where banging on the doors lie dead at her feet. Pools of their blood everywhere and right next to her foot was a butter knife that she used to kill them. She look around and at one of their feet she found a med pack and healed herself inflected wombs. She walked to the end of the room where the cell door was at and using the force threw one of the rocks at it. She tried several times and then after the 6th time throwing it at the door. Then the cell door finally busted open she was free once again. She came out stumbling for she was weak still. She hit the surface of Korriban and saw her ship right ahead of her. She started to walk towards it and let out one last insanely scream. "I'm finally free hahaha I can now find those Jedi's and kill them.
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Post by My Name is Darth Vader... on Jul 20, 2007 7:39:49 GMT -5
[glow=red,8,300] Nice story Shiv...
I'm glad you're free!
Sounds like you're more dangerous than before!
Cooooooooooool... [/glow]
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Admiral Vosh Chance
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Post by Admiral Vosh Chance on Jul 22, 2007 2:30:29 GMT -5
Wow. Sounds like Execute 66 was ordered like 50x... to one person... and all at the same time!! Destroy the Jedi scum!
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Post by uths16 on Aug 15, 2007 6:23:11 GMT -5
That was some good reading ;D
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Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
Myspace is where I have been but now I'm back to rp!Tuesday&Thursday is the only time I can get on.
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Aug 16, 2007 16:15:35 GMT -5
Thanks yall and it gose to show that I know how to write a good story.
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Post by Liana Habir on Aug 16, 2007 16:18:43 GMT -5
When's the next installment coming??
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Darth Shivilow™
Jedi Master
Myspace is where I have been but now I'm back to rp!Tuesday&Thursday is the only time I can get on.
Posts: 2,059
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Post by Darth Shivilow™ on Aug 16, 2007 17:50:09 GMT -5
soon as I can get rid of my writers block and not have things comeing up like going to a base ball game and worries about my Pell grant.
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Post by Darth Infectus on Apr 1, 2009 20:57:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] This story is so good... IM still thinking in awe lol. Oh and be a good girl and force kick that writers block out of your head .[/glow] -edit oh im sorry i diddnt notice how old this is well still it was a amazing story ;D
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